MaNan FF: Down The Memory Lane. 9th Chapter updated Page 11

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DOWN THE MEMORY LANE.



INTRODUCTION:

2 years since college got over. However, Things didn't end on a good note 2 years back and no one was in touch with each other except two or three. The decision of their future led to the destruction of their present that time. Well, Their lives were going Perfectly fine now. Those things didn't affect them now Untill the news of their friend getting Married came. That was surely a shocker! Not because their friend was getting married but because Maybe..Just Maybe..They will come face to face. Again. Uhh ,That would be awkward. Yeah, That means all of them are invited. It's not like that they fought cause of any misunderstandings or something. There were no fights back then..The decision was clear. The decision was made. But, What Was it?

What will happen when fate will bring them together, again? The whole college gang! Will they all be attending the function? It's their bestfriend's wedding afterall.


INDEX.

Introduction: Above.
Chapter 1- Page 1.
Chapter 2- Page 1.
Chapter 3- Page 2.
Chapter 4- Page 3.
Chapter 5-Page 4.
Chapter 6-Page 5.
Chapter 7-Page 7.
Chapter 8- Page 8.
Chapter 9- Page 11




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Chapter 1- Treasures of The Past.
A new day, A new beginning. That's what they say, right? Well, not in my case! For me, It was never a new day, a new beginning. Everyday was the same. Useless and Boring! Life is such a hectic, I swear! I mean, what kind of life is this? Work Work and Just Work!! If I tell this to someone, I know they will wonder how's that even possible. I'm the girl who has it all, right? The perfect job, well settled house and above all, a gorgeous face. Yeah, I know I'm gorgeous! Okay Forget that. I'm cute. Okay Okay, I am exaggerating. But only a little. Oh shit! I'm late. Sneha!! She must be waiting for me! I stepped out of my house and drove to the boutique. She was no where around. "She's at the back of the cafe!" I heard. "Okay, Thanks.." I said and immediately went to see her. I found her sitting at the table, huddled over tall cups of coffee and looking extremely serious. Well, she looked serious most of the time, anyway. But this was out-of-the-usual serious.

"So,hi!" I said, trying to act all cheerful while I peeled off my leather jacket.

"I wanted to talk to you about something. So, I chose to do it here in this cafe because it's a neutral ground. Not My place or yours, and I thought it might be less emotionally charged here than either of our apartments."

Whoa. My heard began to thump a little harder than usual. This sounded serious. Neutral Ground? less emotionally charged? like, what?

Wait.. is it about them? Shit, No!

"So umm, I don't know where to start from but.."

"Wait! What is it about? You're scaring the hell out me Sneha!" I said, in a serious way.

"See, Calm down first."

Wait, what? Calm down? Was she really asking me to Calm down? Grr, you gotta be kidding, man!

"Nandini?" She said. "Are you even listening to me? Pay Attention!" She continued.

"Yeah..Yes. Will you please break the suspense and speak up?"

"I know you will kill me after this but still.."

Now, She was really, like really scaring me.

"Speak up God Damnit!" I demanded.

"One-of-your-Friend-reached--me-and-asked-me-to-give-your-contact-details-and-I-Did." She said. She said this whole thing in one single breath.

What? My Friend? I knew who that might be because I literally had no friends except them. They were my ONLY Friends. I mean, they still are. But still.. In these two years, None of them tried to reach me then all of a sudden..What might have happened? After all, we mutually decided to call it off, right? And since then, none of us ever met. Forget meeting, we never even talked!

"Which Friend?" I asked.

"She didn't tell me her name."

She. Okay, fine. One thing was confirmed by now, that it was not him.

"Where did you meet her?" I asked.

"She came to the boutique yesterday in order to see you but you were not there."

Oh yeah. I was out of town.

"So?" I asked.

"So.. I told her that you're out of town. She insisted me to give your contact number. At first, I hesitated but she was really begging me to give your contact information, Nandini. I just couldn't say a no. I know, I have broken my promise but seriously, I tried alot."

That promise. Yeah.
Well, I came to Delhi 2 years back and started this boutique business with Sneha. She was the only person I knew in Delhi. Sneha was my class fellow in school. We were like, really close friends in school. She definitely proved that a friend in need, is a friend indeed!

