CAN'T GET OVER YOU. ch-10-pg 17 update (19-04-16) - Page 5

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Posted: 9 years ago
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nice update...
madhubala darr gayi.
per chotu sa tha..
waiting for more
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Posted: 9 years ago
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CHAPTER 7

as soon as they entered the music room. aliya and dhruv turn toward them and shout
" what was that???[B]
the trio was starled for a second but then understand what they mean.but they keep silent ..becoz they themselves don't know y they are behaving like this lately.they ignoring dhrulya question sit in their respective place for jamming.
[B]" we are asking something ..y u all were behaving weird in canteen"
aliya asked looking totally pissed off.

" yeah cabir tu toh unhe darna chata tha na toh navya se acha option kaha hai uske sath humne kya kiya agar woh tumahare cousins ko bata de ..toh ajj ki flight le kar bhaag jana tha" dhruv asked..
cabir know he is right .they can use navya as weapon to threatened them. but he doesn't want them to think wrong about him . y if he doesn't care about them so y to care what they will think. about him. when he see their genuine try to be friendly with him. their innocence and kindness.. he feel he is doing wrong with them.but when his mom praise them.. he see them taking his place and he just can't share his mom. ( jealousy 😉 hmmm..)

" ha. .. woh actually ha agar unhone mom ko bata diya toh isliye roka navya ko unhe kuch batane se " he come up with excuse..
dhrulya nodded but turn toward manik and mukti .
" what mene bhi isliye hi kiya taki cabir ki mom usse gussa na ho jaye get it " manik said .
"same here" mukti also said.
all nodded
soon they finished their jamming session and headed toward their other classes. in way they got their teacher Mr. raghav sharma ..he stopped them.

" music fest will going to held very soon ..so will u all volunteer to help in preparation " he asked .. he know the answer but phir bhi try karne me kya jata hai. 😉

" nope " was the only answer by them .raghav shake his head in disbelief. and walked pass by them.
when something clicked cabir's mind . he abrutly turn amd shout .

" sir .. wait " he ran toward him rest fab 4 was confused with this.
" actually i can suggest u a name . . who can help u . abhi my cousin he is so good in this.. and willing too.if u want u can ask him" cabir ask making innocent face .. raghav know he is upto something but at that timehe needs Help for preparation . so he agreed .
" and sir usse mat batana ki mene uska naam suggest kiya hai u see ...his self esteem may be hurt" cabir said as sincerely as he can.raghav nodded and went.
as soon as he went cabir and other burst into laughter except mukti .. 😉 becoz they know how raghav is when it come to work . aur abhi ki condition soch ke hi unko hasi arahi hai 😆

" chalo dil ko kuch sukun mila" cabir said dramatically..and headed toward their class.

after a while
fab 5 were in music room..

"yaar im hungry. main canteen ja raha hoon" cabir said and get up to go.
"hamare liye bhi leke ana bukhad" all shout and cabir roll his eyes.and went.

" cabir " abhi called him when he reached the canteen.
"what" cabir sigh and asked..

" woh actually raghav sir ne mujhe kuch kaam diya hai toh mujhe ghar jane me time lagega tum plz nandu ko dropped kar do" abhi request him. nandani is also there and staring at cabir.. cabir can see how abhi is tired suddenly he feels guilty about it .but chuck it the very moment.

" yaa... ok .. nandani u stay in class only ill come to pick u up ok" cabir said with straight face . abhi smile and looked at nandani .. nandani nodded abhi thank cabir and went to finished the work. cabir also went to music room and nandani to her class.

cabir didn't told them about this as they will start again asking question.
so they start jamming

after an hour.

" guys let's go to my house .. its been so long we partied" aliya suggest ..they all nodded
" yup let's go" cabir said AND totally forgot about nandu.. 😲

in aliya house ..
fab5were partying hard ...all were enjoying . when suddenly cabir phone's ring .

" hello" cabir answered.
" hello cabir .. it's abhi here where are u guys...abhi tak ghar kyu nahi aye ..and nandu kaha hai " abhi asked in worried tone.

Shit .. realization hit cabir .. he forgot her how could he how... glass which he was holding slip from his hand and break into pieces . gaining fab 4 attention .

" hello cabir are u there hello" abhi continuously calling him from other side ..

" yea ...yeah abhi woh nandani" cabir stammered.manik instantly jumped from his place hearing her name ..

