CAN'T GET OVER YOU. ch-10-pg 17 update (19-04-16) - Page 2

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Posted: 9 years ago
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CHAPTER 3

manik pov

we all looked at each other and then cabir who is now pulling his hair frustratedly.we all sigh.and go toward him.
"cabir y don't u understand ,let it be na yaar. unhone kuch kiya toh nahi hai na ..phir kyu tu itna chid raha hai unse."
i said to convinced him becoz i really don't want to hurt nandani.
" tum sab samaj nahi rahe ho i jus..just can't stand them.. pata nahi kaha se acha nak aa gaye hai . jabs aye hai tabse mom uski hi bate karti rahe ti hai . i can't tolerate them bas"
" cabir y u're behaving like a kid .. mom ne yeh mom ne woh ... "
mukti said straight forwardly ...
" i don't know yaar i can't share mom with anyone.. u called it kiddish insecurity or whatever . but they have to go from here . tum sab yeh batau ki mere sath ho ya nahi"
" u know we all are always with u"
i said taking him for a hug then all came and we share a group hug.i sigh what ever it is i can't just leave him when he need me . we all know how possessive he is for his mom after the death of his father.
end of pov

"so tell us kya karna hai "
alya said ..
" kuch jada nahi bas chote chote pranks ...se kam chal jaiga ."
cabir said evily
just then servant come to call them for lunch . they all headed toward dinning hall.
" cabir i have good news for u ... abhi and nandani also will study in space with u all "
cabir mom said excitedly.
" good news my foot"
cabir murmmer under his breath.
" cabir y don't u understand they are ur cousins behave with them properly .. "
cabir mom scolded him.
" mom ap mujhe kyu bol rahi hai. pata nahi kaha se agaye pehle toh nahi teh mere cousins phir abb kaha se."
cabir said sarcastically.
" cabir u don't know anything ... so keep ur mouth shut .. " cabir mom sternly said.
all the rest fab 4 were kept silent becoz it really rare when cabir mom become angry ..
" any important discussion is going on kya" abhi came with ever jolly mood.and sit in chair.
qq" nahi beta bas random talk wese where is nandani .. lunch nahi karna usko"
cabir mom ask .manik became alert by the name of nandani.
" actually nandu had slept itni long journey usne kabhi pehle ki nahi na toh thak gayi hai..app chinta mat ki jiye me uske utte hi usse khila dunga."
abhi said politely . manik face fell. by this information as he want to meet her once again ..soon they complete their lunch silently and rest fab 4 head back to their home.

at night, malhotra mansion.

manik is sitting in bed playing his guitar .with closed eyes. ever since he came home only nadani face come in front of hos eyes he don't know what is happening to him.
he sigh and open his eyes.

"Nandani y i can't get over u ...'
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Posted: 9 years ago
#12
hey,just read your story...
it's nice...
fav5 kya karenge sweet,polite siblings k sath??
want to know more...
plz continue...
all the best
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Posted: 9 years ago
#13
Awesome update
Loved all the 3 parts
Cont soon

Can u plz pm me
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Posted: 9 years ago
#14
CHAPTER 4

A new fresh beginning ,bring this morning ..many relationship may change .may grow.may ruined..only time will decide this...


" cabir ruko abhi aur nandani bhi tumahare sath jayege ... "
cabir mom ordered him when he is going to college .

"mom plz na driver ko bol dijiye woh drop kardenge unko .. main hi kyu"
cabir said .he is damn frustrated.

" cabir tum jareho na toh unhe bhi sath le jao... petrol bhi baj jayega ... "
cabir mom said . she just want that her children will spend sometime together and try to know each other.

" petrol like seriously mom ."

" hey good morning "
abhi came down to hall.. and greeted them with all time joyable voice.
" good morning to u also beta ... i must say someone looking handsome today..." cabir mom said .
" and someone looking gorgeous as always ' abhi said and wink at mom.cabir mom laugh and cabir roll his eyes ..

" all set for new college"
" yup... "

" cabir offers u two for a ride to college and mene college dean se baat karli hai . tum bas jake report karna ok .. and where is nandani.?"

" she is talking to amms..."
abhi inform her. she nodded . all this while cabir was busy with his cell phone. paying no heed to their conversation.nandani arrived after sometime and greet them and both take blessing of cabir mom . and went to start their new life at college.

soon they reach college the ride was silent no speak actually abhi try to talk to cabir didn't response back so he kept quiet all this while nandani just observing bpth of them quietlywhen they are in parking area fab 5 call cabir to come for jamming .
" abhi i get to go ... hope u don't mind to find Dean office by yourself."
he said
" yeah it's ok .. bad me milte hai chale nandu."
abhi said with a smile and went inside the college with her.
soon they report the dean about their arrival. and headea toward their class. when they heard all hooting sound from outside garden.they both went there out of curiosity . and then they saw fab 5 was all ready to perform there . they stand and manik start to sing..with strumming his guitar.

