#2 You And Me Make A Beautiful Us!! Part 20-Page 16

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I can't tell how happy I am.Well it was hell of a ride..khatta bhi meetha bhi.All I want is your support.Comment and I will post 😊. This is my first ever story that reached second thread.It was always my wish to have a second thread too like otger writers.It took time but finally it is here.I might not be that good in writing and expressing...but yet I have realised there are some who like this story and I love you all. ❤️.Silent readers...I'm better silen for you guys.My reagular readers who were with me from the start and those who joined later but stayed.Muaaahhh :* :* Like in Gujarati they say..aap logon ne 'Todi naikhu.Phodi naikhu.Bhukko kari naikhu!!' 😆 Amazing you are 😉

Here I am posting the 17 part that was PMed.
Enjoy! And comment. 😊

Part 17-

Hie V' Nandini said as she limped towards the sofa.

V.. she looked at her and then again turned her attention towards the TV uttering a "rukha sukha" Hi.

'Kya hua tum kyu nai gayi.Tumhe toh wahi jana tha na..' Nandini asked her.
'Bas nai gayi..' she replied.

'Tumhe kuch hua toh hai..tum share kar sakti ho..main judge nai karungi!! Tumhara mood off hai..!!' She said.

'If u so wanna hear it..Here it is then I like Manik and Manik likes you!! Maine usse ya baat kahi and now I guess he will not even befriend me.' she blasted her feelings and started crying.

Nandini gasped at this new found information. Was it like she came between them.Or like she was responsible for their encounter against each other. But above all,the guilt of having made someone cry with pain in heart made her gasp. She knew how it was to be just left alone..she knew the value of friendship...she knew how much the heart crumples with this just mere thought of a broken link...be it friendship or relationship. Nothing...nothing according to her could fill the space of a broken friendship. Relationships are secondary!! You could have a soul mate...a life partner..a better half. But bever in life will he be able to fulfil a friend's worth...or unless it had all begun with friendship.

She moved towards V and put her hand over her shoulder.. 'If it is so...I won't come in between your friendship.Friendship is the purest in this world..' she said with a heavy heart...only she knew how much it might cost her leaving the person she let in her heart and that too with so much of hope...that he'll be there...trust that he is willing to. AGAIN!! She might just be left..where she was sometime ago!

'That is not what I mean. That is the problem...Manik too has understood it that way. Well the point is I had no idea that such deep were Manik's feelings for you!! Otherwise I would've just gone with a flow.You see!! His being with me matters the most to me. I am not those daily soap vamps!! But my closest friend...not spending time with me..and just simply lighting away things..does matter..Bloody does affect.!!' She broke into tears.
Nandini didn't know what to say. She herself thought that it was like a third person between two inseparable friends. But it was mere jealously that had lead to such big consequences. Of course!! She should have understood that it was difficult and different from V's point of view. Fab5 saw them grow towards each other. But V...for her it was a sudden invasion in their lives...she thought to herselfo

'Um...I'm sorry...I got you wrong. I thought tumhe..mujh..mujhse problem thi..' she spoke.
'Tumse nai tum dono k ek dusre mein itne khone se..ki aas paas koi na nazar aaye!!' V too said wiping her tears after getting a kind of relief after talking to Nandini. 'Pagal ladka girlfriend mil gayi toh dost ko bhul gaya..warna ye sab hota hi nai.!!'

A sudden blush crept Nandini's cheeks as she heard "girlfriend." 'Um..aisa...aisa.aa...nai..hai!!' she spoke.
'Nai hai toh ho jayega!!' V said naughtily switching off the TV and turning towards Nandini..

'Tumne TV kyu band kiya...mujhedekhna hai!!' our Nandu smartly changed the topic.
'Smart girl..' V winked and both of them turned to the TV.

'V!!' Nandu spoke after a while. 'Friends na..!?' she asked her questioning.
'Abhi puch rahi ho..' she said taking her in a hug.
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It was quite late when the rest of the gang returned. Nandini already slept due to the medicines. V was on the terrace.
Manik gestured Cabir to take Navya for a while and he went to Nandini.
A beauty she looked..he thought when he saw a calm face sleeping. He came near her and pecked her forehead.She woke up with his touch.

