MaNan FF: Cant Let you go Part 57 updated Page 70

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"CAN'T LET YOU GO."



INTRODUCTION:

This story starts after the Soha Incident. Manik, after hearing nandini's statement is completely shattered. He Decides to Make her life hell. He decided that he would torture her and make her suffer. Nandini on the other hand, tried alot to speak to Manik.. She wanted him to tell what exactly happened last Night. She wanted to tell him that Nyonika Had planted a bomb in Fab5's car and threatened Nandini To speak against Manik or else the Bomb will explode. She had her hopes high.. she knew Manik will listen her..Understand her.. Trust her. She was however, unaware that Manik had lost his trust on her. She was unaware that Manik had given up on her and she was unaware that the next morning, she will see a complete new Manik.


Story Starts.

It was 8am in the morning And I was already late for the college. Today, I had to explain everything to Manik.

"I know Manik will trust me.. He knows I can't hurt him. Ai appa, Please Manik ko sab samjh ajaye" I said to myself. I immediately Went to the washroom and got freshened up. I prayed to ai appa and picked up my bag and left for the college as I was already late.

I searched for Manik everywhere, the coridoor, the Music room and everywhere. He was nowhere to be seen. Then I saw Cabir. I ran towards him and asked about manik.

"Mai bhi usi ko dhoondraha hun. Na phone uthara hai na messages reply karaha hai. patani kahan hai. "

"Aiii appa, please protect manik" I said to myself.

I went up to look for him and I saw him sitting on the roof top. I ran towards him screaming, "Manik! Tum wahan kia karahay ho?" I hugged him tighly. Manik, however, pushed me away. I was stunned. In a state of confusion I asked, "Kia hua Manik? Is everything okay? Tum theek hona?"

To this he smiled and said , "oh Nandini Murthy, thakti nahi ho tum? Apne is dramay se? like seriously how do you do his han? I must say, you're very good at it.."

"Manik please, dont assume anything. Listen to me once, let me Clear myself to you.. let me explain everything once. please manik calm down, meri baat suno.. trust me.."

"Hah, Trust YOU? you gotta be kidding me. Nandini Murthy, make yourself clear that I, Manik Malhotra Will make your life hell. I hate you Nandini. You are the worst thing happened to me ..EVER. "

I was completely shattered.. tears rolled down my face and I was speechless.. Is he the same Manik I love? I questioned myself. How can he hate me? How can he even think I can do anything against him? I held his hand and he pushed me away.. I was left hurt. Alone. and broken.

I had never seen this Manik before.. This wasn't my Manik. I said to myself. I fell down.. broken. Tears came rolling down my eyes.

"Nandu.. " came screaming Navya. Cabir Mukti dhruv and Aliya were along with her.

"Nandini,are you okay?" asked Cabir.

"Cabir... wo ...Manik.. He said.. he hates ...He hates me.."

"Nandini we heard everything.. stop crying" Said Cabir.

Index:
Introduction - above.
Part 2 - Page 1.
Part 3 - Page 1.
Part 4 - Page 2.
Part 5 - Page 2.
Part 6 - Page 2.
Part 7 - Page 2.
Part 8 - Page 2.
Part 9 - Page 3.
Part 10- Page 3.
Part 11- Page 3.
Part 12- Page 4.
Part 13- Page 5.
Part 14- Page 6.
Part 15- Page 6.
Part 16- Page 7.
Part 17- Page 8.
Part 18- Page 8.
Part 19- Page 9.
Part 20- Page 11.
Part 21- Page 11.
Part 22- Page 13.
Part 23- Page 14.
Part 24- Page 15.
Part 25- Page 15.
Part 26- Page 16.
Part 27- Page 17.
Part 28- Page 18.
Part 29- Page 19.
Part 30- Page 20.
Part 31- Page 21.
Part 32- Page 22.
Part 34- Page 23.
Part 35- Page 25.
Part 36- Page 27.
Part 37- Page 28.
Part 38- Page 29.
Part 39- Page 31.
Part 40- Page 33.
Part 41- Page 33.
Part 42- Page 35.
Part 43 -Page 37.
Part 44- Page 39.
Part 45- Page 41.
Part 46- Page 42.
Part 47- Page 44.
Part 48- Page 46.
Part 49- Page 47.
Part 50- Page 48.
Part 51 Promo- Page 51.
Part 51- Page 52.
Part 52- Page 54.
Part 53- Page 56.
Part 54- Page 59.
Part 55- Page 62.
Part 56- Page 65.
Part 57- Page 70.

