KUCH BATEEIN ANKAHEEN chapter 12 pg 17 updated 26.4.16 AGAIN!

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Hi dears...I'm lia. It's been a long time since I last posted something on if. This ff is something completely random that just came to my mind..hope u enjoy
My old if buddies nashi nd navz..I really missed u gals..

Happy reading folks...



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KUCH BAATEIN ANKAHEEN...




"Maa...I really don't wanna do this" Arohi whined for the nth time. After all cleaning a dusty room on a sunday was her nightmare come true.
"Oho.. shut up and clean the room Arohi. There is no way out of this. My nandu is coming back after 5 whole years and I want everything just the way it was" Mrs Murthy(nandini's chachi )said.
Arohi gave a long suffering sigh. She was the 16yr old adopted daughter o the Murthys'. She was a bubbly girl who loved her parents to bits and considered herself totally lucky to have them. She had heard a lot about nandini di from her maa but never met her. She herself was excited to meet her.

"Maa..but she'll come only after a week right? Why do I have to do the cleaning already?" She again tried but her mom just rolled her eyes.
She again gave an exaggerated sigh and started cleaning the room. Half an hour later while she was sorting through some old boxes something caught her attention. It was a diary dated five years back. Curiously she opened it. The name written on the top in neat handwriting said 'Nandini Murthy'. She hesitated for a second but her curiosity got better of her and she began reading it...


12 may 2014
Mumbai

Today is the begining of my new life. My fist day in Mumbai and first day at SPACE... I hope everything goes well. Chachi says that rishu will soon get very good treatment. I feel it in my heart that he will get better. I'm really nervous. I dont know what is waiting for me at SPACE. Aiyyapa help me..


Nandini di seems sweet and caring.Arohi thought. She was about to close it when something else caught her eyes.


15 may 2014

Monster manik..really how can anyone be so mean? I hate him. I just hate him. Can't he just let me live in peace...stupid idiot.Just because he's hot he thinks he runs the college. Stupid handsome jerk!


Arohi laughed out loud. This is interesting. Being a hopeless romantic she is, began reading it from the start. Little did she know that this little diary was going to change her life. Maybe not just her's but many others as well...


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LONDON



A girl in her twenties walked through the glass doors of the London medical research centre. She was short yet she held herself high and sophisticated. Her eyes showed fierce determination and a tinge of deep buried hurt. She entered the glass elevator. Her own reflection caught her attention. Nandini moorthy stared at herself.

Am I ready for this? She asked herself. The girl and in the glass stared back at her. The Nandini she was 5 years back had disappeared the day she left mumbai...or rather the day she left him.

Going back to mumbai was like ripping open the wounds she had forced herself to heal. But she had to do this for her family and for her gramms. The news of gramms death had been rough on nandini. It left her no other option but to go back and be with the only family she had left. Her chacha and chachi. She prayed that her aiyappa would give her strength to live through these few days. She took a deep breath ready to face whatever comes her way...or so she thought.


Years back they shared a bond so deep ...was it love or war they didn't know. When one changed to another and they realised they are the two halves of a whole. But destiny tore them apart cruelly. Now again fate has turned the coins...is it too late to turn back ? Can true love bring them back together again?


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Chapter 12 : page17


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Its been a long time since i've written. My writing skils need a bit polishing. Hope u guys don't mind. I'll update as soon as I can.

All ur comments and juthis are welcome😊
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hey..
i loved the concept
i would love reading it/.
do update soon
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Nice concept...eager to read more.
Continue soon..All da best.
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awesome start ..
u write so good.
u don't need any polishing ur writing already shines.
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Nice concept
what happen to nandini
15 may line was awesome šŸ˜†
update soon
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Interesting concept...but where is Rishab...continue soon waiting eagerly for next update continue take care
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Hi there 😊
Thank u soo much for you support dears...
So here is the next chapter...
Enjoy😊

CHAPTER 2

"Arohi!" Her mom was bellowing in the top her voice, but Arohi was busy reading through her new found treasure.
'Yeah yeah. I know reading someone's personal diary isn't exactly civil.But...this is so damn interesting. Nandini di wouldn't mind. I hope' She pep talked herself. She continued reading anyway.


