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Posted: 9 years ago
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Part 6.

I got discharged from the hospital and the doctor said that my reports will take sometime and there is nothing as such to worry about. That night, after arriving home all I was thinking was about Nyonika mam.. I was just praying to aii apa that I suceed in my plan and Manik be able to understand my situation.
Next morning I woke up and left for the college. *Space Accademy*
As i was searching for navya, I heard an announcement saying "All the space students, kindly gather in the Auditorium as there is some important announcement for all of you. be there in 15 minutes"
"Omg Yes! Im sure its about The music gala..thanku so much Aii appa." I said to myself.
I Started to search for navya everywhere..i could not find her.. i called her but she wasn't picking up my calls! "Omg, I'm late..it has been 20 minutes , I should go to the auditorium.." I said to myself..
*Auditorium*
I sneaked from the window and saw fab 5 and everybody else was already there .. Manik looked restless, he was searching for something.. I entered the audi and manik looked at me. He took a long breathe as if he was now comfortable. he was okay now. "OH LOOK! its nandini murthy! The great Ms Nandini murthy. Do i have to send you an invitation card next time?" Said Nyonika Mam. Everybody started laughing. "I'm ..I'm sorry mam..I was.. " "I was busy Making a fool out of another rich boy? Hah?" Said Manik.. "Thats what youre good at it, right? ab kisko phasarai ho?" I looked at him.. I was hurt.. I controlled my emotions and kept silent. Nyonika mam and everybody else started laughing. Cabir: Manik please..stop it. kia kar raha hai tu?
Mukti: Manik.. bas kr yar.
I was still standing there, Seeing everyone laugh at me.. I was ashamed. Again. I left the room and Ran outside.. Suddenly my head started to burn.. I stopped a taxi and explained my address. My head..it was paining.. and I fainted in the taxi. the driver took me home but I was still unconscious.

Part 7.
Chacha Chachi Rishabh and everyone was worried as they saw Nandini unconscious. They called doctor.
Doctor: Everything seems to be fine then why is she fainting.. did you get the reports?
Chachi: nahi reports to 2 3 din mein milengi..doctor nandu theek to haina? wo bar bar behosh ku hui jarahi hai? Doctor: Dekhen abhi to hum kuch keh nai saktay.. Reports anay ka wait karna hoga..
Meanwhile in space academy, Navya reaches and searches for nandini everywhere.. She sees cabir mukti dhruv and aliya and asks about nandini..
Cabir Tells navya about the whole auditorium incident and navya became extremely angry.
Navya: Akhir samjh kia rakha hai tumsab ne? jo dil me ayga kroge kahoge? Ye mat smjho ke wo akeli hai..hum hain uske sath. or tm cabir.. kese dost ho han tum? balke tumsab? Dekhrhe ho ke tumhara dost kuch galat kr raha hai phir bi usay nahi roka. Agar hum hote na tumhari jaga to usi waqt manik ko lekr jatay wahan se. bas krdo yar! Bohat hogaya.. kitni beizati krogay uski.. kisi ke sath itna na kro ke jab tumhe sachai pata chale to pachtao! Sharam ani chaye tum sab ko or Manik ko.. Ye tha uska pyar? Mazak laga rakha hai.."
Cabir Dhruv aliya and mukti were quiet.. they were speechless. They looked at each other and kept silent. Navya left.
She called Nandini but she wasn't picking up the phone. Navya then called chachi.
Navya: Hello chachi, nandu kahan hai? theek haina wo?
Chachi: Han wo theek hai ab, hosh agaya hai usay..
Navya: Hum abhe atay hain..
Meanwhile Cabir goes to manik to takk about Nandini.
Cabir: Manik? Tujhe ho kia gaya hai? Tu aisa kabse hogaya? Tujhe andaza bhe hai tune aj kia kaha wo bue sabke samne?
Manik's eyes were blood red..as if he had been crying .. He looked at Cabir and said loudly: PLEASE! Can't You guys for once, Just stop. Nandini nandini nandini!!!!! Why is it always about Nandini?
Cabir: You know why.. YOU KNOW MANIK! Why can't you just stop pretending as if you hate her.. I can see it clearly in your eyes. You love her. You really do love her. then why? why are you doing this to her? to yourself? Kyun manik?
Manik: YESS! You are right I love her! Damn it! I LOVE HER! But she.. she didnt left any option for me.