I shouldn't love u , but i want to.
I just can't turn away.
I shouldn't see u but i can't move
I can't look away

manik eyes were constantly searching for her. he try hard to control himself . to not get attracted to her. but his stupid heart doesn't stopped to think about her. he was determined last night that he will ignore her but cabir told them they also came . instantly a sudden urge of seeing her developed inside her .

and i don't know how to be fine when I'm not
cause i don't how to make a feeling stop

then he saw her .. there standing at a side of crowd holding abhi hand. manik frown y she is so scared. . but he saw something which caught his attention her smile her blue eyes shine whenever she smile.. so bright that he feel his heart is melting becoz of that.

Just so u know
the feeling taking control of me/B]
[B]and i can't help it.

i won't sit around , i can't let him win now
thought u should know
i tried my best to let go of u
but i don't want to,i just gotta say it all
before i go.
just so u know

he was singing continuously looking at her

it's getting hard to be around u
there's so much i can't say
do u want me to hide the feeling
look the other way

he remembered yesterday incident where he lost control on himself when she is around. he want to hide this feeling from her. but again jitna dabne ki kosish karo aur baad jata hai. 😉

and i don't know how to be fine when I'm not
cause i don't know how to make a feeling stop
Just so u know, just so u know

just as he finished all crowd hooting loudly .. but he was continuously staring her .
after sometime all were walking toward their class. rest of was staring at them . first there is new student in space that too hot and cute one and secondly they are with fab 5.
manik pov

" so what is ur course abhi" mukti ask out of no where . we all stare at her she gave us what look.
" 1st year MBA music as side course . " abhi said polite with a smile . and mukti smile back at him.
" well we choose music as main course" this time dhruv spoke.
" and nandani u .. i mean what is ur one" dhruv ask .. ok he seems interested in her and this only thought is enough to rush anger inside me..
" it's bio tech" she answered sweetly.and this is so good ro hear. she had said only 4 words since we met ..oh god manil are u crazy u actually counting her word..seriously u re gone man..totally.

wow science and all hah
alya said .. now only me and cabir left to involved in their conversation and i decide to speak but stopped by abhi.
" tumhara class agaya nandu .. go enjoy ur new life .. aur kich hia toh mujhe call karna .. ok and make new friends hmmm..."
saying this he peck her forehead and said " all the best baccha make me proud"
both girls were looking at them with awwee..
Girls i sighed.
" bye bhai all the best have a good day" she peck abhi cheek and smile. ok 12 words hmmm...i chuckled at my own thought.
and she walked towards her class . we all saw cabir face fell. ok so he is expecting to be wished by her oh cabir.but suddenly she came running and pecked cabir .cheek.. and said ( okim feeling jeal...no no it is not that) yeah " have a good day cabir bhai" and she smile at him and run toward her class. i saw abhi was smiling and look at the door until she dissapeare he really love her a lot.
mukti nug me and said " what" and i said
"17 words"


LONG LONG UPDATE ENJOY IT 😉
PLZ DO COMMENT IF U LIKE IT 😊
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Posted: 9 years ago
#15
hey just got ur story . This is nice year . And counting word thing was very nice . And cabirs expecting to get wished by nandu was also nice . Nice update . Continue soon
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Posted: 9 years ago
#16
Nice update
Manik is counting her words
Love abhi & Nandu bonding
Continue soon
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Posted: 9 years ago
#17
😳 manik is counting her words...how sweet...
lovely..
loved the abhni (abhi and nandini)bonding...
keep updating...
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Posted: 9 years ago
#18
HI...MUST SAY IT IS A AMAZING STORY...LIKE IT SO MUCH...
ABHINI R BRO-SIS...CABIR IS THEIR COUSIN..
CABIR IS ACCEPTING THEM..BUT HE WISH IF NANDINI GREET HIM...& NANDINI DID THAT...
HOPE ABHI NANDINI KI 7A CABIR KI RLTN ACHA HOE JAYA...
PLZ NEXT PART ASAP
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Posted: 9 years ago
#19
19 words...I have counted 2 times.

hehe,it was really an awesome update,I just read all the chapters noe.This concept is really different.I'm liking it.
The last part was really cute.One side Cabir wants to get rid of them & other side he was expecting a kiss on cheek from nandini.It was really awesome

Update soon.
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Posted: 9 years ago
#20
Awesome update...
He counted the words she talked..seriously.. Majnu manik.
Pls continue soon..

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