CAN'T GET OVER YOU. ch-10-pg 17 update (19-04-16) - Page 4

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Posted: 9 years ago
#31
Update was good but too short...but it will be ok if you update twice in a day...

Continue soon...
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Posted: 9 years ago
#32
😊 wow...manik baba kitne der tak ghurte rahoge???
caring abhi...so sweet of him..i hope kabir ko jaldi un dono ko se gussa khatam ho jai...
abhi is so understanding..
off course,madhubala ji...i was waiting for her entry...
but,yaar bura maat mano,woh don't you think ki updates thori shot hain??
i hope everything is fine with you...
plz thori long updates de do...
take care
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Posted: 9 years ago
#33
CABIR BHI ABHI NANDINI KO NOTICE KARNE LAGI...HOPEFULLY COUSIN KA RLTN THIK HOE JAYE...
NAVYA NANDINI FRND BANI...
ABHI KITNA CARE & LOVE KARTI HA APNI SISTER NANDINI SA...ABHI KO SHAYAD BURA LAGA CABIR KI AVOID KARNE KI WAJAH SA...
NAVYA KO BAAT KARNE SA MAYBE CABIR STOP KIYA...
PLZ NEXT PART ASAP...PRETTY PLZ
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Posted: 9 years ago
#34
Read all d parts in one go
Amazingg
Superbbb update
Lovd it
Continue soon
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Posted: 9 years ago
#35
Long post update karo na nd jaldi bhu itne se man (heart) nhi bharta
Update ASAP
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Posted: 9 years ago
#36
Awsmmm

Awsmmm

Awsmmm

Now i can't get over of your storyyy


It's superrr

Cuteee

Lovely abi

Mystry cabir


Coun sooon

Can't wait for next chap

Veryyy interstinggg

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Posted: 9 years ago
#37
Loved it
Amazing update
Manik a love sick puppy
Continue soon
Do pm me
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Posted: 9 years ago
#38
Nice going!!
Loved it ^_^
Update soon n pm if u can :)
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Posted: 9 years ago
#39
CHAPTER 6

" hi madhubala" cabir said with evil smile. and stepped forward navya. navya instantly back off with horrified expression.
" arre itna daar kyu rahi ho.. come here .. " cabir gesture her to come toward him. aliya and dhruv were controlling their laugh . nandani and abhi were confused. and manik and mukti were standing there with tensed look on their face .( manik ka samaj me ata hai 😉 par mukti kyu ...?? 😕 )

" come here meet my cousins from banglore , kal he aye hai yaha ..." cabir said turning his head toward her.
abhni (abhi-abh- + nandani-ni- =abhni) smile at this as it is the first time cabir said cousins to them..while navya gulped and sweat form in her head ... remembering her past torture .
" cou ...coussinn..." she stammered as she realize what she had done she herself invite trouble..
" ya cousins ... " cabir said glaring her deadly ..

" tum sab ek dusre ko jante ho " abhi asked to clear his confusion .

" oh ya navya hum sab ko bahut achhe se janti hai right navya" cabir said with wicked smile .. giving her' if u open ur mouth i gonna kill u' look.
" ji ...ji . haa... " navya said . her voice was shaking ..sensing the situation that she can break down any moment. manik jump in between

" ahh navya ...tum itne dino baad ... chalo chalo hum sab ko tumse bahut zaroori baat karni hai" manik said with fake smile ... it take navya whole two minutes to believe her ears ... THE manik malhotra was talking to that too sweetly ..last time she heard manik was when she get locked in college garbage boxes .and that was terribly horrible.
before she can react navya was dragged by the two monsters out of the canteen..

both abhni are hell confused by their behavior as well dhruv and aliya are confused .. mukti turned toward abhni and smile awkwardly..

" long time u see"
abhni nodded and sit in their place..

after a while manbir came inside the canteen and took their place .. nandani notice that navya is not with them. so she looked at them questionly and asked..
"navya?"
manbir looked at her and cabir said
" woh usse kuch kaam tha toh woh chali gayi" he said without making eye contact with her. nandani sense something wrong but nodded to them.

after finishing their lunch they headed toward their class ...but in midway fab5 decided to jam so they went to music room.
as soon they enter the room.
" what was that?"

that's it.. 😊
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Posted: 9 years ago
#40
POOR NAVYA!!! MONSTER MANIK & PRANKSTER CABIR KI DAR SA HALAT KHARAB HOE GAYI...
NANDINI KO SAMJHE AGAYA KUCH GARBAR HA...
JAB NANDINI SACH PATA CHALAGA TAB KYA HOGA???FINALLY CABIR ABHNI KO APNA COUSIN BOLA...HOPE ASAP COUSIN MANE BHI LAE...
FAB5 KI JAM ROOM KYA HUA???
PLZ NEXT PART ASAP...PLZ...PRETTY PLZ

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