21 May
Mumbai

My life in short is hell in all its glory and Mr. Manik Malhothra is my personal yamraj. I can barely understand what is going on. Yesterday I was all so happy in putting him in his place with my slap, and today I'm cleaning his bedroom. Aiyapaa... save me from this rakshas. I'm supposed to tag behind him like a puppy and do whatever he asks me to. Great just great. Ooops its 5o clock. I've to meet the yamraj. All the best to me.

Arohi was laughing her heart out when she felt someone pulling her ears. Her mom. She gave her one of her puppy dog smiles and hid the diary. She then obediently followed her mom her mind filled with manan.

London

Nandini had a appointment with Dr. Charles. He was Rishabh's doctor and a friend of her dad's. The only thing that she didn't regret about leaving Mumbai was the fact that Rishbh was getting the best treatment possible. He had even started saying words. Dr. Charles says he'll be fine within a year. Nandini herself was doing her fellowship program at the london research centre . All thanks to Dr. Charles.

Nandini looked at the piece of paper she had in her hand. It had the address and contact number of one Dr Maya Sharma. She was to meet her for continuing his treatment once they reach Mumbai.
She reached her small appartment. Rishabh was watching the tv .
" Rishu" nandini called him. " tumhara packing hogaya kya?"
"H..haan ...di"
She smiled at him her heart swelled everytime she heard his voice. " good. We're leaving tomorrow early morning. Go.get some sleep." She tucked him in and rushed to finish up.her last minute packing desperately trying to calm herself.

Mumbai

Arohi was sitting on her bed with a torch in one hand and the diary on the other. She was turning pages like her life depended on it.

25 May

Maybe the monster isn't so bad. The way he was handling Dhruv while had his attacks made me go speechless. Maybe... just may the monster did have a heart...

8 june

Today I was stuck in a store room with Mr.arrogant Malhotra. Sure I was scared out of my wits but...It didn't turn out as horrible as I expected. Mr. Khadoos isn't so horrible. Actually he is kind of cute. Oh oh..I didn't actually mean that. Errr..

12 June

Manik helped Rishabh today. I went to his home to thank him. But something strange happened. I can't get it out of my head. Every time I think of it my hear speeds up and I start blushing like a tomato. What is wrong with me? sure..he's hot but. no no. Nandini get a hold of yourself. If this doesn't stop Navya is gonna find out soon.

Arohi couldn't bring herself to put it down for a second. He mind was filled with Manik and Nandin. Their deep understanding of each other mesmerized her. Their drunk night, the dance, the talk about stars and fireflies, the hug, the kiss...

4th july

Manik asked me to come down again. Aiyappa he seems to have a habit of meeting in the middle of the night. Today was the day he confessed his feelings. I'm so happy that I'm still smiling like an idiot. When he met again tonight. I felt something different. It felt like he was holding me for the last time. His eyes looked torn ...I hope I'm imagining it. Sometimes I feel that this is all too gud to be true... I can't sleep. I'm afraid it'll all be a dream and end when I wake up.

5 th july

It was a dream.

Arohi felt tears fill her eyes. She was surprised to see the morning sunrays filtering through her window...

Love is strange...was her last thought before she felt her eyes close.

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That's all for now... all ur comments are welcome.



Edited by crystalfairy95 - 9 years ago
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awesome lovely update.
arohi read whole diary till morning šŸ˜†
so their separation start from that confession night.hmmm ..
and where is manik.?
waiting eagerly to story unfold.
update soon jaldi jaldi. plzzz.. 😊
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i loved it
and more than the story, the concept is lovely!
of another girl happening to read nandu's diary and coming to know of her love story!!!
wanna see how it changes all of their lives!
take your time and rock this one!! 😊

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Hello sweeties
I'm on my writing streak if I say so myself. So here goes the next chapter.
Enjoy and comment😃