Part 8.

Cabir: Manik seriously? Is that what you do with someone you love? Insult them publicly?
Manik: Cabir pleaaase! Tu yahan uska lawyer bankr aya hai?
Cabir: Lawyer? Uhh Manik! You have lost it. you have seriously lost it.
Cabir leaves.
Manik locks the room and sits on the floor. his hands on his head. His eyes were becoming red and tears came rolling down his face. He was crying. "Why nandini...why did you do that? You didnt trusted me.. Why nandini.. (Cries) WHYYY! (Throws his guitar) I always knew that no matter what..You will trust me..believe in me..but you.. No. I dont love you. I dont." Manik was continuously crying and A flashback was running in his mind.. he was thinking about All his good times with nandini.. their first kiss, The new years night.
*Nandinis home*
I was at home..crying. thinking about Manik.. I asked my heart, "Does he really love me?" "Nanduuu!" Came a voice, It was navya! She had come to see me. I wiped away my tears and hid myself under the blanket. She came inside the room and removed the blanket and said "Enough now Nandini! Kabtak chalega ye sab?"
I looked at her and said in a low voice.. "Im fine navya.. bas aik din or and manik will know everything."
Next morning , when I woke up, I said to myself "Ai appa, Please help me. today is a big day for me.. Please help me to get the footage from mam's office." After having breakfast, I sent a message to navya "I'll reach in 20 mins. meet me at the canteen" *Space Academy*
I went to the canteen and saw Navya sitting there. I went to her and said:So are you ready?
Navya: Nandini kia tum sach me ye krna chahti ho? matlab itna sab hojane ke bad bhi..?
Nandini: Navya.. please..mere liye..lets do this.
I went to check on everyone. Fab 5 were having their rehearsals in the jamming room as tomorrow was the music Gala.. i went to check on Nyonika mam. She was getting her stuff ready as she had to leave to sign the Gala contract. I messaged Navya "She'll leave in no time.. Make sure no one reaches here."
To this, Navya replied :Okay. Best of luck.

Will Nandini be able to get to the footage?
Precap: Nandini finds the footage but someone knocks on the door.
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Posted: 9 years ago
#12
Again AMZING.
So excited to read more and more.
Update soon.
Waitinggg :)
AMZING writer you are.
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Posted: 9 years ago
#13
Amazing...
It's just superb ...!!
Please continue soon...!!

Will be waiting for the update...!!
And could u please pm me whenever u update the next part...!!
Take care...

Amaaya
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Posted: 9 years ago
#14
Plzz update soon.. Awesome parts .. I just loved dem..
Read it in one go... Plzz plzzz pretty plzz update soon ..
😊
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Awesome update
Read all the parts in a go
Waiting for the next update
Update soon

Can u plz plz pm me
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Hey ur a fabulous writer...u just nailed it...plz continue soon waiting very eagerly...what's wrong with nandu what she fainted...hmm I think is something serious...hope truth come out soon...plz update soon...will be waiting... 😊
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Posted: 9 years ago
#17
Amesome update
Plz update soon
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Part 9.
Nyonika mam had left her room. I messaged Navya : Im going inside. Keep an eye on everyone.
I entered Nyonika Mam's office and searched everywhere for the footage I opened her laptop and Searched everywhere. "Nandini Murthy, do it fast. agar koi agaya na toh.. you are gone.. Aii apaaa. please help" I was searching in every folder.. "Oh my God.. Oh my God.. Thankyou Aii apaa! " I found it. I was so happy. Suddenly, Someone knocked the door.. I was afraid.. Who could it be. I hid myself under the table.. Someone came inside.. I could see someone's legs It was a girl. I couldn't see her face.
I closed my eyes. "Nandu! Hum hain" Said Navya. Oh, I took a sigh of relief. "Navya, Tumne to dara he diya!" I said.
"Cabir isi taraf araha hai jaldi niklo. hum tumhe yehi batanay aye tay" said navya. "Oh..chalo wese bi I found it." As we went outside, Cabir was standing there.. in a state of confusion, he asked "Oohkaaay, tum dono wo bhi nyonika mam ke office me? wo bhe ek sath?"
" Han wo humm..unse kuch bat krne aye tay.. " Said Navya. We inmediately left after this. Cabir to himself: Nandini, Nyonika mam ke office me. or mujhe dekhte he ese gayi jese kuch chori kr rhi ho. There is definetly something wrong. I need to know whats cooking!
Cabir Followed Nandini. *Nandini and Navya enter the Music room.*
I switched on the laptop and inserted the DVD inside. And there it was..
"Finally! We did it!" I said to Navya. "Nanduuu! Hum itne khush hainnn" Cabir was secretly seeing all this. He had heard everything. He knew why Nandini had to do all this. He said to himself , "Manik.. You're gonna regret this. BIGTIME! Infact, all of us will. I just hope kal jo ho acha he ho, or ye nandini manik ka chakar set hojaye.. or problems nahi cahyenn.." Navya: lekin nandu kia tum manik ko maf kardogi? usne tumare sath jo kiya..?
Nandini:Navya.. use jab sach pata chalega na tab dekhna..usne ye sab islye kiya kyunke usay kuch pata he nai ta.
Saying this I left the music room happily. "Tomorrow is gonna be a good day. Mr Manik Malhotra, Get ready! " I said to myself.


