MaNan FF: Cant Let you go Part 57 updated Page 70 - Page 4

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Posted: 9 years ago
#31
Part 14.
Fab 5 came to the stage, They all took their positions. Manik's eyes were searching for Nandini.. He was unable to see her. "Wo yahan nahe hai.. Relax, take a deep breath. Performance khatam hotey he hum usay dhundenge. I promise, everything will be fine.." Whispered Cabir. Manik looked at him, smiled and hugged him.
Navya was standing among the audiences. The crowd was screaming with excitement , "Fab 5, fab 5!"
*The performance started*
(Manik singing)
Paas aye, Duryaan phirbhi kum na hueen.. Aik adhuri..Si hamari kahani rahii..
Asmaan ko zameen, yeh zaroori nahi..Jaanle..Jaanle.. Ishq sacha wohi, jisko milti nahi..Manzilen.. Manzilen.. (Tears came running down his eyes. Cabir and Mukti were looking at him)
Rang thhe, noor tha, Jab kareeb tu tha.. Ek jannat sa tha, yeh jahaan ..Waqt ki ret pe kuch mere naam sa, Likh ke chhod gaya tu kahaan.. (Manik closed his eyes..he was thinking about Nandini)
Humaari adhuri kahaani.. Humaari adhuri Kahaani..
*Nandini enters*
Humaari adhoori kahaani.. (Manik opens his eyes. sees Nandini) Humari adhoori...
Manik stopped singing. He looked at Nandini and Ran towards her.. Cabir, Mukti alya and dhruv were shocked. They were standing there, on the stage. Manik Hugged Nandini. He was crying.

Precap: Nandini Pushed away Manik. Cabir looked shocked.
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Posted: 9 years ago
#32
Awesome. Plzz post the nextbpart also.. wen ever possible.. will be waiting.. plzz plzzz plzzzplzzzplzzz..
Waiting for it...
Plz post
Plzzz
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Posted: 9 years ago
#33
THANKYOU SO MUCH!! Thankyou everyone for following my story. I really feel so overwhelmed by reading your comments/feedback!
Keep sending in your love :")
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Posted: 9 years ago
#34
Awesome update dear
Read all parts in one go
Cont soon...
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Posted: 9 years ago
#35
Part 15.
Manik Hugged Nandini. "Nandini, Nandini, I'm sorry.. Please Nandini, Please forgive me.." Manik was crying. Everyone was looking at them. "Manik leave me." Said Nandini. "No..No, I wont let you go now..no I wont leave you.." Said Manik. "What are you doing manik? Leave me, everyone's looking at us!" Said Nandini. "I dont care.. I wont leave you..Im sorry nandini Im sorry.." Said Manik. "For God's Sake Manik, LEAVE ME!" Shouted Nandini. Saying this, She pushed him away. Cabir and Navya were Shocked. "Nandini.. I know..I know.. all of this.. its weird for you..I know. But I ..Im really very sorry Nandini.. please.." Said Manik. "Sorry? Sorry for what? Mr Manik Malhotra.. me and you.. we are over!" Said Nandini. She sounded different. Navya was shocked. she couldn't believe that nandini was saying all this. "Our story ended that day when you insulted me infront of the entire college!" Manik was hurt. "But Nandini.." He said. "LET ME GO!" She said and left.

Cabir followed Nandini. Mukti Dhruv and Alya came to console manik.

Nandini ran away from there and went to the music room.
She fell on the ground. She was crying.
*Khoyii.. Khoyyii si hun mae.. kyun ye dil ka haal hai.. Dhundle Saaray khuaab hain.. uljha har khayal hai.. Saari kalliyan murjha gayeen.. rang unke yaadon me rehgaye.. Saaray gharonde ret ke..lehrein ayieen , lehron me behgaye..*
"I'm sorry manik.. I'm sorry.. " She said to herself.


Edited by Mananstories - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago
#36
You are really an awesome writer..Just love ur story.Pls continue soon
Edited by kelie - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago
#37
Does she have any disease?
If it is then might be something related to brain only.
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Posted: 9 years ago
#38
Part 16.

"I wish I could Just hold you..and never let you go.. I wish I could Wipe away your tears.. I'm sorry Manik.." Said Nandini to herself.
Mukti Alya and Dhruv consoled an upset Manik. He was shattered.. "Suna tunay Buddy? She says its over between us.. Its OVER between us.. How could I let this happen.. " His eyes were blood red. His hands were shivering.. He was sweating. His condition was becoming worse. "Manik, stand up.. apni halat dekho..we should leave." Said Mukti. "NO!" Shouted Manik. "I have to go.. I need to do this.." Said Manik. "Manik please.. Is waqt us se bat karne ka koi faida nahi.. Subha ka wait krle.." Said Mukti. "Yeah manik come we should leave. We'll drop you home. you shouldn't be driving alone right now." Said Alya. "No, I have to go meet Nyonika, Im fine guys..I'll see you tomorrow" He wiped away his tears, His facial expressions became serious and he was extremely angry. He left to meet Nyonika.
"I hope everything becomes okay." Said Mukti.
On the Other hand, Cabir went after Nandini. He entered the Music room, he saw Nandini sitting on the floor. "Nandini.." Said Cabir. Nandini immediately wiped away her tears and stood up. "Han?" She said. "kia hogaya tumhe achanak? Ye sab kia tha?" He asked. "Kia tha Matlab? Please Cabir, I dont wanna talk about this..leave me alone." She said. "NO! I AM NOT LEAVING YOU ALONE. YOU HAVE TO TALK! EXPLAIN THIS TO ME." He shouted. "like seriously? and why do you think i will explain myself to you?" Nandini asked. "Tum to manik ke samne sachai lanay ke liay itni excited thi, itna kuch kiya tumne then jab sab sach sabko pata chalgaya tab tumne ye kia kara?" Cabir asked. "Excited? what are you talkin about cabir?" Nandini asked. "Stop pretending infront of me Nandini. I Know EVERYTHING! You sneaked into nyonikas office to find that freakin DVD which was played tonight. and when the truth came out, you ruined everything. WHY?" He asked.
Nandini was shocked listening to this. She was blank.

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Posted: 9 years ago
#39
loved it loved it loved it.
awesome yaar u write so well.
plz plz update next one soon
eagerly waiting.
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Posted: 9 years ago
#40
Awsmmm

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Superrr part

Study in one go

Awsmmm

Mind blowing

Y nandu do this

Because of nandu's report

Coun sooon

Can't wait to study

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