'Hey! It's ok..its me. Go back to sleep.' he said caressing her hair.
'Hie..' she smiled.

'Khana khaya..' he asked her as he turned beside her taking her in a side hug.
'Hmm..maine aur V ne bhi. Tumne!?' she asked him.While he stood their confused.
'Me too.' he replied nevertheless. 'Kaisi ho ab!!'

'Main thik hoon.Aur V bhi!!' she said again.

'Tumhe kya hua..!?' he asked with a questioning look.
'Kuch nai...wo uss fight ke baad tum V k sath baat karne nai jaoge na.Isilye I'm telling you.' she answering all innocent.
'She told you...' he sighed.
'Hmm..Manik!!' she began.

'No Nandini..do you even know what she said..' he cut her in between.

'Did you even try and talk to her as in why all of this..such a fight!!' she replied.
'Manik!! What are friends for...to support you...to catch your back...to be happy with you.Someone you can blindly trust..you fight..you make up.. you have misunderstandings but at the end They are ur friends..n I guess that's what matters at the end. You are bound to share ur sorrows and happiness with them and they would never judge you...bet on that!! But all of a sudden what if that same friendgives less importance to you. What if she has a fear of losing you!! She will do everything possible to hold on to that thread which is not bound..not a compulsion...but mere choice..to be with that one..she will hold in to it...with all her strength.' she said.

'Tum neend mein bolti ho..!? Tum usi V ki side le rahi ho!! Jisne tumhe ek thik se smile bhi nai di.' he sid bewildered.

'I know what broken friendships result in.You don't bleed but don't breathe either. Friends are life! They are chosen..it's correct.But once chosen...you are addicted to them just as they are with you!' she cried remembering her past. 'I don't want you to become like how I was.You will regret it!! Navya and I...' she cried.

'Shh..shh don't think about the bad!!' he said wrapping his arm around her head.
'Go and talk to her!!' she said after a while..
'Hmm..but ye toh batao ye sab V ne kaha..!?' he asked.

'Manik it's just she was insecure and scared of losing something that meant the most to her.' she said and pecked his cheek.
'Aise toh roz ladna padega V se..' he said with naughtiness turning her all red. 'Go!!' she pushed him...and he went out chuckling.



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Posted: 9 years ago
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INDEX-

PART 17 & 18-Page 1
Part 19-Page 8
Part 20-Page 16
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Part 18-

Manik's POV-
'I can't believe Nandu has so deep thoughts about friendship. But with what she said it is proved that Navya and her wounds aren't yet healed.I will have to talk to her...are usne mujhe meri dost wapas di..aur ab mujhe bhi toh use kuch dena chahiye na...Hmm. Par kya wo manegi..V is hurt.Of course manegi! Aur kahan jayegi..haan main mana loonga use.Yes I will!! Get ready Manik...Chudail k prakop ka samna kar. Jai Mata Di!! Jai Mata Di!!' 😆

Oh God so many thoughts were roaming in his mind as he walked towards the terrace!!
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'Tare ginne se neend nai ayegi..tujhe bakriyan ginni chahiye!!' Manik said.This was there "Bachpan's" tease line...and the irony is...it always worked.

But not this time.Things weren't gonna be that simple for Mr.Malhotra. aakhir andar ki "Chudail" ko jagaya hai..And so he got the silent treatment. Without even looking at him she turned to go from the other direction.

'Tch!! V...' he sighed as he held her wrists.
'Haath chod mera Manik.' She replied annoyed.

M-Nope! Nai chodunga..Chodne k liye thodi na pakda tha.
V-Right!! Gussa dilane..ignore karne aur phir aakar cheesy lines marne k liye kiya tha na.
M-V yaar.Ignore kab kiya!!
V-Really Manik!! Kitne din hue hai mujhe aaye haan? Aur tabse aajtak kitni baar humne pehle jaise time spend kiya hai...
M-*sighs* Toh ye hi bolti na..cheeze complicate kyu ki wo like unlike ka badbad karke. He said in a low tone.
V-Huh!!