Part 10.

That Night I just couldn't sleep. I was so excited for the next morning. I was so happy that Manik will finally Know the truth.
Next Morning, I called Navya and asked: Is everything ready? You remember na you have to play the video in fab 5's music room after our performance?
Navya: Han ham tum fikar na karo sab humpe chordo.
I was so relieved and happy. I left for the college and saw Cabir at the coridoor. He was nervous.. he looked worried. I was standing a little away from him.. I was staring him. He looked at me, I looked away and started to move in other direction. "Nandinii! Nandini ruko." I heard. It was Cabir. "Why is he calling me?" I asked myself. "Nandini woo.. Mujhe kuch kehna tha." Said Cabir. "Han, Bolo? kia hua? Manik to theek haina?" I asked. "Han Manik ko kia hoga..wo bas.. Umm..Best of luck." He said. "Best of luck? umm.. Thankyou.. to you too." I said.. "Best of luck for today. Everything and I'm..I'm sorry.. " He said and walked away. I was confused. "Aii appa, ab isse kia hogaya" I said to myself. Our performance was just after sometime, I was getting ready. I was so excited. "The Next Coming up on the stage is Nandini Murthy and Navya Naveliii" I heard an announcement. Me and Navya went to the stage. *Music Starts*
Nazar jo teri laagi, Mae deewani hogai.. (Manik was looking at Nandini)
Deewani, Haan deewani, Deewani hogayiii.
Mashoor Meray ishq ki kahani hogai...
Jo jag ne naa mani, to mene bhi thaani..kahan thi mae dekho kahan chalii ayiii..Kehtay hain yeh deewani, Mastani hogayii.. Deewani han Deewani Deewani hogayi.
Zakham aisa tunay lagayaa.deewani deewani deewani, Deewani hogai..(Nandini looked at Manik. Tear came rolling down her face)
Marham Aisa tunay lagaya.. Ruhani ruhani ruhani, Ruhani hogayi..
Pehchan mere ishq ki ab tou, Pehchaan mere ishq ki ab tou, Rawani Rawani Rawani hogayii.
Ho, Mashoor mere ishq ki kahani hogayi.
Kehte hen ye deewani, Mastani hogayii. *Ends*
"Damn! They were too good." Said Mukti. "Yeah.. Nandini was feeling the lyrics. " Said Cabir..looking at Manik. Manik looked at him angrily.. and leaves.
Nandini's phone rang, She picked up the call, Said "WHAT?" and left immediately. She looked extremely worried and tensed.


