#2 You And Me Make A Beautiful Us!! Part 20-Page 16 - Page 5

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Posted: 9 years ago
#41
Hi dr..
Waiting 4 ur update..
Update soon
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Posted: 9 years ago
#42
I want an update. .
Yipee Love to see jealous manik..

n u r doing this much for us..
exam se phle bhi hmare liye update.
Thanku...bda vala.. 😛
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Posted: 9 years ago
#43
First of all...gud luck 4 ur xam...
Will be waiting 4 d next update...
Take care...
Stay blessed...
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Posted: 9 years ago
#44

Originally posted by: gtilwani45

I want an update. .
Yipee Love to see jealous manik..

n u r doing this much for us..
exam se phle bhi hmare liye update.
Thanku...bda vala.. 😛


Welcome 😊
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Posted: 9 years ago
#45

Originally posted by: shaan...

First of all...gud luck 4 ur xam...

Will be waiting 4 d next update...
Take care...
Stay blessed...



Thanku 😃
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Posted: 9 years ago
#46
yeh bhi koi puchne wali baat hain kya??
"uncle apko ye bhi nehi pata?"""
i want an update...
quote wali line noodles ke ad ki hain...excitement main bol diya,he he he...plz update..
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Posted: 9 years ago
#47
Jealousy manik will be mindblowing. Love to read.continue soon.eagerly waiting for update.
Keep smiling
Stay blessed
All the best for ur exams. Do well😊
Study hard
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Guys I'm really nervous about this part.Please give your reviews whether you liked it or not. Also read the note on page 6.

Part 19-

'I LOVE YOU!!' Is what she heard.

'Manikkk!!' she gasped and tried to turn around.But he stopped her there tightening his hold and continued... 'Nandiniii!! I thought it would matter..where I said or how I said. But I realised that what only mattered was you.You made me happier than anything else in my life.And if you let me...I will want to make you feel the same.It's start from love..where I'll see myself in you..and you will see yourself in me.I just want you to be with me like I promise I will be with you.' He completed and rested his chin on her shoulder.

With one hand he raised her face to look upto the moon..'Ise dekho Nandini.The moon..you love it right' and she nodded '..Ye bhi kabhi akela nai hota. It always has stars. Moreover wo apna khud ka nai..Sun ka light reflect karta hai. Likewise I can see my soul in you Nandini. I don't expect you to answer me now. No I don't! I know that you need more time to find out your feelings. But I...I'm sure about mine and I respect your decision.' She was in tears by the time he completed. She jerked him and just turned to move away..but he didn't let her go.

'Chupao mat Nandini...let it out. Let me in!!' he pulled her back and faced her to look at him. Both were so drowned in each other's eyes. Clishe.No! Love...just love. 'Bhaago mat..Hai tujhe bhi ijazat karle tu bhi mohabbat!!' He said.

'Manik tum kyu aisa karr rahe ho. Mujhse door raho Manik..you deserve much better..much more than me!' She cried.

'What!?' He was baffled 'Nandini sab toh theek tha..you said that you liked me. Toh ab second thoughts kyu aarahe hai!?' He held her by her shoulders and demanded an answer.

'Manik I'm scared!!' She too yelled. 'Seeing the intensity in your eyes I'm scared Manik. Mujhe tumhe hurt nai karna hai..but I'm not for all this!' She cried hard.

'Not for love!! Scared!! Why!?' he tried to make her get it!! 'Nandini this intensity that your scared of...this love that your trying not to see is only for you Nandini...please! People say you accept the love you feel you deserve but I believe that you believe in love and love. You know...love and let love!'

'Acha ok!!' he wiped her tears and cupped her face. 'Meri aankhon mein kya dikhta hai tumhe..hmm?' But she didn't answer,she was hiccupping continuously. 'Dekho Nandini...tumhe apna chehra dikha!?' She just nodded bitting her lips trying to subside her sobs. 'Do you think that I don't deserve you.?' She widened her eyes and nodded a no!

'Phir kya hua..apne darr ko nikalo Nandu!!' He explained her like to a small child.'Main force nai karunga. Par this unreasonable thoughts of yours...get'em out.' He kissed her forehead.

'Tell me whatever is your decision whenever you're ready hmm..' he wiped all her tears and bought her in.

'You must be tired.Sleep sweetheart. Good night love!' he wished her night.

'Tum kahan jaa rahe ho!!' She held his hand when he got up.
'Kahin nai jaa raha main..ok!! I'm just not sleepy tum sojao!' He said with a smile and tucked her in.

'Nandini!!' He called her out when he reached to go out. 'Please sleep..warna headache hoga!!'
She sat there admiring him and his antics.

Nandini's POV-
'Kitna sochta hai wo mere bare mein. Aiyappa!! Mujhe sachme darr lagta hai uski inn baton se. Mujhe pata hai wo mujhe hurt nai karega. Wo mujhe sabse zyada samajhta hai. Par aap hi batao...aaj tak jo bhi mere paas aaya hai wo humesha itna door chala gaya ki main dhoond hi na pao. Main Manik ko khona nai chahti..aur ye baat use bata bhi nai sakti. Kya pata wo ye sunkar hi chala jaye..ye sochkar ki main pagal hoon" she pouted.
'Aiyappa...please help me!!' And she closed her eyes.

Maniks POV-
'I hope kuch zyada nai ho gaya ho. Par pata nai what's in her mind. Achanak she's scared...I doubt it's coz of her past with Harshad. It's definitely something else. Godd!! I...I will never hurt her. Main kya kru.
Manik..first use apne sath pehle jaisa bana. Aaj ka zikar bhi mat karna jab tak wo apne aap kuch na kahe. Yes!!
Be all normal with her Manik. Make tomorrow a new one. Yup!! This is what I'll do.' He stood there out in the balcony thinking this.

He came in to check on her...she was peacefully asleep. 'I know you will ome around Nandini! I have belief. I love you!!' He caressed her forehead and planted a kiss.

Next morning! God knew what was in store for them. Manik thought to make it a new one but what about Nandini!!


Stay tuned. Next update after 16 March 😉
Or no update even then if no comments..
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Posted: 9 years ago
#49
Congratulations for new thread
Amazinggg
Superbbb update
Manik ne confess bhi kr diya pr nandu q sarr rhi hai...hope so manik nandu ke darr ko nikalde...lovd it...continue soon
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Posted: 9 years ago
#50
Amazing update...
Luved it...
Plz continue soon...
Waiting eagerly...
Take care...
Stay blessed...

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