#2 You And Me Make A Beautiful Us!! Part 20-Page 16

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Chocolava14

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Posted: 9 years ago

#31

Dis story has saved me from committing a very big mistake...nd dis story will always hold a special place in my heart...i cnt thank u enough❤️

I m in luv wid dis storyy...

U portray v nd manik's bond...so beautifullyy...no friendship is beautifull dan dis 😳😳

Always keep writing😊

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Anu

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Posted: 9 years ago

#32

Wow...confession...loved the way it came about ... and Nandhu's explanation and understanding about Vee as well, terrific job

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mona

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Posted: 9 years ago

#33

Hey...
Firstly Congratulations for ur new thread...
I m so happy that u start writing again...

Manik and v's convo was beautiful...
And teasing line was awsm when v was on terrace...
And when she came to take the chocolate was way more beautifully penned down...
And manan romance was so adorable...
Hehehehebe... Manik is jealous with araya...
Bdw looking adorably cute in jealousy...

Moonlight confession was blissful scenario to watch but u write is so well... Beautiful...

Continue soon

Keep smiling
stay blessed

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forumlove

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Posted: 9 years ago

#34

It's awesome yaar
Manan cute scenes
ILU was so unexpected yaar
Bt luvd it
Please update soon

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saithanmayee

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Posted: 9 years ago

#35

first of all congratulation on opening a new thread 👏

you really deserve it and I wish you will achieve more success

coming to the update

its awesome

you have beautifully showed manik and v's friendship

loved their bonding

and loved the way how nandini convinced manik to talk to v

aww manik looks very cute when he is jealous

its funny how he behaved in front of aryamann😆

loved manan cute fights

oh my god manik said those three magical words

eagerly waiting to know what will be nandini reply

continue soon

and thanks for the pm 😊

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mamalovesbalto

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Posted: 9 years ago

#36

hi very nice update manan always rocks and you are writing it so well i love there friendship can't wait for next update take care and keep smiling

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Gayathri

@ashitha.kerala

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Posted: 9 years ago

#37

congrats for new thread u deserved it awesome update yaar manik nd v conversation was nice jealousy manik is good to see finally manik confessed his feelings to nandu excited to know nandus reaction thanks for pm continue soon take care nd keep smiling

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Maneesa

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Posted: 9 years ago

#38

firstly many many congratulations for new thread
both updates are awesome
nandu n v's talk is needed they also became friends now
manik can never change he can't leave nandu alone with aryaman bt he leave cherry with him 😃
their car fight was cute
manik confess his love what will be nandu's reaction
will be waiting for next part cont soon
keep smiling

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mairaallauddin

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Posted: 9 years ago

#39

Awesome update

Superb update

Fab update

Finally manik confessed his love

Loved it

Loved the update

Waiting for the next part

Update the next part soon

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Dhingli44

@Dhingli44

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Posted: 9 years ago

#40

Hey guys.
I had decided to end that dance competition...but many of you wanted to see it toh I'm not ending it.It will be up in sometime.
And Manik ko jealous toh aaplog ko V k time se dekhna tha...but I had some other plans with V and I'm glad I was able to showcase their friendship properly.Infact one of the readers said that this story is special for them as it helped her a lot.I'm OVERWHELMED 😃
Toh ab jealous Manik bhi aayega..on public demand 😆

My exams start exactly 4 days later. I'm trying to complete atleast 1 update till then..as it's been over 10 days that I last posted 😊
Stay Tuned!! 😉

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