'Acha ok..I'm sorry okay.' he hugged her tightly.
'Nai..You have stopped understanding me too.Tumne bhi ye socha that I don't like Nandu and I like you..' she replied slapping his arm.

'Wohi toh tumne kaha tha na par..' he said in disbelief still hugging her.'Actually..Cabir ko bhi yehi laga tha.' he said with a chuckle.
'Really!! She was shocked with this sudden information.

'Haan..Toh we are good na..?' He asked breaking the hug.
'Pehle ye batao..tumhe Nandini ne bheja..!?' she asked.

'Wo..hmm!!' he smiled sheepishly ruffling his hair.
'Warna tum aate bhi nai na..I hate you Manik!!' she punched him and leaved to go.

'Areee sun..' he tried.
Halfway she turned to come back.Manik smiled on his victory but little did he know it was short lived.She put her hand in his pocket and pulled out the dark chocolate he always bought with him whenever he wanted to coax her..knowing she loved it.

'Kya!! Ye lene aayi thi' she replied when he stood staring at her.
'I'm sorry!!' He held her hand and said with a genuine smile...and she fed him a piece of chocolate as accepting it.

'Kal hum Sunrise dekhne jayenge!!' He said.

'Aww...I love you Manik..You're the best' she jumped onto him taking him in a hug as she loved early mornings.
'I know..' he smiled and reciprocated. 'But waise nai na..all is clear now na.!!'

'Ab jiski already ek girlfriend ho uspe line thodi mar skti hoon.'
'Huh!!' He was dazed..'It's that obvious kya..!?'

'Dumbo..even she knows it..and even her Cherry!!' she laughed at him and yelled a Goodnight as she went.
"Really.Itna obvious hai ki like se love ka pata chal gaya..." he spoke to himself.
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They were there for a couple of days more where they watched sunrise..hand in hand..walking in the cool breeze of the misty mornings;they visited the vineyards;organised an in house rave party n danced like crazy;pool races and had the fun of their lifetime!!
All of them returned and since it was too late they stayed at Manik's place.They slept till there was no more sleep left in them until noon..and retired to their homes.
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'Come down!!' Read Manik's message to Nandini that evening.
'Can't!! Aryamann's home' came her reply.

"Why can't this guy leave her alone darn.." he said in annoyance and moved up to get her.

He just barged in the open main door to her room. 'Hey Aryamann how are you!! All Good na..' he said in a breath not giving him chance to speak...'But you see..Nandu isn't. I have to take her to the doctor..So Bye!!' He said at once and lift her and carried her'And haan..please take care of Cherry for a day!! You will right...' he turned to Aryamann as he closed the main door and walked to the lift while poor Aryamann had to take the stairs. Aree...of course he got him out.He wouldn't have ever left Aryamann at Nandu's house even if he is alone!! 😆

Ignoring all her protests he put her in the car.
'Ye kya tha Manik..why do you behave like this with him.And now tumhari wajeh se Cherry will also be angry with me...use thik se bye bhi nai bola!!' She scoffed.

But it didn't affect Manik at all...infact he was affected the other way.He kept on staring t her plumpy cheeks and baby like lips.

'Ab ghooro mat mujhe..warna dono tange tudwa doge meri..Samne dekho!' She was hell annoyed he thought.But he didn't like Aryamann for sure! And that test was necessary.
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'Thank god! It was a mistake.That stupid nurse..agar kam nai hota toh kaam pe rakhte kyu ho!!' Manik fluttered in annoyance as he helped Nandini sit in the car.
'Tum kyu itna gussa kar rahe ho...tumse galti nai hoti kya!' Nandini replied as a matter of fact.

'Ya but when it comes to you I'm not careless...' he too replied as a matter of fact.'Manik for that nurse I'm just another patient yaar...' Nandini said.
'But you mean much more to me than any other nurse..' he argued. 'Tum Doctor ho ya nurse...' she too replied continuing the argument..not actually taking the deapth of the words.

'Ughh..Stupid!!' He retorted.
'Hawww.Tumne mujhe stupid bola...' she dramatically held her hand near to her mouth.That was it..

'Gadi rokooo...'she yelled.
'Kya hua..chillaya kyu aise.!!' He said as he stopped suddenly.

