#5//The Ex's At War//Ch17 on Pg 126 n Link for Thread 6 on Pg 1 - Page 71

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Posted: 9 years ago
Nyc update
Nandu's angry mode on in the whole update nd obvio she is r8 at her place..bt i feel Manikz talkin to rewa and discussion n ol has some oder reason behind..he cant do this to nandu for sure..high tym Mr.Malhotra shud clear the misunderstandings b4 Mrs. Malhotra turn into a complete wild cat XD
Manikz way of sleeping vd nandu n manini ..dat description was amzing..he wants to keep dem both close to himself..aww Manik n manini watching doraemon ..how cute
Manik is literally behaving so dumb..hez still not aware y is she upset?? ..oh god!! is he srsly expcting some kind of award for dis
:-\ i thought he must be having an idea abut it that night itself..bt no smtyms he really has to behave lyk a cmplte fool
Admist ol dis Manini was cool n calm..enjoying n having her gala tym B-)
Her trial to shave Manik was so adorable bt he got hurt n concerned nandu..
At breakfast ofcourse dat rewa 'the most irritating element onboard' has to do smthn to annoy nandu more..Navya's taunt to her was superb...beetroot juice ..hahahh n Cutiee manini cleaning her hands vd that alrdy sticky rewa's dress..damn funny
Mitin convincing nandu for pool game n Manik gettin irritated..Manik definitely dnt lyk Mitin bt i kinda lyk him for makin Manik dis jealous ;-)
Manini irritating Rose ..omg ..Love her so much..Emptied her lotion bottle ..half in pool n oder half on rose's head.. Aur selfie click kar beta.. XD
Cabir's one liners in btwn..hehe..awsm
Nandu wants to play volleyball in pool vd mitin..lol..dats nt happening till Manik is dere :-P Manik pickd nandu n took her to
the room n rewa's rxn was lyk :O nd cabir..'close ur mouth ..dey vl b bsy now' Rewa shocked..Dhawan rocked!
In the room ..Wild nandu..
so much fun to read.. Hope Manik clear ol the doubtss soon n dat unexpctd re-entry in the room to show his rights on his wife ..Loved it!!
I love it when Manik shows his right on Nandu..his possessiveness ..Lovely<3
hope dey get back together soon
Loved it..
Cont soon

Boo131 thumbnail
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Posted: 9 years ago
Wowowww. I'm loving this story even more now! Please yar this time update fastt can't wait so much.
1068411 thumbnail
Posted: 9 years ago
weekend update yay I don't have words to Describe the chapter was awesome mindblowing loved KEEP IT UP
LOTS OF LOVE
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Posted: 9 years ago
that was simply superb.,...

awesome update...

nandu is hell angry...

manik and manini watching doreamon...such a sweet father daughter duo...loved them

manini wants to shave her daddy,,,,,,,shooo cute...

and manik like a loving dad never say no to his baby,,,,,

oh manik ko lag gayi but use isme bhi fun dikh raha hai,,,,,,,he got a another chance to get a kiss by nandu...wow

but lesser he know this time no trick gonna work...

ye reva na kabhi manan ka picha nahi chod ti yaar ...she is sooo irritating...😡😡

manini wiped her hands with Rewa's dress 🤣...acha revenge leti hai manini unse...

sun tan lotion on rose's hairs...😆😆🤣...aww my baby manini.,...i just love her...

pool mein to game hone wali thi ye war kaise start ho gayi.,...but manik being manik vo apni haar kaise accept kar sakta hai...

nandu ne puri frustation nikal di...

"Nobody questions my right on my wife..not even YOU"...i loved this ...my fav ...

and manan kiss...

loved it to the core...

pls is baar thoda jaldi update karna...
Kyy8611 thumbnail
Posted: 9 years ago
Fantastically penned down each and every line with perfection. Awesome update !!!!!!!👏
annie_151 thumbnail
Posted: 9 years ago
Awesome chapter
Poor nandu was crying all night
But manik ko abhi tak reason Hi nae smjh aa raha
Loved it
Waiting for the next update
Continue soon
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Posted: 9 years ago
I waited for two weeks like two weeks for it .. But ultimately it was all worth waiting ..espcially manikslast dialogue and the ending kiss it made me go al awww..completeky understand ur inability of not being able to update the last week hope all the problems ,f any , u had are sought out ... The random moment seriously made my day .. Keep it up !!!
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Posted: 9 years ago
what a beautiful update it was.. . enjoyed a lot reading it. . beautiful manan moment... thanks for pm ...



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Posted: 9 years ago
it was outstanding..
aaye my baby manin she is superb😆 cuteness ki dukan

manan ..they are much kidder than manini
in nano second their r jealous ,
showering love , arguing, fighting, shouting., tantrums , possessive
confuse, irritate...
but at the end
it will all finish by A KISS
btw i loved that last line

thank u
keep smiling


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Posted: 9 years ago
Awesome...finally we got update after two weeks but it was worth it...but i don't like the fact that manik did not even realise that his plan of meeting with rewa's father had hurt nandini...but overall it was one amazing update n i am in love with last scene in which manik has shown his right on his own wife that too forcefully 😉 but i m loving it

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