"Nandini!!" Sneha screamed. Like, literally screamed.

"WHAT THE? I'm not a deaf Sneha!!"

"But you look like one. Dude, I'm talking to you!"

"Uhh. Okay. No problem, it's okay."

Sneha was stunned to hear this.
"No problem? It's okay? Have you lost it Nandini?"

Sneha is impossible. I mean, first she doesn't want me to get angry on her and now when I'm actually being calm, she is behaving like a total weirdo!

"Yeah. It's okay. I don't mind. You gave her my number..That's not a big deal!" I said calmly.

"You sure, right? I mean, I broke your promise."

"2 years have passed Sneha! It doesn't affect me anymore. And about that promise..Well, To be honest, Mujhe yaad bhi nahi tha. It's been 2 years Sneha, 2 years." I said.

"You Okay, right?"

"Uh-Uhh." I said, and Nodded.

Just when We were talking, My phone rang. "Oh. Excuse me."
"Sure" Said Sneha.

"Hello, Nandini Murthy Here. Who's this?"

"Nandu, it's me."

My eyes widened hearing the voice and my heart beat started to race. Thousands of flashback started flashing in my mind.

And..Psst! That's her!

There was a deadly silence for a while. I was shocked. I was happy to hear her voice after two long years though.

"Navya." I finally said, composing myself.

"Long time, han?"

"Too long! Two Years." I said.

"How are you?"

"Fine..You?"

"Same here.." She replied.

And again, there was a pin drop silence.

"So?" I said, breaking the silence.

"Nandini-I'm-Getting-Married!" She said in one go.

I was shocked hearing this. "WHAT?" I cried.

"Yes! I'm getting Married Next week!"

"Married? To whom? What does he do? Is he a good guy? Navya! You know You're such a fool at choosing the right person. You don't know anything about people, do you? And duh, You're telling me now? Just a week before your marriage? like seriously?"

Wait..what? What did I just say? Shit Shit Shit! Nooo!

"Don't feel embarrassed now. I knew that was coming! It's okay to speak your heart out, Nandini." She said.

"Anyways.. who is he?" I asked.

"That I'm not telling you! Come, See him yourself!"

"What? Come where? What are you talking about?"

"Nanduuu! You have to come to my wedding. Next week. Be there."

"Wait! No! I mean..I'm busy next week"

"I know you aren't. Stop Making excuses."

Uh! She knew me so well.

"You're coming Nandini and that's final!"

"Sab arahey hain?" I asked in a low voice. I was wishing that she says no. I didn't want to face them again. It would be so awkward for me. For all of us.

"Pata nahi.." She said.

"Pata Nahi?"

"Yeah..Mukti said she has got some fashion show to attend, Alya is busy with her photography club, Cabir has also not confirmed yet and Dhruv..He's busy with the dancing and all!"

"And?" I asked.

"And Who?" She asked.

What the hell Nandini? What are you doing? Not him, please!

"Naah! Nothing. Well, I'll see. I'll let you know, okay?" I said.

"Manik, right?"

And That was it. One name. Thousands of memories down the lane!

"He might not come. You know, He's a superstar now!"

Yeah, Right. Manik Malhotra the Superstar.

"Great! That's where he belong."

"So, you're in right?" She asked.

"I'll let you know."

"Okay then..Bye?"

No, Please! Talk to me. I so wanted to say that but I just couldn't.

"Yeah..Bye.." I said and Disconnected the call.

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Pheww! Done! So, How was it? Good? Boring? Average? Please let me know. Should I continue this? I mean, is it even interesting?

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Nice start

They all will meet after 2 year..

It's remind of movie YJHD i loved that movie...

About story.. it's looking very interesting

I m so excited when they will meet..

U penned navya n nandini talks beautifully..

Uhm.. manik the superstar.. but i know he will also.. come..



looking forward to read more... post soon.. baby...



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Posted: 9 years ago
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Awesome
It reminded me of yjhd too
Manik is a super star
What happened in the past
Update soon
Pm me
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nice update and update soon dear
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Chapter 2- Goa It is!

I was still standing there holding the phone. Even though I could move physically, I felt paralyzed mentally and emotionally. What Just Happened? Was this really Navya, The girl who used to be my best friend. The Girl who could never make any decision without taking my opinion. She's getting Married?