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thisissanjanap thumbnail
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Exciting. . New and nice concept...:)
Loved it.
:) Update soon. Waitinggg :)
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Part 2.

Cabir: Manik? ye kia tha? tujhe ho kia gaya hai? Atleast uski bat to sun.. Uski halat dekhi tunay?"

Manik: Cabir please! I dont want to hear anything about Nandini Murthy. she's out of my life. Forever..!

Cabir: Please Manik. ek bar thande dimag se soch.

Enters dhruv.
Dhruv: Manik! Cabir thek kehra hai buddy.. tu ek bar nandini ki sun to sahi..

Manik looks at Cabir and Dhruv angrily and leaves the room.

Cabir: Old Manik is back. He wont listen to anyone now. I think we should give him some time.

Dhruv: Hmm.. you're right... we should.

Meanwhile Navya speaks to Nandini.

Navya: Nandu! aisa hua kia tha ke tumne aisa kiya?

Nandini (Crying) : Navya wo.. Nyonika Mam.. unhone.. fab 5 ki gari me...

Navya: Fab 5 ki gari me kia? bolo nandu hum sunrahe hen..tum hamse share karo..apna dil halka karo.

Nandini: unhone Fab 5 ki gari me bomb plant kiya ta and she threatened me ke agar mene manik ke against statement nahi diya to the bomb will .. the bomb will explode..

Navya: Kya? to tum ye bat manik ko batao na

Nandini:Yehi batanay ke lie me yahan ai ti but he pata hai navya.. (tears rolling down her face).. manik said I am the worst thing happened to him..

Navya: Manik ko ho kya gaya hai.. tum us se phir bat karne ki koshish kro. humadi nandu itni jaldi haar thori manegi haina?

I looked at her and smiled.. I said "Yes.. i cant give up on him..No..I cant"

I left the roof and went to look for manik as I had to talk to him..explain him everything..

I saw Manik at the coridoor.. I ran towards him.. stopped him. He looked at me Angrily and said, "Masla kia hai tumaara? Cant you just stay away from me?"

"But manik.." I said..

"Oh no. Not again. I dont wanna see this melodrama again..No."

"GUYS!" he Said loudly.. I looked up at him.. in a state of confusion..wondering what was he upto.. "You guys see this girl? Nandini Murthy! She is a good player. She knows how to Fool Rich boys by making them fall for her and then misusing them. I tell you, She's a pro at it. Sss. "

I couldn't believe my eyes. was it really manik saying all this? Everyone looked at me and laughed at me. And I couldn't believe Manik was laughing along with them. I was standing there. Ashamed. crying.

Part 3.

As I was standing there..crying and Ashamed as everyone was staring me. their eyes were looking at me as if I had done something really bad.

"Say something, Ms Murthy!" Said Manik, Loudly.

I kept seeing downwards.. and didn't speak a word. My heart was racing so fast and All I was thinking was about how to just run away from here and cry out out loud. Alone, where nobody could see me.

"Sabko sikhao na kese krleti ho tum. First she find RICH boys and then she's all all over them. HAH" Said Manik.

Everyone laughed out loud hearing this..pointing their fingers at me. Making fun of me. & Manik.. He was looking at me.. with an evil smile. I looked left and right..to look for my way out. and then suddenly I heard, "Manikk. Manik bas krdo tum pagal to nahi hogaye ho?" I looked back and saw it was Navya.. she came running and hugged me and said "Ss. Nandu. Nandu bass. hum agaye hainaa. bas karo nandu. "

Navya was very angry. she held Maniks hand and said,

" Gusse ki aag me tum itne pagal hochuke ho ke tumhr samjh he nai araha ke tum kia karahay ho.. tumhay pata bhi hai k nandini ne aisa ku kiya?"

" Oh stop it you".. Interupted Manik.

"Im not in a mood for all this." He continued. Hearing this, I said,"Navya, come..lets goo..." Navya however, looked at manik and said "Tum bohat regret kroge manik.. bohat" Saying this, she held my hand and we left.

Manik was still standing there.. I looked back. he was standing there.. he was looking down.. i was seeing him.. He was hurt. He was also hurt saying all this.. And I saw A tear came rolling down his face.. His face was blood red..He wept away his tear and said, "OUT NOW, EVERYONE."
Edited by Mananstories - 9 years ago
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AMZING :)
Loved it. :)
Update soon. Waitinggg :)
You're an amazing writer.
Stay blessed and keep writing AMZING stories :D
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It was awesome.
After long time feel happy to read story which is connected to show.


It's not like that ki other stories are not good they are but this I can visualise. So feel connected.


I really like.

