CAN'T GET OVER YOU. ch-10-pg 17 update (19-04-16) - Page 3

Nice update waiting for some cabini bond

Originally posted by: elsaanna

😳 manik is counting her words...how sweet...

lovely..

loved the abhni (abhi and nandini)bonding...

keep updating...

thank uu 😊

Originally posted by: absnads

Awesome update...

He counted the words she talked..seriously.. Majnu manik.

Pls continue soon..

thank u so much 😊

Originally posted by: SAFARNAMA

19 words...I have counted 2 times.

hehe,it was really an awesome update,I just read all the chapters noe.This concept is really different.I'm liking it.
The last part was really cute.One side Cabir wants to get rid of them & other side he was expecting a kiss on cheek from nandini.It was really awesome

Update soon.

thank u...
and i think u must have count "a" also .. that's y
it's 19 word . but i didn't.. u know it's seem alphabet than a word .. . 😊

Originally posted by: Darcypaul

thank u...
and i think u must have count "a" also .. that's y
it's 19 word . but i didn't.. u know it's seem alphabet than a word .. . 😊

Yup...i have counted 'a' also.Update soon

nice update.
cabir is seriously acting like a kid.
it was very cute.
cabir don't like them he want them to be near him.
but when nandu wished abhi that time cabir's face fell he also wanted to be wished.
and manik seriously counting words.
waiting for next part.
continue soon.

Hey such a lovely story...loved it plz continue soon waiting for next update...very eagerly...take...care ...

Loved it

I really love your story

CHAPTER 5

soon their class is finished and they all came out of class. in class also cabir didn't talk to abhi .. abhi somehow could sense that he is not happy with their arrival.but all this time mukti is friendly to him.and he also starting to like her.
they reach canteen . in a way abhi call nandani and informed her to come canteen . when her class is over .they all give their order and started to talk in random topics.

" bhai" nandani came and sit beside abhi .and smile at other ..

" nandu ..how was ur class .? tumne new friends banaye. " abhi said lovingly . giving her juice to drink. manik was continuously staring her .( from yesterday it became his job to stare her .)but there is one more person who is staring them. guess who
cabir yes ..

manik pov

" tumne new friendsbanaye ." abhi ask her. she bobbed her head like a obedient kid. just then we heard a voice ..

" hai matarani .. nandu tum yaha in rakshas so ke sath kya kar rahi hai"
shit ... we all palmed our face .. yeh madhubala yaha kya kar rahi hai..if I'm not wrong she is nandani new friend..then i tilt my face toward her .. she is grinning at abhi ...no ..so my guess was correct oh god isse yehi mili thi.

" rakshas kaha hai... yaha toh hum he .. wese tum ho nandu ki new friend" abhi asked her ...

" ji ... ha . ha ..hum he nandani ki new friend., navya .navya naveli' she said with horrified expression looking at us . we know what is coming.. if she tell them or particularly nandani about what we had done with her.then toh kya hoga ..what will she think about me... no y im thinking this... i don'tcare what they gonna think .. yeah ...butbut..

end of pov

" hi I'm abhi nandani brother ...it's nice to meeting u miss navya" abhi said smiling ..navya also smile back..nervously.

" wese tum itna daar kyu rahi ho" abhi ask her

" woh .." before she can finished .someone stopped her.
" hi madhubala.."


that's it for now.
THANK U TO ALL WHO COMMENTED ON PREVIOUS POST...
KEEP COMMENTING.. 😊