MANAN SS Beintehaa (chapter 02 A/B/C/D pg 13 *pms later*)

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DesaiK

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Posted: 9 years ago

#61

New concept looks really interesting

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Posted: 9 years ago

#62

this concept is really interesting. ... why manik and cabir like this ... I'm eagerly waiting for the update. ...

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Posted: 9 years ago

#63

Originally posted by: soothu
i will file case against dem...😡

sure sure come I will accompany uuu

heheh 😆

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nabilaa456

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Posted: 9 years ago

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Originally posted by: archu_asok
Awesome update. Navni's emotional and hurtful state was well penned. Wat happened with manbir.this story is getting interesting day by day. Continue soon.thanks for pm.can't wait for update.
Keep writing

Stay blessed😊

thanku uu

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Pooja2899

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Posted: 9 years ago

#65

waiting for next part.
continue soon.

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nabilaa456

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Posted: 9 years ago

#66

Originally posted by: Sreeja_babu
First prt rckd dear..
Awesum prt yaar...Lvd it so much...

Thnks 4 d pm dear...

Both Manbir r perfectionists...

Poor Navni...Sb kuch perfectly kr rhi he apni patiyon ko khush krne klye...

Feelin bad 4 navni...

Waitin 2 knw y manbir s beahavin lyk dis??

Kuch toh hua hoga past mein..

Islye voh log aisa kr rha hoga...

Do continue dear..Waitin 4 nxt prt..

thankuuu soo much

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alind713

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Posted: 9 years ago

#67

Waiting for the next part
Please update it...

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nabilaa456

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Posted: 9 years ago

#68

PROMO

P:kia men manik malhotra se baat karsakta hun

M: hmm yes I am speaking

P: sir please come to city hospital urgently

M: kun what happened ??

P:sir vo...vo... your wife had accident ...

M:what but how??

then manik recalls what he did with nandini this morning and after knowing how her accident occurred he facepalms himself and rushes to hospital...

>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>

M: hello

M:yes ?

M:really ohh thankuu soo much no I will reach there in 10 mins

manik runs to tell cabir wwhat he heard

M:cabir

C: kia hua manik

M: (happily) yaar we found her we found our PUMPKIN

hellloo everyone

thanku for the response 'this isn't domestic violence its manik anger which is on exreme and the title itself says BEINTEHAA means extreme whether it be love or anger

still I will try to show less torture

thirdly if u all still says k its domestic voilense so let me know I will discontinue thiss right here only

update on your response

no offence or critisim to anyone

thankuuu