"kya nandani woh thik toh hai na meri baat karwa usse" abhi asked worriedly.cabir had no idea what to do
" ha ...ha nandani yehi hai.. woh actually hum aliya ke ghar me hai ..woh abhi washroom gayi hai .. hum bas aa hi rahe hai" cabir said nervously abhi is still worried but agreed with hum saying to come fast.

as soon as cabir hung the call..manik jump on him .
" where is nandani?" he asked sternly..
" main usse college se pick karna bhul gaya" he said helplessly and worriedly.
" WHAT" they all shout ..they just can't believe he forgot her to pick up..
" cabir how can u be so irresponsible ...just how ..u kaise" manik asked angryly ... he was scarred for her so much ..he just grab car key and ran outside. cabir also ran and sit in car which manik had already started..and drove .rest fab 3 also follow them in dhruv car.

soon they reach college and saw the gate was locked manik call the guards and order them to open the gate.. soon fab 3 reached they all searching for her .
suddenly cabir remembered that he asked her to wait for him in class ... he rush toward the class .manik also follow him.

as soon as he opened the door the sight make him relief. nandani was sitting their in corner of class reading a book..
cabir ran toward her hug her tightly ..she was taken aback with this but soon realize that it's her bhai .so she said
" app aa gaye bhai" she said innocentlyly like a kid who is waiting for her daddy to come to pick her up. and cabir feel more guilty ..she trust him so much ki usne kaha class me rahena and she obeyed him .. how innocent she is .pure she is .. he feel so protective toward her.and he ..he forgot ...he shiver thinking what would happened if abhi didn't call.
he broke the hug and looked at her she smile sweetly at him.
all of sudden someone push him and hug her .. well its manik .. he was so so worried for her as soon as he see her he can't control himself and ended up hugging her.but to his surprise she hugged him back .
cabir also taken aback by this side of manik . he known something is jarror gadbad here.
manik broke the hug and looked at her deep blue eyes..and she smile at him.
cabir get up to leave when nandani hold his thumb and said ever so cutely
"bhai I'm hungry "
both manbir smile at looking at their innocent kid who take hell out of them in this few minutes ...


SO LONG UPDATE AS MANY READER HAD SUGGEST ME. . MY EXAMS IS GOING TO START SOON SO CAN'T UPDATE .. TILL IT FINISHED ..HOPE U ALL UNDERSTAND .
AND IF U LIKE THE UPDATE PLZ DO COMMENT
THANK U 😊 😊
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Posted: 9 years ago
#43
awww,so sweet update...thanks ...exams ke liye all the best..
update was so nice..cabir ka to solid reason!! Tha,per manik aur mukti ka reason!! Was hilarious...abhni siblings ke charms se kab tak bachenge ai log...
cabir abhi ko kam pe phasa k khud guilty feel kar raha,thts great.
he forgot nandu...pereshan manik..
wow,nandu class main he thi waiting for her vy..so cute..
i loved this chotusa nandu...manbir hug her...cute...
thanks for the updates again..
take care,God bless you
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Posted: 9 years ago
#44
Awsmmm

Awsmmm

Awsmmm

All the best

Veryyy cute manan

Sweet cabni

Innocent nandu

Awsmmm

Try to update sooon

Becase can't wait for next

Coun sooon
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Posted: 9 years ago
#45
awesome update.
so cabir also care for them its just he doesn't want to show that and he also feels jealous when his mom praises them.
nandu is such a kid.
so much innocent and naive.
cabir had asked her to be in her class so she was there and obeyed what her bhai had said to her.
waiting for next part.
continue soon.
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Posted: 9 years ago
#46
Awesome update cabir is coming close to them nice n manan was amazing update soon the next part
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Posted: 9 years ago
#47
Awesome update
I loved it
Nandu is really cute
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Posted: 9 years ago
#48
Amazinggg
Superbbb
Mindblowinggg update
So cute nandu...aaww manan frst hug...lovd it
All d best...continue soon
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Posted: 9 years ago
#49
Caring manik
Childish nandu
Possessive Cabir
Lovely mom (Cabir mom)
Flirty dhruv
Attitude filled alya
Polite abhi
And what shall I say for mukti?
on the whole beautiful story.
Read all parts in a go.
Continue soon


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Posted: 9 years ago
#50
CABIR KA REASON KUCH AUR THA..BUT SACHE NAHI BOL SHAKTA HA ISS LIYA JHUTE BOL DIYA...AUR MANTI KA BHI REASON KUCH AUR THA LIKIN KYA BOLEGA SAMJHE NAHI PAE RAHA THA ISS LIYA CABIR KI REASON KO CHOSE KIYA...POOR GUYS!!! CABIT NAE ABHI KO FASA DIYA...POOR ABHI!! ABHNI TRUST CABIR...& ABHU GAVE HIM A BIG RESPONSIBILITY... BUT FORGOT ABOUT THAT...BUT NANDINI IS SUCH AN INNOCENT GIRL...JOE CABIR KA WAIT KAR RAHA THA..HOPE JALDI E CABIR ABHNI KO ACCEPT KAR LAE...
OYE HOYE!!! MANAN 1ST HUG...INCREDIBLE...
PLZ NEXT PART ASAP...PRETTY PLZ...

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