"This is so exciting." Sneha said loudly.

"It's really not." I assured her.

"So?" She asked.

"So? So Nothing."

"You're going, right?"

"Well," I replied, "I don't think so."

"Nandini!" Sneha Cried. "You can't be doing this yaar. I mean, It's you best friend's wedding!"

Wait, what? Best Friend? What did she just say?

"Okay Okay.." Said Sneha, "I mean, Your EX Best friend."

"Sneha Please. You're making no sense right now So just Shut up and move." I said.

"Nandini! Are you nutss!?!" She cried again and held me by my shoulders. She looked straight in my eyes and said, "Look, I know. I Understand. But you know what? You should go! See, I really have no idea why you guys just parted your ways but I certainly know one thing."

What? What does she know? I never told her anything, Did I?

"What?" I asked.

"In these two years, One person who has always tried to reach you is Navya. But, It was you! It was you who was running away. Running away from her, Running away from I don't know what! "

Sneha was right. Navya tried reaching me many times. She had come to the boutique several times but I always asked Sneha to send her away by making some excuse.

"Don't you think you should be with her, On her big Day?" Asked Sneha.

"Fine," I said as I dialed a number. "Wait a minute. What..What are you doing?" Asked Sneha anxiously.

I gave her that 'Oh please just shutup' Look.

"Hey Hi. It's Me, Nandini. Woh.. I..I am coming." I said and disconnected the call. Sneha was just giving me confusing looks all this while. "What?" asked looking at her.

"Who was that?"

"Navya. I'm going."

"To her wedding?" Asked Sneha Excitedly.

"Where else?" I said.

"Oh My God, Nandini!! I'm so happyyy!" She said and hugged me tightly.

"When are you leaving then?" She asked.

"Tomorrow Morning. The wedding is in Goa!"

"GOA!!!" She screamed. "OH MY GOD NANDINI! THIS IS SO PERFECT!"

"Whoa Whoa. Calm down. What's so special about it?" I asked.

"Everything! Everything about Goa is just so Special! You're Definitely gonna have a superb time there!"

"Yeah, Right. Superb!" I said sarcastically.

"So, go! Get Started. Start Your packing. I'll leave now." She said.

"Yeah. Okay, Bye. Miss me." I said and hugged her.

"Oh please, Nandini. It's gonna to be so much fun without you, man. I mean, There will be no one to give orders! Yayiee." She said.

I smiled at her and finally waved her a goodbye. I knew no matter what she says, she will definitely miss me.

Whoa, Nandini Murthy. 2 years!

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So Finally, one by one, The nights between their separated cities were joining to the night that was going to unite them.

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The Next Morning was different. There was something special about it. I was extremely nervous though. Oh shit! It's 8:30 A.M! I have a flight to catch. I immediately stood up and went to take a shower.

After getting ready, I picked up my bags and left for the airport. All I was thinking about in the flight was about them and moreover, about HIM. Though I knew that he would not come. After all, he's not just Manik anymore. He is Manik Malhotra, The Super Star now. But still, what if he comes? No. It's just impossible. I saw his interview on the television few days back. There he said that his Film's shooting is going to start next week So yeah, He's not gonna come. Urghh! Stop! Stop thinking about him Nandini.

Finally, The tiring journey came to an end. I called Navya and she said that she has sent a driver to pick me up. I sat in the car and we reached a beautiful, like absolutely beautiful Resort.

"Yahan?" I asked.

"Jee. Yahan. Chaliye, Navya Madam apka intezar kar rahi hain." The driver told me.

The Driver picked up my bags and I followed him. As I was looking around and checking out the resort, Someone came from behind and hugged me tightly. "NANDINIII!!!!" The person shouted. I looked to see who it was. It was Navya. I was so, so happy to see her.

"Nandu Nandu Nandu," She said with excitement, "Humay pata tha tum zaroor aogi. Nanduu! Tum soch nahi sakti hum kitna khush hain!"

"Mujhe to aana he tha Navya." I said with a wide smile on my face.

"I missed you Nandini." She said, as a lonely tear escaped her eye.

"I missed you more." I replied holding her hand.

