MANAN SS Beintehaa (chapter 02 A/B/C/D pg 13 *pms later*) - Page 8

Hey hi its nice one yaar don't stop everyone have seen manik jealous, lovey dovey and in anger also but this is different please don't stop continue let's see what the suspense for his behaviour update fast

Nice promo.
Waiting for full update.
Update soon.

interesting promo...
eagerly waiting...
plz don't discontinue yaar...& update jaldi se...
take care...
stay blessed...

nice promo

Why you always talk about discontinue???It scared us.Your story is so good that i always wait for it.And you always talk about ending your stories...don't dear plz,don't do that.

Thanks for explaining that it's manik's extreme anger,not hatred...
Promo was shocking, don't know what manik had done with nandini.Hope he will be concern for her.

But whom they have found??? unfold this soon.

Update soon

Hey interesting promo...plz...dont finish it...update whenever you get time take care

CONTINUE PLZ...
NANDINI ACCIDENT KI WAJAH SA KYA MANIK USKA 7A SOFTLY BEHAVE KARAGA???
WHO IS PAMPKIN???
PLZ NEXT PART ASAP

No plzzz continue ur doing great

Actually just thoda dark ho
Not too much

Plzzz
Otherwise manbir k original characters effect
honge
Hope u understand

I guess pumpkin may be mukti
hoGuess
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Do pm next part pretty pretty please

Vidhu

It's different story..
I liked the concept very much...
But just a suggestion that don't make cabir & manik slap or beat their wives...
Twisting hand or making them so all the work or scolding or venting out all the anger is okay...
I mean I just want to say that even if they r extremely angry Though they can't beat their wives...
Even if they r cruel or heartless but they can't stoop such low & beat their wives...
They r the heroes of the story...
It will make them villains..
It's just my suggestion...
No offence to ur writing..
U r awesome writer dear...
Thnxx for the pm..
Continue soon...
Looking forward to read further parts..