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Lily

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Posted: 9 years ago

#681

Nandini again misunderstood.

Manik has no idea why she is upset..

And that evil Rewa leaves no chance to irritate them..

But still Manik need to understand that Rewa is trying to poison their relationship..

lets c what possessive Manik does next..😉

Manini is cute as always helping her daddy and she also wiped her hand on Rewa's dress that was excellent..👏

waiting update soon

thanks for the pm

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mmnn

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Posted: 9 years ago

#682

awesome as usual..

ur story dialougs are so superbbb..so perfect ..👍🏼

waiting for next...

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rubijyoti

@rubijyoti

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Posted: 9 years ago

#683

Awesome update ..love u r story

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sneha_glamarous

@sneha_glamarous

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Posted: 9 years ago

#684

wow... u updated... i thought this weekend no update eould b there only random part se hi kaam chalana padega...

BUT BUT u updated... I'm so happy...

nandu ws crying n z upset but irony z to whom she z crying d person z clueless...

she got panicked whn manik got cut while manini baby ws shaving her dad...

but manini looks sooo cute whn she ws shaving her daddy...

manini takes full revenge from rose n rewa which her mom can't take... loved it...
she poured lotion in rose head... superab...👍🏼

nandu litterally irritated manik by agreeing with Mitin...

loved last part...

hopefully nandu tells him about his annoyed mood so that manik can clear her doubts which she misunderstood...

thanks for d pm...

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daddysjaan

@daddysjaan

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Posted: 9 years ago

#685

suprb update... I just hate dat idiot rewa, huh...spoiling manan moments.. but cute manini is dere to teach her lesson,in her way...hehe...

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SrishtiThakur

@SrishtiThakur

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Posted: 9 years ago

#686

Finally wait is over.. U posted

Nice chap..

Cont.soon

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hs77

@hs77

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Posted: 9 years ago

#687

waited for so long and it was totally totally worth the wait!
it's ridiculously amazing how you describe normal day to day actions like them brushing or watching cartoons or planning to swim in such a way that it becomes highly engrossing!!
i wish nandu confronts him about his alleged 'wedding' with rewa.
can't wait for the next one!
please don't make us wait like last time 😃😃😃

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KoyelDutta

@KoyelDutta

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Posted: 9 years ago

#688

uuiii...kiss kar diya...without any warning..
yeh accha h..pehle galti khud karo...nandu ko avoid karo
rewa k sath dance karo..usko hug karo...usko attention do..
aur phir whn u see nandu crying u ask her the reason..u flirt with her
tum karo toh thik..nandu kare to not thik..
dimag ka dhakkan khol manik. .stop being a jerk..
dimag lara...u knw wht..nandu sud where a sexy off shoulder dress
dance on romantic song with mitin..flaunt her beauty
instigate manik..tab jake sayad..brain box main brain wapas aye
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Writer of MaNan LOVE BUGS

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mehak_ahuja

@mehak_ahuja

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Posted: 9 years ago

#689

Awesome update loved it...

The way things are going on... Just loving it

Thank u for the fantastic update

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Love_Queen

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Posted: 9 years ago

#690

Amazing update

Aha poor nandu cries whole night but becoz of whom she cried dat person is clueless about it nd sleeping peacefully cuddling his lovelies
manini baby literally sandwiched between her parents

should sweet cutie pie wants to shave her daddy nd her daddy never say no to his princess for anything
nandu is worried for manik when he got cut but manik how would he ever miss d chance to irritate nandu

but nandini is also not less dan him
she would just luved to do d things which he ask her to not

manini our bundle of joy never miss to have her fun
poor rose I just can't control my laugh imagining her face
oh God so funny

manik is not at all understanding why nandu is behaving like dis
nd she is letting out all her pain on him

luved d update

waiting for the next update
update soon dear

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