MaNan SS -Tedha hai par Mera hai chapter 5-page36 17.06.16 - Page 22

Very sorry for late...
But Mayra apni break up k baad iss story ko bhul gayi hai but purna ne iske liye new writer Search kar liya hai...
So iski new writer hai Alexa Nee
Hope u all like it...
Thanks for waiting
Lots of love
Purna

#Tedha_Hai_Par_Mera_Hai
..Nandini took a huge breathe and composed herself smiling like a idiot
..Nandu:- Yaar come on Nandu! You can do it..tu kar sakti hai..are bade sai bada maths ka problem joh Einstein tak solve nahi kar paya..woh tune kiya hai..toh yeh I love you kish khet ki mooli hai..yeah..come on ( She exclaimed and made a romantic face staring at herself in mirror )
.." Priye pati dev! Swami! Yeh hawa..jal..prithvi etc etc..in sab koh saakhsi maan kar..swikar karti hu! Hume aapse hoh gaya hai prem kya kare ! Hum toh tere ishq mai doob hi gaye ( Nandu blushed while all this was watched by Manik who was peeping at her from behind door with wide eyes )
..Manik:- Yaa toh mai pagal hoh gaya hu..yaa phir meri billo rani koh kisi pagal kutte nai noch liya..hy bhagwan..kahi ishe sachme mujhse pyaar toh nahi hoh gaya..agar yesha hua toh kasam khuda ki 10 nariyal phodunga aapke samne ( He mumbled to himself and looked at her who was blushing infront of mirror. He smiled and barged inside while she composed herself and glared at him )
..Nandu:- Tum! Tumne kuch suna..sach sach bolna nahi toh sare daat bahar nikal dungi ( She groaned and he showed his teeths )
..Manik:- Nahi toh..Kyu kuch thaa sunne layak..( He smirked and she rolled away her eyes and left tapping her feets while he started jumping on his place )
.." Huhaahahaha..hahaha..huahaha ( VG was laughing like anything holding his tummy while Uttu was making faces seing him )
..Uttu:- Ewww..mooh band karke hasa karo naa..tuhmari muh ki gandi baas yaha tak aa rahi hai..omg..I feel like puking..( He complaint making faces while VG was lost in his laughing session )
..VG:- Manik Malhotra..how dare you joh tumne mujh jaisi khoob surat bala sai panga liya..ab dekhna..teri kaisi controversy banata hu..ohh my gaadd..Kal Nandini ka office party hai right..ab dekho..mai kaisa tamasha karta hu..VG naam hai mera..VG ( He gave a pathetic vamp smile and laughed back while Uttu made a whatever look and engrossed back in his nail paint
.." Are waah billo rani..tum toh apsarao ki apsara lag rahi hoh..tuhme dekh kar toh mera dil baagh baagh hoh gaya ( Manik exclaimed making her blush inwardly )
..Nandu:- Aur tum..hamesha ki tarah ek bevakoof lag rahe hoh..bevakoof ( She lied as man mai toh ladoo ki barsaat hoh rahi thi..)
.." Kisne mere Mano koh bevakoof kaha ( They heard a voice and turned only to see a girl doing a naagin pose. Nandu frowned while she came doing her naagin steps )
.." Main hoo Naagin Shivanya..dungi dush! Aur phir lungi hash! ( She exclaimed while Nandu gave a whatever look )
Manik:- are behna..striling hoh toh naagin hi hogi naa..naag thodi hogi..by the way..nah jaan nah pehchan..yeshe naach naach kai andar ghus rahi hoh ( He frowned and Shivanya gasped holding her mouth )
.." Haye reh dayya!!! Yesha na kaho swami..pichle 1000 varso sai aapka intezar kar rahi hu..bhool gaye..kaise hum doh premi..ganna choos choos kai..choos choos kai..cinema dekha karte thai ( Shivanya blinked her eyes while Nandu came infront crossing her arms )
..Nandu:- 1000 saal pehle cinema..acha..kaunsa picture dekha..mai bhi jaanu..( She mocked while Manik came in mid and smiled )
..Manik:- Dear sister..lagta hai aapka maansik santulan bigad gaya hai..aapka naag khoh gaya hai joh mai toh bilkul nahi hu..better luck next time ( He smiled while Shivanya collapsed on his legs )
..Shivanya:- Yesha na kaho swami..Ek toh aap itne handsome dikh rahe hoh aaj..dil toh karta hai..dus dus! Kai khaa jau phhsss ( She exclaimed while Manik shoved her away gently )
..Manik:- Are..halwa puri samajh kai rakha hai..dus dus kai khaa jaogi..dekhiye behna..mai sadi suda hu..yeh joh apsara Nandu jee haina woh meri dharam patni hai..Aap meri aakhe noch loh par inke alawa kisi kai upar nazar nahi dalunga haa ( He said and Nandu suppressd her smile blushing hard )
..Everyone gasped in horror as they saw the leaked fake pictures of Uttu and Manik. Nandu palmed her mouth while Manik was ready to faint
..VG:- Dekha..Dekha..Dekha ! ( He shouted pointing at Manik and then to pictures )
..Nyonika:- Abe dekh liya..aage bhauk bhai ( She said sitting crossing her legs while VG made a whatever look )
..VG:- yeh raha thosh saboot! Behno! Ish aadmi koh jitna sarif samajhte hoh utna hai nahi..huh..yeh gay hai! Gay hai! Gay hai!
..Shivanya:- Oyeee! Shut you're badbodaar mouth! Dungi Dus! Aur lungi Has ! Agar phir mere swami par ungli uthayi..dus dungi..phhsss!
..VG:- Are ungli kya..pura ka pura haath uthata hu..yeh aadmi gay hai ! Bolo Uttu baby !
..Uttu:- Yeah Yeah..I second that..what to do..I'm to hard to resist..har koi mera deewana banta hai.hahaha !
.." Thehro!! Thehro!! Thehro!! ( They heard a shout and all turned their heads to see Aryamann glaring at everyone )
..Tujhe dekha toh yeh Jana Sanamm..
..Pyaar hota hai deewana sanam..
..VG..Uttu aur Nyonika ki dil mai baji ghanti..Aryamann aaya aur Manik kai gale pad gaya
.." Beta..kaisa hai mera beta..mai tere bina nahaya nahi beta ( He cried while Nandu's jaw dropped at him )
..Manik:- Aap kaun ( He some how uttered while Arya made a puppy look )
..Arya:- Beta mai tera baap..bachpan mai kumbh kai mele mai bichad gaye..thai..tabse mai tere bina nahaya nahi..oops khaya nahi beta
..Shivanya:- Sasur jee! Paye laagu Sasur jee ( She exclaimed and felled into his feets )
..Arya:- Khabar daar joh mere bete koh kisine gay kaha!
..VG:- Ohh my handsome ! Aapke paas koi saboot hoh toh batao..like really
..Nandu:- Saboot hai ! Bahut bada saboot hai !
.." Kya! Kya! Kya! ( Match gaya extremely ghambir mahol par..kiska wicked girega )
..Nandu:- Mai Manik ki bache ki maa banne wali hu ! I'm pregnant ! Ishe bada koi sabut hoh toh batao !
..Shivanya:- Phhsss...phusss..phhsss ( Hawa phus hoh gayi ushki )
..Arya:- Are waah..mai dada banne wala hu!
..Uttu:- Ohh..myyy..gaaddd
..VG:- Anarth thae gwaa..ghor anarth thae gwaa..loh ab mai behosh hi hue gwaa ( With that Vg gaya sadme mai )
.." Laga..Laga..shock laga( sabse bada shock toh Manik koh laga..Nandu kai pet mai ushka bacha hai yeh sunke ushke toote hi udne laga..hehehe acha hai..bahut acha hai )

