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piyu008

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Posted: 9 years ago

#131

Can 't believe that was yhe same manik who used to be all shy types😆

gosh that kiss was something☺️

n that too in flight😳

it was amazing chappy ever..loved it

update soonish😳😳

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vaisnit

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Posted: 9 years ago

#132

Nice good awesome better best everything

I enjoy reading it

Superb

Update soon

Waiting for next chappy eagerly

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etu

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Posted: 9 years ago

#133

finally I get some time... !!! may Allah bless me to read more craziness stuffs of your... actually I'm wondering that your friend didn't kill you yet... hehehe hey plzzz don't kill our beloved lazy writer... :p she actually trying to make your new journey special her own unique writing style... ^_^ when her turn will be come na then you take your revenge with high interests!!!!! :v
plzz don't try to use nandini's trick of erotica novels ... :v
where are you getting all these crazy ideas of your??? l was laughing like hell...tigress nandu was become a meow when the revelation of manik can speak haryani... thanks for the translation...
the explanation of reading erotica novel was hilarious... manik also getting a chance showing off his teasing side...
waiting for next craziness of your... update soon... & also update your collab...

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me-and-u

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Posted: 9 years ago

#134

Hahaha...
OMG...exam
karab jane ka ghum..
buladia my god..i am
loving this bold nandu..
and shy manik...
jealous manik are always
BEST...saara stress nikal..
dia i love it...hehehe..

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Username padhlo

@mishshergill

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Posted: 9 years ago

#135

Originally posted by: etuu
finally I get some time... !!! may Allah bless me to read more craziness stuffs of your... actually I'm wondering that your friend didn't kill you yet... hehehe hey plzzz don't kill our beloved lazy writer... :p she actually trying to make your new journey special her own unique writing style... ^_^ when her turn will be come na then you take your revenge with high interests!!!!! :v
plzz don't try to use nandini's trick of erotica novels ... :v
where are you getting all these crazy ideas of your??? l was laughing like hell...tigress nandu was become a meow when the revelation of manik can speak haryani... thanks for the translation...
the explanation of reading erotica novel was hilarious... manik also getting a chance showing off his teasing side...
waiting for next craziness of your... update soon... & also update your collab...

Yeah u shouldnt be thankful she didn't killl me coz she isn't being dayawan balki she is selfish... Coz agar I was dead who should have handled her wedding shopping tantrums! Huh!!!

And jab tak mere barri aye hi she would have a complete porch filled with her hundreds of children's so mere gays or she will bee damn busy!😆😆

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Username padhlo

@mishshergill

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Posted: 9 years ago

#136

Hiee peepz!

First of all, THANKYOU GUYS! For making these os series mega for not only me but tanya too! Srsly your comments were soo killer that i used them a weapon to tease her till death!!! Thanx for that actually!! They gave mere so brownies point moments I made a point then itself to thank you people for that...

Secondly, guys! I really don't have any specific ideas for series further they are mostly 'NanMuk'

If you guys have something or some situations or whatever you want me to write it's an open request os update!

If there is non by your side, then I will be updating and epilogue and ending the series by tommorow!

Stay happy stay blessed

Mishshergill

Edited by mishshergill - 9 years ago

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_MonsteR_Stuff_

@_MonsteR_Stuff_

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Posted: 9 years ago

#137

hey you can start this OS SERIES like
you make manan OLD like 70 80 years old
and then start giving ONE SHOTS in each SHOT they recalled their journey or one special moment they spend from falling in love to till date
like this u have got many SHOTS

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divtan

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Posted: 9 years ago

#138

Actually u should continue

Don't over extend...

But make it something like down the memory lane..with each memory as OS and add some 5-6 more and in the epilogue show that now they r happy in their life and we should not keep interfering in their private matters anymore...

Something like that maybe?

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Username padhlo

@mishshergill

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Posted: 9 years ago

#139

Originally posted by: Mr_Rahul
hey you can start this OS SERIES like
you make manan OLD like 70 80 years old
and then start giving ONE SHOTS in each SHOT they recalled their journey or one special moment they spend from falling in love to till date
like this u have got many SHOTS

Hmm I did think of that too lately!

I will surely work on it and see if things could work out!

Thnx for the suggestion Rahul

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Username padhlo

@mishshergill

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Posted: 9 years ago

#140

Originally posted by: divtan
Actually u should continue
Don't over extend...
But make it something like down the memory lane..with each memory as OS and add some 5-6 more and in the epilogue show that now they r happy in their life and we should not keep interfering in their private matters anymore...
Something like that maybe?

Hmm... Cool!

Lemme see if i could give it shape as shot!

Thnx 4 suggestion divtan

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