'Main itni bhi stupid nai hoon..ghar chali jaongi khud!!' She said getting down.
'What!! Pagal ho gayi ho kya..it's already drizzling...Come In!!' He too got down.

'I will go on my own' she too shouted.
'Why are you so impossible. ' he scoffed.
'Acha ab main impossible bhi hoon..' she acted lika a typical one.

'Can't believe this!!' he said under his breath and stuffed the angry fula hua potato in again 😆 but now forcefully.But too late!! Both were fully wet.


He took her to his home and carried her to his bedroom.
'Ye lo..change!! You will catch cold.' He said with a concern.

But again!! Are things ever easy for Mr.Malhotra. He had many tantrum queens around him and now Nandini. Well he was happy that she was trusting him to show her tantrums.But it was the last thing he wanted now.

'Nandinii...fight later!! You will catch cold baba..' he tried to explain her when he got a silent treatment the first time. 'Unless..you want me..to help you...in this too!!' He said naughtily when all his attempts failed.

This one didn't. Nandini blushed the darkest...whatever maybe..Nandini was affected by him.And he was by her...well right now he wanted her to change quickly coz she looked a beauty in the moonlight and adding to it was her and him being wet..thanks to the rain...n of course Nandini.

She tried hard to hide her blush but failed and so she ran to the bathroom with those clothes while the Monkey Malhotra stood there smiling.
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She looked beautiful in his clothes he thought..a full poatato..but a sweet one.He just wanted to eat those cheeks that were literally falling from her face. Her wet hair flowing past her shoulders. He stood gawking at her.But she..went towards the balcony as she saw that the moon was peeking out of the clouds...she loved thi site and could do anything to watch it..she felt it was heaven!

'Manik ye dekho na..Kitna khoobsurat hai!!' She shrieked.
'Tumse zyada nai..' he whispered merely from her back hovering above her.

'Nai ye duniya ki sabse achi aur best cheez hai..' she said unaware of his intensity.
'Nandini!!' he called out to her to gain her attention and held her from back. That's when she came back to reality and the proximity made her shrudder.

'I LOVE YOU!!' Is what she heard.


I told ya no..a surprise is coming up!! 😊 How many of u expected this.. 😛 Guys it's very important for me to know whether there is any part that needs improvement. Or is there anything else that I should add to it.If so let me know.And if you guys have any requests...I will be more than happy to fulfill them in my story.I would love to know it. 😊
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Nice update nd thanks for the pm
Manik nd v's talk ohh God this manik na
Manik ney aryaman ko cherry ke sath chid diya
And their cute sa fight in the car that was sooo nice enjoyed it
Manik's confession it was nt atall expected alteast nt me
Waiting fr nandinis reaction
Continue sooonnn
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ITNI JALDI CONFESS KARAGI MAINE YA EXPECT NAHI KIYA THA...BUT KAR LIYA...THAT'S GOOD...
BUT NANDINI KI REACTION KYA HOGA???
PLZ NEXT PART ASAP
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Yes i was ri8. .

See i guessed it right. .

It was confession. .

Yayiee. .yippiee. .

Finaly v thing is closed. .

Manan are so cute when they fight adorably. .

And teasing and blushing. .oh my gosh. .

I too love moon. .it gives peace. .

Continue soon. .

Hey btw r u gujarati? I mean the way u added those lime bhangi nakhu bhuko kri nakhu. .

If yes then Even m gujarati too. .
Do let me knw
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Thank you for such a wonderful update :)
God bless you.
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Wow Most awaited part Sooo good loved it Post asap keep it up

Really very sorry
Can u plzzz start showing abt dance show now

N of course jealous manik

As then story will get even more interesting pl@xxxzzz


Love you sissy
Vidhi
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Awsum update... aww soo cutee.. finally luv u bol diya.. that too on VD.. aww.. update soon
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Jai Matadi jai Matadi
Hrhheheheh
Thank god Manik or V k beech sab sort out hogaya
Poor Arayama Manik jesa toofan kab aya or Nandini ko leke kab chala b gaya use pata hi nahi chala

Finally he said those three majic words
Waiting eagrily for next update

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