AlexaNee pov

..Freak I know yeh Mayra ki story hai..but continue hi nahi hoh rahi thi thi Purna handed this to me so mai apne masale laga rahi hu..hope you all like it..agar acha nahi laga then it's okay I can stop it

My god! I nearly forgot abt ths story! Anyway hai alexa nee! U r doing good! Actually great! Tht naagin part was awesme!
Update is hilarious! Continue soon! Plz pm me wen u update next!

Oh god...
What the hell..
Too hilarious...
Update soon..

frst of all commenting for frst 4 chapters

I jst now found ur story n read it in 1 go n its awesome

awesomely awesome

I was totally rofl

kyy ke sare characters ki dhajjiya uda Di..Hahahaha

chhihora manik
pretty dhruv lattoo on manik
cabir n Nyonika

hilarious

awesome

I m in love wid this story

well taking over another writer's story n continuing it isn't a joke...but u did well..well job Alexa..

bt I got to say, I m not happy wid part of last chapy

means srry I m not saying it wasn't good..it was good bt I didn't find it laughable ..

no hard feelings for alexa..in fact I m her fan already..I m her reader of my mermaid doll..I jst love it..n she is an awesome writer

bt I don't like half part of last update

shivanya part was not needed..woh kaha se aayi manan story mein?

n vg ka gay controversy part was not well written..

it was supposed to be happen.in party bt d incident started in middle of nowhere.. n aryaman as maniks father..hahaha that was funny bt his entry too didn't make sense..

shivanya part edit kar do plz...don't know if only I found it irrelevant or what bt plz edit it

n manik part was awesome..how patnivrata he is..

n nandini..too good..khud ko pregnant declare kar diya to save maniks reputatn...wow..she is too good

plz take it as criticism..don't get sad by my comment..edit it if u want otherwise its ok..

n update soon..

waiting for next update

don't make us wait for long

Hayee...main to vhul hi gayi thi ess story ko...thanks jo continue kia...😳...so hilarious part tha...love it.

Awesome update. Well penned. Eagerly waiting to read further. Continue soon. Thanks for pm

Awesome update..