CAN'T GET OVER YOU. ch-10-pg 17 update (19-04-16)

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CHAPTER 1

Cabir cabir ... what happened .asked mukti 3 times as today their all time cheerful and funny cabira is looking somewhere lost since he came college.
cabir- hmm...umm nothing ..
mu-kya nothing kuch toh hai jo tu bata nahi raha hai ...
Manik- ha buddy kuch problem hai toh bata na . u know u can share anything with us .
ca-agar tum sabko bola toh u'll laugh at me.
dh - nah ...y u think like that .. we don't right guys ..
all nodded
ca- ok then listento today my cousins from Bangalore is coming to live with us .. i don't even talk to them since years now suddenly from nowhere they come to live with us .and from yesterday mom was prasing them continuously ...like how good they are in studies ..how responsible they are sikho kuch unse blah blah..
mu - so technically u're jealous of them becoz ur mom giving them priority more than u.
ca-mukti ..aisa nahi hai
Al-toh kaisa hai ..
ca-it's just that ..it's awkward ..like i never really meet any relatives since ages ..
Ma-so u are nervous...
ca - a little bit
All sighed he never gonna accept
ma -what's their name...?
ca-abhi and nan...(when there is a phone call)
ca -yes mom. no ..im not coming but listen..(and phone call cut)sigh.
mu-kya hua .
ca- they came and mom ne anke ko bola hai ..no no order diya hai..(said sulkingly)
ma-chal ..tab toh
ca-kaha..making confused face.
Ma-your home ..we also come with u.
ca-sach me tum aab mere sache dost ho.
mu -so let's go. to meet ur cousins
After a while they reached cabir home..all headed toward the hall.manik was the last one to enter
manik p.o.v.
when we enter hall cabir mom started yo introduce his cousins to us.
cabir's mom .sneha- hello kids .meet abhi and nandani cabir cousins..said smilingly.
a young man around 20 stand up with a smile .
abhi-hi. this is abhimanyu murty nice to meet u all.
he said politely.
ca-hey (said uninterested)
then i notice a girl is sitting on couch. she has beautiful big light blue coloured eyes,pouty lips ,milky white skin long black hair .without any makeup. her face was calm and quite .she is looking like a kid.so innocent . so pure.
abhi-oh. meet my little sister nandani.. come here bacha.(he said gesturing her to come toward us)
the girl stand up and came toward us in baby steps and hold abhi's hand. why what happened ? is she afraid of something. it's seen weird.all this while i was continuously staring her .
nandani-hello.(she said sweetly with little hesitant but it sound so good peaceful .
there is something intrinsicly sweet about her.



INDEX

chapter1 - pg1
chapter2 -pg2
chapter 3 -pg3
chapter 4-pg 3
chapter 5 -pg 5
chapter 6-pg 7
chapter7- pg-8
chapter 8-pg10
chapter 9-pg 13
chapter 10-pg17
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CHARACTER SKETCH
nandani murthy- she is 18 years old girl,sweet polite .she is just like a kid as her brother and amms always treat her like that.
she defined the natural beauty without any makeup .have big beautiful blue coloured eyes.long shiny hair.milky white baby skin.she is like a doll extremely sophisticated . serenely angelic face which stop any one to move in that very moment as spell has caste upon them. her one smile can make anyone heart melt .BUT she didn't talk much yes. she is quite type.this is not any abnormalities but she is like this only from childhood even her parents got worried when she didn't talk when all the baby of her age were started to talk. but then they realised that she is like that only she may be says her feeling in small sentence but that's from her heart and whenever it's seem neccessary and they got to used of it.

manik malhotra - he is rich .sinful handsome. charming tall well built body every quality that a girl die for BUT BUT BUT he didn't pay any heed to any of them.he is rude aggressive and short-tempered guy.his parents got separated when he was 12 years old . becoz of which he is deprived of love of parents.he has his own band FAB5 which is the only thing that he care.but when he meet her he change at that very moment only.he doesn't want this change but it keep increasing an each passing second.and he can't help it.

abhimanyu murthy- he is handsome charming understanding intelligent polite kind hearted. he didn't lose his temper easily.a perfect gentleman .brother of nandani. loved her the most.she is his lifeline.after the death of their parents he become both mother and father for her. he understand every unsaid word of her.he always try to help their amms in business that's why he choose business over his singing passion not entirely. he realize his responsiblility toward his family.

cabir dhawan- he is rich handsome cool carefree guy.only child .after the death of his father he became life of his mother.becoz of which he is little spoilt by her. a member of fab amd love his friends.suddenly from nowhere his cousins came to live with themand he didn't like it being only child u see.little insecure.but when he meet them .they proved him wrong.

mukti vardhan-she is not tom boy but little bold and straight forward tthen a normal girl.she is hot and beautifulrich.rude but good at heart.

dhruv vedhant-he is not shy type.handsome cool flirty type guy .have feeling for alia but doesn't accept it.member of fab5

alia saxena -she os a diva rich hot and little self obsessed . member of fab 5.have feelings for dhruv but afraid to confess.

harshad agarwal.- former member of fab 5 and friend pf them but betrayed them badly becoz of which they all hate him. now he has his own band and rival of fab 5.
Edited by Darcypaul - 9 years ago
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CHAPTER 2

manik pov.

oh god her voice is so melodious ..so soothing . she is so cute .. wait what ... manik tu pagal ho gaya hai kya bole ja raha hai. .. but galat kya bola she is indeed cute.

i didn't get when and how i greet her back.

"hi ..
all my friends stare me like I'm an alien ... ... and but my whole concentration is on her only. she is smiling at me oh god...and automatically my lips also curled into a smile. now this is getting weird i never smile at a girl .. not at first meet at least.it's like she casted some sort of spell on me
our little eye to eye conversation interrupted. by cabir voice .


" ahh .. mom iam really tired so... iam going to my room .ok let's go guys" cabir said all the time giving me ' I'll see u at room ' look.

" cabir bol toh aise rahe ho tum jase bhut kaam tha college me ... i know everything what u do in college " cabir mom said sarcasticly ok that's is the routine to cabir of getting this type of comment from his mom. we all supress our laugh as cabir glared at us .

" mom plz... " cabir said annoyingly. 😕

" fine jaldi se jao aur half an hour me niche aa jana ... ajj lumch sab saath karenge ."

we all nodded and headed toward cabir's room.
we all respect cabir mom as she is very loving mom one ever can get.

as we enter room cabir lashed out on me ..
" what was that dude .. ha"

he is frustrated .. he really doesn't like them.
" what was what..." i shrugged as i don't have any idea what he is saying.

" oh really hello - hi ... kya tha ye ... tu toh kisi ko sidhe jawab bhi nahi deta kabhi aur ajj.. hu"h cabir said annoyingly. 😡

" chill dude y u ' re getting so hyper ha... mene toh bas aise hi greet kar diya . woh itne bhi bure nahi lagte ... " i said what i genuinely feel for them.
" yes even i agree they are nice .. innocent and kind and polite ...and ." mukti said looking somewhere lost ... and prasing them ok that is first time mukti prasing someone .. what happened to her now seems like jabse they have come everything is happening for first time.

" and cute ..nandani .. right she is cute ..." dhruv said with naughty smile ... i don't know y sudden anger build inside when i know how flirt he is...oh god ... this girl .

"itni bhi cute nahi hai ok . "alya said annoyingly ..uff she will never change.

" shut up guys heck yaar mene socha u all will help me to get rid of them but idhar toh ... y first mom now u all" cabir angryly said . y he is getting so insecure ...
we all looked at each other and then at cabir who is now pulling his hair frustratedly...

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