MaNan Series of OS:~ SHOT 4 page 26 (8/4) - Page 15

Originally posted by: mishshergill

Hmm I did think of that too lately!

I will surely work on it and see if things could work out!

Thnx for the suggestion Rahul

hey it will surely work
please make it little funny with romance and fights, all mixture make it interesting
please don't give only romance can't digest too sweetness 😃😃
its a suggestion😃😃

U can write os about Manan relationship in others POV
Like FAB 5,even Harshad,Nyonika
How they think about their relation
Every shot will be one's POV

Originally posted by: Mr_Rahul

hey it will surely work
please make it little funny with romance and fights, all mixture make it interesting
please don't give only romance can't digest too sweetness 😃😃
its a suggestion😃😃

Originally posted by: rockstarlover

U can write os about Manan relationship in others POV
Like FAB 5,even Harshad,Nyonika
How they think about their relation
Every shot will be one's POV

Originally posted by: mishshergill

Yeah u shouldnt be thankful she didn't killl me coz she isn't being dayawan balki she is selfish... Coz agar I was dead who should have handled her wedding shopping tantrums! Huh!!!

And jab tak mere barri aye hi she would have a complete porch filled with her hundreds of children's so mere gays or she will bee damn busy!😆😆

aaa!!!!! I gotta reply... Lolzzz actually i'm too lazily to type a comment then never check...i saw u also replied previous update also.. So sweet of u...but when i saw that date expired for my reply...so commented..so thoughtful i am... :p
poor u !!! shopping such a pain...ufff ...Allah save u from this disaster...hehehe...but idea superb to irritate u... U also take a treat... ;) u also made her family planning... She will be main reason for overpopulation!!!! When u'll get married she might be become granny possiblity hai...

Originally posted by: mishshergill

Hmm... Cool!

Lemme see if i could give it shape as shot!

Thnx 4 suggestion divtan

Originally posted by: etuu

aaa!!!!! I gotta reply... Lolzzz actually i'm too lazily to type a comment then never check...i saw u also replied previous update also.. So sweet of u...but when i saw that date expired for my reply...so commented..so thoughtful i am... :p
poor u !!! shopping such a pain...ufff ...Allah save u from this disaster...hehehe...but idea superb to irritate u... U also take a treat... ;) u also made her family planning... She will be main reason for overpopulation!!!! When u'll get married she might be become granny possiblity hai...

Originally posted by: divtan

I never told u, but my name is Divya :)

Umm. .me kya suggest karu. .
How about building a bro-sis bond between manik an mukti to tease nandu. .?or

nandu opts to work being married and views about it from family. .?

I think you should continue yarr