"Tumhe pata hai nandu, in do salon me, Jab bhi humari zindagi me koi khushi ati thi ya koi museebat, hum humesha tumhe yad kartay thay. Apni nandu ko yad kartay thay.." She said.

So, it was not just me. It happened with Navya too.

"We had to take different paths..Maybe it was written in our fate." I replied.

"Nandu, We took different paths in life but you know what? We all took a little of each other everywhere.. Everywhere we went."

She was right. She was do damn right!

"Hmm.." I said, with a little smile on my face.

"Acha chalo, pehle tum apnay kamre me jao. Freshen up yourself. Uskay bad, Hum khoob sari batain karainge." She said with her epic 'Yo Navya' Style.

I giggled and said, "Theek hai.."

"Ye lo," She said as she handed me the keys, "Ye tumhare kamre ki keys hain. Go upstairs and turn left. First room it is."

I took the keys and headed towards my room. What a beauty! I said, as I entered my room. This room is so amazing! Oh My god, that balcony though. I said, and headed towards it and BOOM! I bumped into someone.

"Hey you! Don't you have eyes! DUH!! Idiot." I said without looking at the person, as I fell on the floor.

"Oh Hello, Don't YOU have eyes? And wait..What are doing in my--"

"TUM?" we screamed in unison as we finally saw each other.

"WHAT THE HELL! WHO'S THERE IN MY ROOM AND WHY ARE YOU PEOPLE SHOUTING!" Someone screamed from inside the washroom.

"Wait..What? Who's there in the washroom?" Both of us said together in a state of confusion as well as shock.


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Omg, what? I started writing this chapter at 12 am and completed it in two hours! :O
Anyways, How was it? Who did Nandini bump into and who is there in the washroom? Hehe. Guess Guess! Anyways, Do tell me whether you're liking this story or not and should I continue this. Will be waiting ! :)

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Hey Guys. This is to inform you all that I will not be updating this story on INDIA FORUMS from now onwards because very less people are interested in this. So, Take care and enjoy the MaNan FF Can't let you go Only! 😃
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Originally posted by: Mananstories

NOTE.

Hey Guys. This is to inform you all that I will not be updating this story on INDIA FORUMS from now onwards because very less people are interested in this. So, Take care and enjoy the MaNan FF Can't let you go Only! 😃


Hey! I just came across ur story!
Ur writing style is really good!
See don't get disheartened just because u aren't getting reviews and likes!
This take time and u being new here and first story is sth huge so don't lose hope so early... Things will speed up slowly!
Don't give up! Write what u fell like expressing and slowly and steadily readers will acknowledge ur story!
Guud luck princess <3<3
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Okay, as you say! Let's give it another try. :)


Chapter 3- Our Roots will be Tangled.

"Wait..What? Who's there in the washroom?" Both of us said in a state of confusion as well as shock.

"Come out of the washroom right now. How dare you go inside!" The other person with me shouted kicking the door of the washroom.

"What Idiots! It's my room, I can go wherever I want to. Do you own this washroom or what?"

"I can't believe this! What the hell is going on?" I Cried.

"Exactly! What are you doing here?" The person with me asked.

"What do you mean by that? I'm invited!" I replied.

"Duh-Uh. I know that! I mean, you weren't coming, right? Nandini Murthy was busy, wasn't she?"

"Yeah she was. But not more than Mukti Vardhan. You had to attend some fashion show, right? I mean, how did you manage? Time kaisay nikala?"

"Yeah I had to but then I decided to come here. Do you have any problem with that?"

"Problem? No, Not at all. It's an honour to stand with you, Ms Mukti. I mean, I'm on the cloud 9! Yay. Mukti Wardhan, The famous fashion designer is standing with me. Omg Ma'am!! Autograph please?" I said, acting all excited.

Mukti kept silent for a while and then finally said, "Hogaya?"

We were looking at each other angrily and suddenly we started to laugh.

"Oh God Mukti, you're still the same!!" I said, as I hugged her.

"And so are you!!" She replied back.

"OH MY GOD. MUKTI AND NANDINI!!!" Someone screamed. We turned to look who it was and to our surprise, it was Alya. Yes! She was inside the washroom all this while.

As soon as she saw us, she came running and hugged both of us. It was a perfect moment!

