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Posted: 9 years ago
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Originally posted by: Ferns_angiee

accept shivani there is no one's else pic

I updated Maya, Adithya and Arohi's as well. Was there any prblms in viewing the pics?
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Hi there dears. Thanks for welcoming me back and thank you so much for reading my story as well. So here is the next chap as promised. Enjoy!😃
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CHAPTER 10

Malhothra mansion.

Manik was angry. Nandini didn't bother to finish the job he assigned her nor did she ask for permission to leave. God this girl surely does test my patience'.

He had a quick dinner and was rolling about on his bed trying to sleep. Something wasn't quite right. 5 mins later he heard someone knock on his door. Who could it be at this time of the night?'

He opened the door to see the worried face of Maya.

"Manik, Nandini hasn't reached home yet. Her chachi just called me. Do you have any idea where she is?"

Manik felt blood drain from his face. Dread filled him, his mind conjuring up worst scenarios. Without another word he took his car keys and rushed out of the house. He drove like a mad man. He lost her once. He was not going to let it happen again.

The car stopped in front of his company. The watchmen were startled to hear him barking at them. He rushed to her table and found that her bag was still there. He ordered a thorough search if the building. He himself was running up and down the stairs searching for her.

The searched almost everywhere but there was no trace of her.

"Sir, we've searched everywhere. She is not here" a brave watchman said.

Manik ruthlessly grabbed him by the collor of his shirt. " what did you say? Huh? She is still here. Search again and keep searching till you find her. Do you understand?"

"ye..yes sir"

Manik tried to calm himself. He had to think. His mind flew back to the time when both of them got locked up in the store room...store room. They hadn't checked the basement yet. Manik rushed down the stairs three at a time.

The store room door was locked. He didn't have the patience to get the keys from the others. So he shoved himself against it finally breaking it open.

He saw a figure lying on the floor of the dark room. It was Nandini. He cradled her in his lap. He face was unusually pale and her hands were cold.

"Nandini...Nadini pls open your eyes." There was no response. Maniki was totally freaked out. Without wasting any more time, he carried her to his car and strapped her up.

He didn't know what possessed him to take her to his home rather the hospital. Well, his sister was doctor. He knew she'll take care of her.

...

Maya was pacing across the living room. She badly wanted to go after Manik, but God knows where he went the way he did. It was getting late and Adithya was about to go searching for both of them when they heard a car approaching.

Maya saw Manik rushing in with an unconscious Nandini in his arms. He told her how he found her unconscious in the store room. Manik gently placed her on his bed. Maya went into her doctor mode and began her work. After a few mins Maya had her vitals back to normal. Nandini was now sleeping peacefully.

Maya looked up to see her brother's face dripping with worry. She placed a reassuring hand on his shoulder and said " Don't worry. She is absolutely fine. Woh bas so rahi hain"

He just nodded without meeting her eyes. She understood what he felt and left them alone.

He looked at her lying on his bed peacefully. Her eyes closed and her breathing even. The last hour made him realize how much she mattered to him. There was no point in denying it any further. He sat on a chair near her. His hands slowly stroked her soft hair, her eyes, her cheeks trying to memorize every feature of her face.

"What have you done to me Nandini?" He asked her sleeping form. He didn't know when he fell asleep, his head on her pillow close to her own and their fingers intervined...

Nandini felt the morning rays stinging her eyes and tried to clear her clouded mind. She tried to make sense of her surroundings. Before she could figure out where she was she felt a hot breath on her cheeks. She turned to her side to see Manik sleeping peacefully beside her. He had her hand clasped possessively in his. Nandini felt her eyes fill. After all these years after all that had happened he still cared for her. Her other hand slowly reached him. She stroked his hair, her finger entangling in it.

" I'm sorry Manik for everything..." she whispered.

...

This was how Maya found them. She gave them a few more minutes of privacy before deciding that Nandini's medicines couldn't wait any longer.

" How are you feeling now?" she asked her.

"I'm fine...main kahan..?" she stutterd. Manik jerked awake when he heard her voice. They looked deep into each other's eyes answering every unasked questions.

Maya was standing there watching the couple lose in each other's eyes. After a few seconds she cleared her throat making them break their eyelock. Manik stood up abruptly and said

" Di, I'll be there downstairs" and rushed out of the room with a final glance at Nandini.

Maya chuckled at her brother's antics. " He is so much like our dad. Dil pe kuch hota hain aur muh pe kuch aur. Don't tell him I told you but he is an emotionaly challenged person" Maya whispered to Nandini.

Nandini just laughed and said " I know"

...

Manik was at the dining table drinking his morning coffee. Adithya sat opposite to him reading the morning newspaper.

" good morning saale sahib"

" Morning jiju" he said.

Adithya watched Manik's restless eyes. He knew exactly how he felt.

