MaNan Series of OS:~ SHOT 4 page 26 (8/4) - Page 13

That was an amazing update
Nandu muttering curses in haryanvi lol...
She was reading a novel so that she could ana mukti's ques ... Hahahahhahaha
That too while sitting next to manik
Omg manik speaking haryanvi ... Shocking...
The kissing scene was super hottt
Amazingly written
Thnkz 4 the pm

Awesome... That was just way tooo good...

update was hillarious!!! awesome one!!!
Nandini was clearly underestimating manik with both haryanvi language n her misconception with him being useless!!!
Seriously!!! Nandini reading an erotic novel n tht too sitting right beside her husband!!! like seriously????????
'Oh' thats great... atleast you are good at theory if not practically!!!! I just bursted into fits of laughter as soon as i read tht.. hillarious!!!
get a grip on urself even if ur husband is completely useless!! I had another fits of laughter there
so atlast manik snapped back at nandini with haryanvi language making her shocked !!!
loved nandini's comeback to manik's questions!! friends hote hi isiliye hain!! to share our secrets of life with!!! God I miss my friends so much!!!!
nandini kind of provoked him for getting the action out of him...The kiss was HOT n his assault very torturous!!!! thts wht u get for provoking manik malhotra!!!!
loved d way he changed her misconceptions... Such a tease manik is!!!!!!
Mukti seriously gifted tht book to nandini??? damn tht girl n her ways!! I would seriously like to have a best friend like her!!! all in all a superb n hillarious update!!!!
do update as soon as possible!!!
n im happy you are back with darbadar dil!!!! looking forward to read it!!!
take care!!

Originally posted by: alinaansari

update was hillarious!!! awesome one!!!
Nandini was clearly underestimating manik with both haryanvi language n her misconception with him being useless!!!
Seriously!!! Nandini reading an erotic novel n tht too sitting right beside her husband!!! like seriously????????
'Oh' thats great... atleast you are good at theory if not practically!!!! I just bursted into fits of laughter as soon as i read tht.. hillarious!!!
get a grip on urself even if ur husband is completely useless!! I had another fits of laughter there
so atlast manik snapped back at nandini with haryanvi language making her shocked !!!
loved nandini's comeback to manik's questions!! friends hote hi isiliye hain!! to share our secrets of life with!!! God I miss my friends so much!!!!
nandini kind of provoked him for getting the action out of him...The kiss was HOT n his assault very torturous!!!! thts wht u get for provoking manik malhotra!!!!
loved d way he changed her misconceptions... Such a tease manik is!!!!!!
Mukti seriously gifted tht book to nandini??? damn tht girl n her ways!! I would seriously like to have a best friend like her!!! all in all a superb n hillarious update!!!!
do update as soon as possible!!!
n im happy you are back with darbadar dil!!!! looking forward to read it!!!
take care!!

Lovely chap
Fanx 4 pm n cntinue soon

Ty for d pm...

Omg girl, i just read all the 3 parts in one go

Hey sorry for late commenting yr

Just read last 2 part

Awesome

Very different concept yr

Really
N kiss was unexpected totally

Keep it up dear
Do pm me next part pretty pretty please

Vidhi

I can't tell you how cute these small series of OS are! They all have a different story & certain different uniqueness in it's character's.
This Finally Moment made me laugh as well as blush.
Nandini Murthy sitting next to a Manik Malhotra reading erotic novels & dropping of hints about the IT Moment is surely not the Nandini we know. But this bold Nandini has a different side which I loved.
Their Kiss or Mini Makeout with Manik making her realise that she solely belongs to him & also showing her he's better way better than Gideon!

Originally posted by: Cooldude101

Congratulations Tanya, for your impending marriage and to you our dear author, to make us a part of both of your's journey.
I would be lying if I had said that I didn't reread this, because this is gold.
I laugh out half of the times and the other times, I'm trying to hide my blushing face.
Reading an erotica novel, sitting next to a certain Manik Malhotra and waiting for action, this is certainly a Nandini we do not know, as I see that this has been characterized on someone, I feel sorry not to know you personally.
The kiss or the mini-makeout session was HOT!
Manik and Nandu are as ready as they will ever be to bring practical into theoretical.
(Sorry, If my comment offends anyone of you in anyway.)

Not at all!!!! Actually that was the sweetest wish and comment evaa!!
Thanqu from tanya and my side!

Bless you <3