In that particular moment I realized that this is what I was missing. This feeling, This warmth, This Happiness. Everything about that moment was so perfect. So amazing. So Beautiful.

"I can't believe this. Am I dreaming? God. Somebody pinch me please!" Alya said, with excitement.

"Hum karen pinch?" Said someone. It was Navya!

"Meeting after 2 years and that too on your friend's wedding. That sounds so funny yet so amazing." I said.

True that!" Said Mukti

"2 saal..Long time!" Sighed Navya.

"But growing apart doesn't change the fact that for long time, we grew side by side; Our roots will always be tangled & Trust me, I'm glad for that!" Said Alya, with a smile on her face.

Everyone was changed but one thing was still common between all of us, that no matter how much we deny, we all missed each other more than words can express. Even though there was an awkward silence between all of us, but still, we were happy. The fact that we were together, was making us happy. It felt like we're back to home, after a two years long journey.

"Toh? Chalein?" Asked Navya addressing us. Us as in, Mukti me and Alya.

"Kahan?" I asked.

"Aj hamara shagun hai." Said Navya excitedly.

(For those who don't know about this function. Shagun is basically a pre wedding function. The girl's family visit the groom's family carrying the "Tikka" Materials and wrapped gifts.)

"WHAAT!?! AJ? DUDE!! ARE YOU MAD OR WHAT?" Shouted Mukti.

"Ya Man! Look at us! We just reached today. We look so bad! Eww. No, I'm not going like this!" Said Alya.

"Toh hamne kab kaha abhi jana hai? Rat ko hai function or tumlogon ko nahi jana to sahi hai, phir na bolna kay dulha say nahi milaya.." Said Navya, with a naughty expression.

Dulha? My eyes widened hearing that.

"Nahi Nahi, hum ayenge. We will come!" I said in one single breath.

"Theek hai! Phir 8 bajay ready rehna!"

Saying this, Navya turned to leave. "Aik Minute Navya, suno!" Said Mukti Immediately.

Navya turned and asked, "Han bolo?"

"Wo..um..Cabir or Dhruv nahi arahay?" She asked in a low voice.

"Cabir ka kuch pata nahin and dhruv is --

"Hows that even possible kay Dhruv na aye?" Someone said loudly.

All of us immediately turned back to see who it was. "DHRUVVV!!!!" Shouted Mukti. She ran towards him and hugged him.

"Mujhe pata tha tu zaroor ayega!" She continued.

"Obviously" He said and looked towards Alya and smiled. She didn't respond back and was standing there quietly.

"Hi" He said addressing me.

"Hey.." I replied.

"Hi, Alya?" He said looking towards Alya.

She just smiled and looked away.

"Toh Dhruv, hum tumhe bhe batadete hain. Aj rat hamara shagun hai, 8 bajay tayyar rehna. Neeche hall me hai." Said Navya.

"Okay!" Said Dhruv.

"Chalo ab tumsab tayyari karo sirf 2 ghantay rehgaye hain.." Said Navya.

All of us nodded. Dhruv and Navya left the room.

Finally, we were ready. We left the room and headed towards the Main hall. Just when were walking, someone bumped into Mukti and she fell on the floor. "Hey you! Watch it!" She shouted.

"I'm sorry.." The person said and left.

"Hey wait! Hey you! Waittt. Apna yeh samaan to letay jao!" She shouted but the person had already left. "What an idiot!" She said.

There was a huge box lying on the floor. "Itna bara box! Ismein kia hosakta hai?" I asked.

"Wait, I'll see!" Said Mukti.

"But Mukti, kuch personal hua toh?" I said.

"Who cares?" She replied and opened the box.

"WHAT THE HELL!" Mukti Cried.

"Kia hua? What happened?" Asked Alya.

"Look at this! There's a guitar inside this." She said and took out the guitar.

I was stunned to see that Guitar and Pfft..Memories starting flashing in my mind, AGAIN!

"This Guitar.. This is so much like-

"Alya, NO! This is just a random guitar." Mukti said.

"But Mukti look, there's a note. See!" Said Alya.

I immediately picked up the note. My facial expressions literally changed after reading that.

It Said, "Missed the Monster?"

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Very interesting story would love to read more Plz update soon!!!!

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