"Women have us men wrapped around their little finger don't they?" he said

Manik looked up at his brother in law, surprised at his abrupt question.

" Huh?"

"We think we'll be fine without them but as soon as we lose them we realize how wrong we were. Don't worry Manik. Yeh sab hota hain sabke saath. Your sister gave me a hard time as well... Don't tell her I told you this, but she was totally worth it." Adithya said smiling at his wife who was now coming down the stairs.

"And one more thing" he said "not everyone gets a second chance."

...

Manik was pondering over his jiju's spontaneous bit of advice. After making up his mind he walked into his room to check on Nandini. When he found her she was standing swaying slightly as if she was about to lose her balance.

"What do you think you are doing?"

Nandini heard his angry voice and jerked losing her balance. She waited to feel the hard floor but instead felt a pair of strong arms steadying her. She looked into the pair of deep brown eyes looking at her with concern. Suddenly he picked her up and placed her on the bed. She was shocked by his sudden gesture.

"Don't you dare get up from the bed unltil I ask u to." He said warning her.

Aiyaapa! What am I going to do with him. Har baath pe threaten karna zarooro hain?!' She thought looking at him with a pout.

Oh God why does she have put up her cute puppy dog face? No manik. Control . I'm sure she doesn't have a clue about what she is doing to you'

" Par mujhe ghar jaana hain. Chachi will be worried.."

"Chachi ko inform kar liya hain. So no need to keep arguing with me. Now shut up and take rest" he said. " yeah and one more thing. You are fired."

"Huh?" Nandini was confused.

Manik rolled his eyes like it was the most obvious thing in the world. " you are no longer my spot girl. Do whatever you want do with the album but I don't wanna see you anywhere near my cabin again."

Nandini blinked. I'm no longer his spot girl. I got the album deal. That's a good thing right?!'. Slowly a smile crept into her face. Stupid arrogant Malhothra!

Just then her phone rang. He eyes lit up when she saw the screen. " hello... Aryaman. How are you? Yeah I'm fine. Tum kahan ho?.." Nandini was happily chatting away unaware of a pair of narrowed eyes shooting daggers at her.

Oops! Ab Manik ki bari!

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Edited by crystalfairy95 - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago
#83
Ohh God I was waiting for this update since long...
Finally mila...
Manik jus frgv her, find out what went wrong. Probe, but dnt gv up on her, she had her reasons too, trust her...
Plssshhh

Masst update :)
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Posted: 9 years ago
#84
beautiful update...
waiting for more manan..
pls continue soon...
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Posted: 9 years ago
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AWESOME UPDATE...
FINALLY MANIK KO NANDU MIL GAYI...

KITNA DAR GAYA THA...

I HOPE YE DONO JALDI SE APNI PROBLEMS SORT OUT KAR LE...

AB MANIK KI BARI JEALOUS HONE KI...

LOVED IT

UPDATE SOON
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Posted: 9 years ago
#86
jealous manik...Ab ayega maza...
Next update plz asap...
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Amazinggg
Superbbb update
Ab manik jealous ho rha hai
Lovd it
Continue soon
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Posted: 9 years ago
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CHAPTER 11



Aryamaan? Ab yeh Aryaman kahan se paida hua? And why the hell is she talking to him as if they've known each other for life. His eyes narrowed to slits when he heard her giggling. Damn it. Uh uh this is NOT happening when I'm right here. Manik decided. He walked forward and snatched her phone smoothly out of her grasp cutting the call promptly. Bloody Aryamaan kahin ka! he thought satisfied with himself.

Nandini stared at him her mouth forming an O. What on earth is wrong with him? Here she was happily chatting away with her long lost friend and he had to ruin it. Why does he look so smug? Abhi teek kar deethi hoon tumhe. She thought.

" Manik! What is wrong with you? Mere call kyun cut kiya? Tumhe pata hain ki woh kitna important call tha? Give me back my phone!" She said trying to take it back from him.

Kya? important call?! Yeah right! He held the phone high up out of poor Nandu's reach smirking at her."Tumhe rest karne keliye bola tha phone pe gappe marne keliye nahin. Samji tum?" he said giving her a stern look.

Arae?! Ab isse kya hogaya. 2 min pehle hi toh mujhe I don't care' attitude dikha raha tha and now he is acting like an over protective dad" just give me my phone na" she said almost whining. Soon she was following him all around the room.

Manik looked at Nandini who was now jumping on the balls of her feet tryig to get hold of her phone. No one would believe that the girl jumping in front of him was unconscious a few hrs ago. What was so special about this Aryamam...Karyaman job hi ho?! Grr!

Ayyo Aiyappa! why is this guy so tall?! Will I have to get a ladder or what?! Nandini made a final jump for her phone..but alas she lost her balance fell right on top him on the bed.

