MaNan FF: Cant Let you go Part 57 updated Page 70

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Posted: 9 years ago

#41

beautiful writing. please update soon dear.waiting

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Amazing update
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Update was so emotional.waiting for more upadates eagerly. Pls continue soon

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AMAAYA SAHANI

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Posted: 9 years ago

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Hey...

It's so so... awesome... no words...

U wrote it so well...

Reveal the secrets soon...

Will waiting for the update...

And thanks for the pm...!!

Amaaya

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Waiting for the update.Pls post the next part asap dear

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vini19

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Nice story. Waiting for the next pdate

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Saba Masood.

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Part 17.

I was still standing there, looking at Cabir. His eyes were questioning me. "Cabir, Please. Let me go." I said and left the college. "Why is she doing this? Ek problem jati nahi dusri ajati hai..I just hope Manik is fine." Says Cabir to himself.

Manik reached home, it was late night. He knocked Nyonika's room. She wasn't opening the door. Manik kept on knocking harder. "How the hell can she sleep peacefully after doing this to me?" Manik said to himself and continued knocking the door. "WHAT IS THE PROBLEM?" Shouted Nyonika from inside. "Come out. RIGHT NOW!" Exclaimed Manik. Nyonika opened the door, She looked extremely sleepy.

"How could you?" He asked. "Manik? are you serious? You knock my door at 2am to ask me this bullshit?" Nyonika asked. "Bullshit? Oh please nyonika, You stop this bloody bullshit of yours and Gos Damnit, ANSWER ME! How could you plant a bloody bomb in our car?" He shoulted. "Bomb? Oohkayy, Now I get it." She said. "Bachpan se lekr abtak.. we have been playing this give and take game.. isn't that enough for you?" Manik asked. "Manik, look. Go to sleep. we'll talk about this tomorrow." She said. "NO! YOU HAVE TO TALK RIGHT NOW! Answer me why did you do this!!" He shouted again. "Lower down your voice Manik. That girl, Nandini.. she doesn't deserve you. There is something called *Standard* You know?" She said. "Standard? HAH! Ms Nyonika Malhotra is talking about standards! Harshad k sath jo hua uska kia standard tha han?" He asked. "Manik,dont bring Harshad between all of this. Ive already had enough of this Harshad. " She said, pointing her finger towards him. "So why did you bring NANDINI between all of this..(He started crying) Why did you do this Nyonika!! WHY!! I cant..I cant live without her..why could you take the most precious thing of my, away?" He asked.. He was crying. He was hurt. Nyonika was standing there, Staring at him. She sighed and turned to walk away. Manik stopped her. "You have to pay for this I'm telling you.. I won't let you go so easily. Its about Nandini. " He said to her and went to his room.

Precap: Nandini and Manik remembering their good times.

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Posted: 9 years ago

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Aswome plz next part soon

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I KNOW I AM BEING GREEDY.😉😉...BUT WHAT TO DO...UR STORY IS JUST FABULOUS...PLS PLS POST THE NEXT PART SOON😊😛

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Saba Masood.

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Part 18.

Manik went to his room. He sat on the floor. Put his hands on his head and shouted "I'm sorry..I'M SORRY NANDINI" He started to cry. His face has become all red and his eyes were weeping!
*Flashback starts*

Nandini: "Me and you..its over Manik!" *Kho gayaa. Ghum Hogaya.. waqt se churaya tha jo..apna banaya tha.. Ho tera..wo mera.. Sath nibhaya tha jo..Apna banaya tha.. (Manik looks at the lamp which nandini had gifted him on diwali) Chadariya jeeni re jeeni, Chadariya jeeni re jeeni, Ankhen bheeni, ye bheeni, re bheeni..Yaadein jheeni re jheeni re jheeni..*

He was remembering all the heartless things he did to her. He was so ashamed of himself.

Nandini was lying on her bed. She was also crying remembering Manik. "I didnt wanted to let you go manik..I didn't.. I wish I could stop you.." She said to herself. **Chadariya jeeni re jeenii, Chadariya jeeni re jeeni..ankhen bheeni ye bheeni re bheeni, yaadein jheeni re jheeni re jheeni.."

The next morning, everyone reported back to te college. Though, it was a new day but the scars of yesterday were still fresh. The principal had gathered all the students in the auditorium. Fab 5 and Navya were there but Nandini was not. Manik was continuously looking at the door, in search of Nandini. Cabir looked at him and said "Manik, chill.." Just when they were talking, The door opened and it was Nandini! "Nandu" Said Navya! Nandini went to her. She looked at Manik and said "I know youve cried all night..I know..Im sorry." to herself.

Precap: Principal scolds fab 5 for their disappointing performance and warned them for the second round of Music Gala.

Edited by Mananstories - 9 years ago