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Posted: 9 years ago
Nice chapter
Take care
Continue soon
Stay blessed
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Posted: 9 years ago
I think aryaman is helping nandani...but he is a mystery...nice update...keep smiling keep writing...waiting for next update eagerly...take care god bless you ...be happy ...
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Posted: 9 years ago
Oh God finally nandu came there.
I guess the one who helped her must be aryaman.
He was missing in last few updates.
Wondering what's his relation with nandu?
So fab 5 gonna perform.
Harshad and nyo gonna fail as usual.
Mandy test reports showing good sign.
Again there must have been someone's action there.
Guess it's aryaman there too.
Continue soon.
Pls don't end this story.
You got ready for next track, hurayyy
We are excited for it.

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Posted: 9 years ago
Amazing update
Manik cares for nandini si much
Finally nandini reached there
Waiting for fab 5 performance
Update soon
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Posted: 9 years ago

First of all, I'm really sorry I'm late today. My internet was not working and I just couldn't post the next part but here I am. 😆 Enjoy, and don't forget to give your feedback! Much love J

Part 48.

Manik cupped Nandini's face and said with excitement, "Tum agai..You're here!!" Nandini smiled and said, "Mujhe to aana he tha..After all, how can you perform without your lucky charm han?" Listening this Manik flashed his smile but after a while immediately held her and asked worriedly, "But.. Where were you? Tum theek to hona? Itni der kyu hui? Is everything alright? Tests.. Tests hogaye? Time pey kyun nahi ai Nandini.. ab khamosh kyun ho? Bolo kuch!!" Nandini started smiling.."Tum hasrahi ho? Seriously Nandini..Yahan meri tumare bare mein soch soch ke halat kharab horai ti or tum ab ai ho itni der mein..or hasrai ho?" Said Manik angrily. Nandini pulled his cheeks and said, "Manik!! Tumhe pata hai you look so cute when you talk like this?" Manik gave her that 'Like seriously?' look. Mr Mathur interrupted and said, "Have you guys called me here to see your romance?" Cabir immediately went to them and said, "No! no sir..we're ready. Please sit." Mr Mathur seated himself. "Stop it now you both. Break lelo. Performance ke bad continue karna.. come now Manik! We're already late.." Said Mukti in a funny way. Manik looked at Nandini and said, "Don't think we're done with this conversation okay? I'll be back..and You..Don't move. Just sit here! Understand?" Nandini nodded and said, "I'm right here Manik..Go..Kill it!" Nyonika and Harshad were sitting with Mr Mathur and were boiling with anger.

Fab 5 took their positions. (Manik singing) **Meri qismat kay, har ek pannay pe, meray jeetay ji..Baad marnay.. mere har ek pal, har ek lamhay mein..Tu likhde mera usay.. Har kahani mein, saray qisson mein, dil ki dunya ke, sachay rishton mein..Tu likhay mera usay.. (Manik looks at Nandini and smiles) Aye Khudaa..Aye Khhuda.. Jab bana uska he bana.. Aye Khuda..Aye Khuda.. Jab bana uska he bana..(Manik looks at Nandini with teary eyes) Mere hissay ki khushi ko hassi ko, tu chahay adha kar.. Chahay lele tu meri zindagi par ye mujhse..wada kar. Uskay ashqon ke ghamon pe, dukhon pe har uskay zakham per.. Haq mera he rahay, har ghadi , har jaga har kaheen haan, umar bhar..Ab faqat, ho yahi.. wo rahay mujhme he.. Wo juda kehnay ko, bichdey na par kabhi..Aye Khuda, Aye Khuda.. Jab bana uska he banana..**

As soon as the performance ended, Nandini ran to the stage and Hugged Manik as he was crying. Mr Mathur was stunned to see their performance. He stood up and started to clap. Seeing this, Harshad left the Audi in anger. Manik and Nandini broke their hug and looked at Mr Mathur.."Fabulous! No doubt you guys are known as FAB 5! I'm highly impressed.." Said Mr Mathur Excitedly. Fab 5, Navya and Nandini were extremely happy to hear this. Mr Mathur turned towards Nyonika and said, "Mrs Malhotra, I'm sorry but I want to replace Harshad. They were much more better than him.. I hope you don't mind!" Nyonika, was boiling with anger inside but still had to smile and say, "Obviously.. As you wish Mr Mathur!" Manik knew she was unhappy doing this so he went to her and whispered in her ears, "Bohat dukh horaha haina..that we replaced your Harshad.. But I wonder..Ziada dukh kis bat ka horaha hai? That we replaced Harshad or that you lost AGAIN! against me.." Nyonika looked at him angrily and said, "It's not over yet Manik!" Saying this, she left the Audi. "This Calls for a group Hug!!" Exclaimed Mukti. "Oh yes!" Said Alya. They had a group a hug! "Hey matarani..Tera bohat bohat dhanewaad!" Said Navya looking towards the ceiling. Cabir went to her and said "Yo Navya!" She had a wide smile on her face and replied, "Yo Cabir!" Cabir side hugged her. "Okay okay..Guys, humne harshad ki band bajayi hai..this is not a small thing.. We need to celebrate! Party to banti hai yar!!" Said Mukti. "Yes! Partyy!" Said Cabir. "But I'm wondering Harshad is waqt kar kia raha hoga?" Said Dhruv. Alya smiled and said, "Ye bhi koi puchne ki bat hai? Bhai is waqt ek or plan banaray honge..to bring us down!" "No Alya, abhi to wo is haar ka afsos karega phir kuch or sochega.. and Jab tak wo afsos karta hai, we need to PARTYY!" Said Mukti wit excitement.


Precap: Fab 5, Navya and Nandini behind the bars in Police station!

What are they doing there? ;)

Edited by Mananstories - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago
Update was superb...
Song selection was the best...
Continue soon...
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Posted: 9 years ago
Behind bars..but why...nice update...continue waiting for next update eagerly...take care
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Posted: 9 years ago
Sorry 4 the late comment...was badly stuck somewhere...update was good...manan scene was emotional...really want to read further after the precap...update soon
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Posted: 9 years ago
nice chptr but manik nd nandinis convo still left
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Posted: 9 years ago
Hey dear.

AAllthe chapters are wonderful.

Loved ur story alot.

Plz update next part soon.

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