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Posted: 9 years ago
Amesome update
plz update soon
eagerly waiting
or I say can't wait
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Posted: 9 years ago
Okay so I am so excited right now as I took sometime off from my studies and everything else today..I was just listening to some amazing music and suddenly, out of nowhere, an amazing idea popped up in my mind. Yes, It's related to my story. I am so excited to use this idea in my story but yeah, it will take some time as the current track is going superb too! So all you readers, I will try my best to keep this story interesting. Trust me on this!! Keep supporting! Love you alll 😉


Part 47.

Fab 5 were rehearsing in the jamming room as they had exactly one hour left only. On the other hand, Nandini reached the hospital. She got done with her tests and then checked the time. She took a deep breath and said to herself, "Thank God! There are still 30 minutes left for Their performance! I should go now. " "Excuse me, Ms Murthy?" Said someone. Nandini turned back, "Um yes?" she said. "The doctor wants to discuss something with you. Right now." The nurse said. "Right now? umm, Im in a hurry right now..I'll come back in an hour or so." Said Nandini. "But Ms Murthy, it will take just 5 minutes.." Said the nurse. Nandini thought for a while and then said, "Okay..where is he?" "Go straight and then right. The first door it is!" The nurse said. She nodded and left to see the doctor. She knocked the door but nobody responded. "Darwaza to khula hai..I think I should go inside.." Said Nandini. She went inside the room but there was no one. Infact, it was a messy room. It certainly didn't look like a doctor's room. "Hello? Is anyone there?" She said but nobody responded. "Oh no! Just 15 minutes left. I should go now or else Manik.." Saying this Nandini turned to leave but to her surprise, the door was locked now. Someone had locked the door from outside. "What the hell..why is the door not opening? What do I do now? Ai apppaa! Please help me!" Said Nandini to herself. She was trying to open the door but all her efforts were useless as someone had purposely locked the door from outside. "Navya! I should..I Should call navya!" saying this, Nandini took out her cellphone but she was shocked to see that there were no signals! "Aiii apaaa!" She said. "Yahan to signals bhe nahi arahe! Ab me kia karunn!!" And finally, it was the time.. Just two more minutes left for Fab 5's performance and Nandini was stuck in the hospital.

Location: Music Room.

"What the hell? Her phone is switched off!" Said Manik. "She said, She'll be there before the performance.. She'll come Manik.." Said Cabir. "Exactly! Chill buddy. I think we should go to the audi now, time hogaya hai.." Said Dhruv. Manik looked at Cabir and Cabir gave him that 'Relax' Look. Manik nodded and they left for the Auditorium.

Location: Auditorium.
As Fab 5 entered the Auditorium, Navya immediately went to them and asked, "Nandu..Nandu kahan hai? Ab tak ayi nahi wo?" Mukti moved her head saying No. Navya looked at Manik and said, "Fikar mat karo Manik, wo ajayegi.." Manik was extremely worried and restless. "Kahan jasakti hai? Phone bhi off hai.. Ab tak to test hojana chahye tha..hospital se college bhe ziada door nahi.. I hope wo theek ho!!" Said Manik worriedly. Cabir tried to calm him down. "Hey matarani! Nandu jaldi se wapas ajaye!" Said Navya.
Suddenly, the door opened..It was Mr Mathur! "So, Are you ready? we should start now!" All of them looked at Manik. "Manik, lets go?" Manik's eyes were continuously looking at the door. "Can you give us 5 minutes more, please?" Said Manik to Mr Mathur. Mr Mathur looked at him angrily and said, "No way! Get started now or else I'm leaving. Don't waste my time." Nyonika and Harshad looked at Eachother and smiled.

Location Hospital: Nandini was still stuck in the room. She was crying looking at time. "Best of luck Manik.." She said with teary eyes. Suddenly, she heard a strange noise..It seemed like as if someone was trying to open the door..She immediately stood up and went to open the door as to her surprise, the door was unlocked. She saw someone running away.. "Hey! Thankyouu!" She shouted. The person didn't responded.

Meanwhile, Manik was still waiting for Nandini. Nandini was running on the road to reach to the college fast.. **Paari Paari, honton pe na jaanay kese, Dhaani Dhaani, Muskurahanton ke phool khilney lagay..Man hi Man (Nandini reached college) ..Khaari Khaari, Hathelyon pe jaanay kesay pyaari, Pyaari Rangrelion ki dhoop sajnay lagi..Tan Badan..(Nandini enters the auditorium and Manik looks at her with teary eyes) Hui mae teri joganiya..Joganiya.. Tu jogi teri Joganiyan mein joganiya.. (Manik ran to her an cupped her face. He kissed her forehead) Ab chahay mohay rang laga, Piya jee mohey ang laga..(They hugged eachother) Hui mein teri joganiya..Joganiya. Tu jogi, teri Joganiya..Me Joganiyan..** Fab 4 and Navya were extremely happy whereas Harshad and Nyonika were boiling with anger. "How the hell did she reach here?" Said harshad to himself.

Precap: Fab 5 give their Performance.
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Posted: 9 years ago
Lovely update
That must be aryaman
But how is he related
To nandini
Update soon
kelie thumbnail
Posted: 9 years ago
Just loved the update...looking forward to upcoming track...really want to know who is the person that unlocked nandani...continue soon..really excited for next update...do pm me
Take care😆
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Posted: 9 years ago
Thank God she received reached on tym
Awesome update dear
Cont soon...
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Posted: 9 years ago
Aweful...
Can i get a pm for this story???
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Posted: 9 years ago
wow yay
nandu reached wow
loved it
please do continue
bye sumi
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Posted: 9 years ago


Very very beautiful and heart touching update. ..

They are ready to perform. ..but nandni missed. ..

Mystery man open the door on time. ..

Aww...very very sweet both are crying. ..

The song is awesome. .

Looking forward to seeing more soon. .

Thanks for sharing this awesome chapter. .

Stay blessed dear..





Thanks.





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Posted: 9 years ago
awesome update...
waiting for the nxt part...
update soon...😊
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Posted: 9 years ago
Wow ...finally... Nandu poch hi Gaye...manik is so happy...!

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