#5//The Ex's At War//Ch17 on Pg 126 n Link for Thread 6 on Pg 1 - Page 72

wowww.


after twoo..
weeks update mil gyi..

hurwee

m soo happy. .
vaisee it was full of worthy.

I just love it..
Itsss soo awesome ..
So amazing. .just love to the core. ..

Soo .fantastic. ...

Keep updating. ..

U r such a beautiful writer...
Update soon..
Waiting for next update eagerly ..
Thanks for this update
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Thanks for pm too. ..


Stay blessed

Love Geet

Superb update! That's like my gal! 😃

sorry for the late comment

Reading this chap is like a rollercoaster ride...awesome yar...

Amazing update Ya.. . Just awesome...
Please update soon

Dear sujal you are an amazing writer...
Yaar today's update was awesome .
First of all jealous manik was a delight to watch
And then the way he claimed his right on nandini left me smiling to myself.
One more thing yaar please reply me when are you going to unhold LIPS DO LIE...
PLZ I beg you...

Yeaaahhh..!!! I r back..:)
Hope everything is fine now...:)
Ok..! So as usual great update..! I can't get over to manini cute antics..! She is so adorable...:*

N manik n Nandini in angry mood are always a treat..!! So manik is here for his rights on her. Hahaha.. No one can challenge him...hehe..!

N there is still more mystery to resolve.. With what actually manik n rewa were talking about..!
So yeah waiting for that..!
Hope to see u soon..!
God bless take care...:) update whenever u are free...!!!
Byee.:) lots of love..!

Finally an update!!

Nice update..
Manik, Nandu nd Manini's sleeping scenes are sooo...adorable nd cute... I so love those scenes...plzz gv some more in future updates too
Aww poor Nandu she cried so much...Manik noticed it too...bt she is hell angry
Thn she ignoring him...bt stupid Manik cud nt understand the reason behind her cold attitude...
The cute father daughter watching Doraemon...how cute...
Thn the scene whr Manini wants to shave her daddy dear...nd he sayng 'like mother like daughter'... I also thought the same...
Poor Manini could nt understand her mommy's cold reaction towards her father
Thn at the brkfst table...tht witch Rewa spoiled her mood more...
I loved it whn Manini cleaned her oily hands in Rewa's dress...it was lyk she is takinh her mom's revenge...
Pool game was fr fun...I guess...
Bt it became battle ground fr Manik...
I liked it whn Nandini didn't listen to Manik nd went to water as her wish...though he was sayng fr her benefit...
Whn Mitin called Nandini as Nandu...i was laughing so loudly seeing/reading Manik's reaction...Only he has rights to call her by tht name...nobody else...
I literally thought tht Nandu will spill the beans...as in y she was behaving lyk this...bt its ok...
Bt tht ullu Manik, hw come he doesn't see her pain...
He only knows to claim his rights on her...nothing else...
Nd its proved too in the last scene
I knw I missed out many scenes bt tht doesn't mean I didn't lyk them...its just tht the update was long...so if I go on counting all my fav parts...it will be a lyk a xerox copy of ur update...
So I hope my comment is long enough
Continue soon
Nd thanks for pm