Nandini was still trying tryng to catch hold of the phone but manik'c concentratin was far fron the phone in his hand. He stared at her beautiful face, her long black hair forming a curtain around her face, her plump pouty lips were driving him crazy.

Nandini finaly caught hold of her phone and gave him a smug smirk. But her smile soon flattered when she met his intense gaze. She jumped slightly when she felt his arm snake around her waist holding her closer to him. Nandini gulped feeling tingles spread across her body from his touch.

Manik was in a trance. She was intoxicating him with just her presence. He turned around so that she was lying beneath him. He leaned in close to her inhaling her scent their noses almost touching. He was taking his own time savouring every bit of her face.

Nandini felt he heart beating so fast that it was ready to burst out of her chest. She felt his hot breath fanning her face. Her eyes fluttered closed lost in the moment.

Manik brushed his lips across hers and all the way to her ears and whisperd "Kisi aur ladke ko call karne ke bare mein sochna bhi math."

Nandini felt his weight lift from her when she opened her eyes he was nowhere to be seen. She calmed herself enough to make sense of his words. Stupid arrogant Malhotra! He thinks he can control me. Yeah right! But she couldn't stop the blush forming on her face. Aiyyapa! Kya karun mein is stupid jelous Malhothra ka? she thought, this time with a smile.

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Maya came into nandini's room with her breakfast in her tray. She saw nandini sitting on the edge of a bed blushing hard. Hmmm. Ab kya hogaya did I miss something? " Nandini are you alright?" she asked.

Nandini was brought back from her thoughts when she heard maya. " haaan..haan I'm fine."

"Acha toh why are your cheeks so red" she asked trying to hide her grin. She checked her temperature. " fever toh nahin hain"

Oh God! Maya di ko bhi abhi aana tha! Kya bolun mein. Yeh manik bhi na mujhe eisi embarrassing situation mein chodke pata nahin kahan gayab ho gaya. " nahin woh bas eise hi" if possible her cheeks turned redder. Damn the hormones!

" Manik aaya tha kya yahan?" Maya asked enjoying herself.

Nandini answered her a bit too quickly " Nanin..nahin toh. Why do you ask?."

Hmm toh yeh baat hain. Toh lagtha hain ki mere pyaare bhai ki wajah se yeh bechari ka yeh hal hain. Well, well, way to go manik. Finally I see some hope. " kuch nahin bas aise hi. Any way forget it and have your breakfast. Chai danda ho raha hain."After making sure that Nandini had her food. Maya left her alone.

...

Dhruv and Aliya reached Mumbai airport. Cabir was already there to pick them up.

"Vacation kaisa tha yaar?" Cabir asked giving them a hug.

" Awesome." Aliya said her face lit with excitement.

" yeah I can see that" Cabir said eyeing the large number of shopping bags Dhruv was carrying. Dhruv gave him a resigned look. No one could stop her shopping spree. Not even in Musssorie!

"chalo na. Dhruv jaldi chalo. Bahut kam pada hain kal hamein party deeni haina." Aliya said excited to wear her new dress tomorrow.

Dhruv was confused. Party? But why? Chacha ke maut pe yeh party kyou de rahi hain?!

Cabir on the other hand was more than happy with Aliya's idea. " Excellent idea! Aliya." He said giving her high five. Party...Buhahaha...wahan drinks hoga, dancing hoga, aur Manan honge. I like it ! " Aliya. Brilliant idea. Just Marvelous. What are we waiting for?! lets go!." Both Aliya and Cabir walked off discussing seriously about the party.

Poor Dhruv was left bewildered. "Arae koi toh batao ki yeh party hum de kyun rahein hain?!"

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"Adi aaj jaldi aajana." Maya was on the phone with her husband while feeding Shivani. "woh Aliya aaj party de rahi hain. Bol rahi thi ki un doonon ki first kiss anniversary hain." She smiled. There is no stopping Aliya. "yeah okk. Khana time pe lena. bye" she said and cut the call.

Her phone flashed with a new message.- Your account no ******* has been credited with an amount of Rs 30 cr. She stopped in her tracks and stared at it. Again? Aakir yeh hain koun who is depositing such large amount of money to both her's and Manik's account she wondered.

Miles away someone stared into the plain white wall of the hospital room feeling peaceful first time in many years...

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There you go sweeties. Don't forget to comment.

Edited by crystalfairy95 - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago
#89
Interesting.
Eagerly waiting for the next update.
Aur koi nya character hai kya?
The one who is depositing the money.
Update soon.
Restless here.
😊😊
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Posted: 9 years ago
#90
30crs ???
Now who is it ??

And they almost kissed...jealous Malhotra !
Hahahahahaha

Loved the update !
Aaj do do updates... Wooowww.thank u :)

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