Please update soon.

PM me.
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Plz update soon
Eagerly wating
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Nice read all the 3 chapters
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Part 4.


Navya took me to the canteen.
Navya: Na jane manik ko kia hogaya hai wo kuch samjh he nahi paraha.. or tm bhi na nandu. tm wahan khari uski baten kyu sunrahi thi.. tumhe ajana chaye ta ya kamskm kuch bolti tou.."
I could say nothing as my tears were just not stopping. Navya hugged me and said "Hum samjhte hen.." after sometime, navya left for her class and I kept sitting in the canteen, thinking about all the good time I had spent with Manik.. "Has manik forgotten all this?" I asked my heart. *Nandini's Home*
I was on the staircase, and my head started to pain. It seemed like everything was upside down.. I couldn't see anything.. i was blank.. I screamed 'Rishaabhhh!' and fainted on the staircase.
Chacha, Chachi And rishabh took me to the hospital immediately as I was unconscious. After sometime, the doctor came outside and said "Humne kuch tests karwaye hen inke. 1-2 din me report ajaygi. Ghabrane ki koi baat nahe hai, everything is fine..you can go meet her. "
I was lying there.. on the hospital bed and all I was thinking about was Manik. "I have to do something. I have to prove the truth to him. yes Nandini Murthy, you have to do this. " I said to myself. My phone was ringing, it was Navya. I picked up the call.
Navya: Kahan ho tum Nandu? hum kabse tumhe phone karahay hain.
Nandini: Navya kia tum abhi hospital asakti ho?
Navya: Hospital? kyu? kia hua tumhe? nandu tum theek hona? Hum abhi aatay hain.
Nandini: Mae bilkul theek hu navya its just that..i fainted..its normal. magar its about Manik..
Navya: Manik? ab kia kiya usne?
Nandini: usne kuch nahi kiya. ab jo karna hai hum karenge. muje manik ko sab sachai dikhani hai.. I need your help.
Navya: Hum abi atay hen. konse hospital me ho tum?
Nandini: City hospital.

Part 5.
After having the conversation with Nandini, Navya was leaving for the hospital but she meets fab 5 on the way..
Cabir: Oo oo Madhubaalaa! kahan jarai ho itni harbari mein?
Navya:Cabir wo..Nandini..
Manik instantly looked at navya as he heard nandini's name..(worried and tensed)
Mukti: Nandini? kia hua usay? is everything fine?
Navya looked at manik angrily..and said: Hann..wo usay kiya hoga. usne hume ghar bulaya hai..kuch kam hai usay hum Chalte hain.
Navya left for the hospial.
*At hospital*
Navya: Nandinii! kia hua tum theek hona?
Nandini: Han han navya me theek hun. Mujhe tumse kuch bat krni hai.. i need your help. Your help to prove manik that it was nyonika mams plan.
Navya: Tum abhi bhi..itna sab hojanay ke bad bhi Manik ka he sochrhi ho. Nandu, usne tumare sath kia kia kya, puray college ke samne tmhari insult ki uske bad bhi?
Nandini: Navya please.. help me.
Navya: bolo? plan kia hai?
Nandini: Navya humey na..kisi bhi tarhan nyonika mam ke office me ghusna hoga. unke laptop me College k saray rooms ki Footage record hoti hai..usi me se hume usdin ki footage nikaalni hogi jab unhonay mujay threaten kiya. agar aik bar humay wo miljaye na to im sure..manik Ko sab reality pata chaljaigi.
Navya: Lekin nandu..unke office tak hum pohnchenge kese?
Nandini: Me pohnchungi office tak. tumay bas is bat ka khyal rkhna hoga ke koi andar aye nahi.. you just have to keep everyone away from the office till the time I'm there.
Navya: okay.. Par ye sab hum karenge kab?
Nandini: after 4 days. I heard principal talking to nyonika mam about some Music Gala. It is a competition just like musicana. When Nyonika mam will be out to Sign the papers for the gala, we will go ahead with our plan. and On the music Gala night, we will bring the truth infront of everyone.
Navya: Theek hai. lets do this..i hope us rakshis ko akal ajaye.. tum sach me us se bohat pyar karti hona..
I just smiled. "Oh aii appa, please help me. I need you!" What will happen next? Will Nandini be able to unveil Nyonika infront of Manik and everyone? will manik still hurt Nandini? and why did Nandini fainted?
Precap: Announcement for the Music Gala and Nandini feels Low and has a severe headache.
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Amazing job... Keep it up..
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Loved it .:)
Update soon. Waitinggg :)
AMZING update. :)

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