Part 11.
Navya was looking for Nandini everywhere but was unable to find her. "Ye nandini is waqt kahan gayab hogai.. Fab 5 ki performance me bas kuch hi der hai or nandu yahan nai. hum kia karen ab..hume video play krni thi magar ye nandini hai ke kahin nazar he nai arai." Navya said to herself.
meanwhile fab 5 were heading towards their jam room as The next performance was theirs! Navya saw them entering the Fab 5's Jam room. "Oh no! ye log to andar gaye.. ab hum kia karen. nandini phone kyu nai uthari akhir kahan jasakti hai is waqt. ab hum kia karen." Navya was extremely worried as nandini was to be seen nowhere.. she asked everyone but no one saw her. She kept asking herself "Kia hum akele he.. kia hum wo video play karden.." She was confused.
Nandini was returning to the college. she was coming back in an auto.. "Oh ai appa, please stop navya. I just hope she doesn't play the video.. I just hope she doesn't. please navya..dont." She said to herself. Her phone's baterry was dead. She was unable to contact Navya. Nandini was continuously crying..she was tensed.. her face was becoming pale.. *Space Academy*
Suddenly the lights of the jam room turned off. "What the hell.. ye kia hua?" Said Manik Loudly! "Brace yourselfves.. the show has begun." Said Cabir to himself. He knew what was gonna happen.
On the other hand, Nandini was just hoping that manik doesn't find out the truth, "Bhaiiyya, auto tez chalo na..mera jaldi puhanchna zaroori hai.." Said Nandini, to the driver.
Meanwhile in space academy, Navya inserted the DVD.. Fab 5 looked at the screen..*Video plays*
Nyonika: Manik Killed Soha!
Nandini: No. He can't. agar abi aii appa bhi akar mujhe bolenge na ke manik killed soha, i wont believe them then how can u even think k apke kehne pr me uske against koi statement dungi?
Nyonika: Hah! Nandini, Nandini, Nandini! You're too naive! I feel so bad for you.
Nandini: You feel bad for me? I feel Bad for you Mrs Malhotra. I cant believe that a mother wants her son to suffer.. but you know what? I won't let this happen. I can never doubt him. I can never speak against him.
Nyonika. You will. You know why?
Precap: Navya confronts Fab 5.
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Cliff hanger .. Every ones reaction specially manik
Updates were awesum... Plzz update soon .. Very very soon 😊
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Part 12
*Video still playing*
Nyonika: If you wont do this then You will be responsible for all that would happen with Manik and his friends
Nandini looked Confused.. "What will happen? Kia kehna chahti hain ap?"
Nyonika: "Hah! jis gaari me Fab 5 is waqt haina, There's a bomb planted in that car.. and trust me nandini, If you wont agree to this, The bomb will explode. I will make sure it does.
Nandini: What? She looked shocked.. horrified by the thought of loosing manik.. She started shivering.. How? How can you even do this? He's your son! or mae apki bat ka yaqeen ku karun?
Nyonika: Choice is yours nandini, Your desicion will be responsible for everyhing..and I'm sure..I'm sure you dont want manik to die..after all, You love him right?
Nandini was crying..
*Video Ends*
Meanwhile Nandini was stuck in traffic, "Ai appa pleaseee, Navya wo video play na karay bas please stop her please manik ko pata na chale i cant let this happen.. no ai appa.. agar manik ko pata chalgaya to im sure he will.come back to me..lekin me.. i cant.. i cant tell him..i cant face him...no ai appa please"
*Space Accademy*
Video ends and Mukti alya Dhruv Were shocked. Manik was standing still.. he had no expressions on his face..His face was becoming red.. his hands started to shiver.. he sat on the floor.. put his head on the floor and started to cry. "She did this to save us!!!!" Shouted Mukti. "aur humne kia kara guys? Manik uski insult karta raha or hum..humne use roka tak nahi and she.. she.. WHY!" "I told you, Listen to her once par nai, Tujhe to bas gussa sawaar tha na" Cabir said to Manik. Navya came outside.. she starting clapping. "Kaisa laga phir? han manik? han mukti? Han FAB5 ? The great fab 5? Kaisa laga jan kar ke jis Nandini Murthy ki tumlogo ne poore college ke samne zaleel kiya, jiski beizati ki, Usi nandini Murthy ne Tumlogo ko bachanay ke liye, Tumlogon ki jan bachanay ke liye Ye sab kiya." Navya laughs.. "Arey manik? Ro kyu rahay ho? Tumhe to khush hona chaye na. or tum mukti dhruv cabir alia, Arey cheer up Guys!" Navya confronted all of them. Manik was crying.. he was broken. He didn't say a word. He was silent but deep down inside, he was crying. Cabir looked at him.. "I knew this would happen..please Manik control yourself..stay strong.." Said Cabir to himself.

Precap:Fab 5's performance starts and Nandini comes back!

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