CHAPTER 3

Arohi had a wonderful morning with her mom literally dragging her of the bed. Seeing her puffy eyes and slumped shoulder her dad asked worried "kya hua beta? Haven't u slept well?
Before she could clear her sleep deprived mind enough to answer him her mom said " Murthy ji aap hi esae bigad rahe hain. Kal 8 baje hi chali gayi thi yeh apne kamre mein sone keliya"
'Yeah right' Arohi thought. The abrupt ending of the diary kept nagging her. Aakhir hua kya tha?
She decides to pry into it herself.
"Ma, why did nandini di go to london?" She asked trying to sound casual.
Mrs. Murthy stood silent for a second thinking abt it.
" woh hamein bhi patha nahi tha ki woh ithni jald bazi me kyoun gayi . When we returned after the navrathri pooja she was all set to go. She just said she had to leave and not to worry. She didn't even contact us for a whole year. We were worried sick. Then we came to know about Rishab's treatment and we let it slide. I knew that Nandu wouldn't do something like that without a reason. " she said more to herself than to Arohi.
'Hmmm. Something did happen. It was not just for Rishabh bhai's treatment. Wait nanvrathri...woh toh October mein hain na. But last entry was on july. Did I miss something?' She rushed back to her room to check it.'
She flipped through the pages, indeed there were no entries for almost a month but then, she saw it

3rd August

Dhruv says he likes me. I told him I am too broken to do it again. But the fact that Dhruv likes me makes me wonder if this was the reason why he ended it. Something tells me that he was lying when Manik said it was just a joke to him. Maybe it was this hope that had kept my broken heart beating all this while. I am afraid to hope because don't think I have the strength to get hurt again. But I can't help it. fireflies wouldn't lie, right?

15 August

I was right. Finally I got him to admit it. I'm so relieved. Stupid Malhothra. I hate him. He so deserved my slap. I'm not a toy to be passed from one friend to another. I'm never going to forgive him.

7 September

This guy is driving me nuts. He thinks he can make me forgive him with his cute antics. He so much mistaken. But I feel my resolve weakening every time I am close to him. God I hate the fact that I still luv u Mr. Manik malhothra.

1 st November

Stupid idiot cute gadha seems hell bent on winning me back. Poor guy ...little does he know that I've already given up fighting him. But I'm gonna put up with the act for a few more days. Nandini Murthy can't give in so easily, can she?

12 th November

I can't lose him again. I'll wont let anything happen to him. Even of I've to stay away from him. I love u Manik and will keep loving u till my last breath...

That was the last entry and the ink was smudged with dried tears. Arohi gently felt the page with her fingers, her own eyes filled with tears. 'Koi kisi se ithna pyar kaise kar saktha hai?'
Nandini di is in London I wonder where her Manik is right now? She thought.


Mumbai

Iktara music company, one of the top in india, stood high and proud in the city of Mumbai. Inside the huge building a poor guy was running through the escalators and jumping over the tables. Finally he reached in front of the MD's office catching his breath and straightening his tie. With his hands shaking he slowly opened the doors after taking permission.

"Sir, fusion concert project details are ready"
His boss was sitting in his chair with his back to him.
"When did I tell u to get it done?" A dangerously low voice asked him.
" yest...yesterday , sir" he said" but I had to leave yesterday because my wife wasn't well...
"ENOUGH" Manik malhothra's voice echoed around the room. "I don't want to hear your pathetic excuses. When I say I want it I get it . Do you understand? If this happens one more time you are fired. Get that?"
"Yes sir"
"Get out"
Aman, PA of Manik malhotra gave a deep sigh. He knew he was next in line to get Manik's lashings. He needed to stop Manik from firing half the staff so he called his lifeline no.
Dhruv's phone was unreachable. Aman sighed. Looks like the odds are not in his favour today. He heard something crashing inside manik's office. Uh ho. He had to do something and fast. He dialed Aliya's no
"Mam, its Aman. I couldn't reach Dhruv sir. Can I speak to him?"
"Yeah. Ok " she replied caressing her baby bump and called out to Dhruv, her husband.
Dhruv came rushing down. "Kya hua Aliya? Are you all right?"
"I'm fine" she said smiling at her caring hubby. "Aman is on line... I think it's Manik."
Dhruv took the phone from her and assured Aman that he was on his way.
Dhruv was the only one who could calm Manik. He was finding it difficult day after day to watch his best buddy losing himself. After that day five years back Manik had never touched his guitar or sang a song. He just supervised everything. Dhruv who knew his buddy understood the hurt he was trying to hide beneath his anger.
'Oh god. Pease give him back his life. Please give him back his Nandini.'

Miles away as if gods heard his prayers, things were slowly clicking into place.
Arohi promised herself that she'll do eveything in her power to bring manan back together.
Nandini and Rishab boarded their flight from London.
And a phone rang some where in Malhothra mansion...

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Edited by crystalfairy95 - 9 years ago

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