MaNan SS -Tedha hai par Mera hai chapter 5-page36 17.06.16

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Hi
Friends I am with another MaNan crazy story. It's four shot.
Story titel & some crazy idea is my and this story written by My frnd Mayra it's her 1st try hope u all like it...

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Part-1A Page - 4
PART - 1B Page - 7
Part - 2 Page - 11
Part - 2B Page - 16
Part - 3 Part - 22
Part - 4 Part - 28
Part - 5 page - 36
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Tedha_hai_par_mera_hai..
SCENE 1
Nandini murty: Pure beauty with brain. 22 yrs old successful business women. Murty industry ki ek louta varis. Full of attitute. Fun masti mazak emotion love ye sab word uski dictionery me nehi he. Usko sirf apni WORK se matlab he
Manik Malhotra: only i can tell u that he is the most masti khor person u had ever met ;)
MaNan conversation:
M: kya baat he billo rani aj to koi qyamat dha rahi he
N: stop this jaan we r in a public place so will u just control urself?
M: uff aise mat dekho dil me qeher barsati ho
N: jaan see so many ppl r around us na to plz control jaan control till night
...
M: okay meri billo rani tum kehti ho to control kar leti hu

Scean2

Dev: nandinis PA
Mr.Samthaan: nandini's lowyer
S: congrats Mrs. Malhotra here is a lil gift for you accept it
N: pleasure i m pretty sure this must be the best gift of this evening

SCENE 3
MaNan's bed room it was nicely decorated but lil bit odd..
Why r these black roses billo rani? Manik asked with lil confusion
"Bcz they r RARE n all RARE things BELONGS to me" nandini replyed with her all time famous ice cold voice
That means i also RARE billo rani!! Coz i also toh BELONGS to U na?" Manik asked with his all time famous creepy smirk on his face

So bolo bolo kaise lagi.
Manik kaise language pe baat karta hai hai na???
Nandini ko black roses pasand hai.
MaNan ki 1st n8 bhi hai toh kya hoga next socho socho.
Koin hai kitna tedha jan ne k liye karo comments
Phir milegi full part...
Keep smiling
Stay blessed
Lots of love
#Purna
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Very interesting concept
Please update soon
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Interesting concept.seems to be an different story. Continue soon.thanks for pm.
Keep writing.
Stay blessed😊
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...hehe ...
Very interesting concept
Yaar
Tedha ha par mera ha ...😉
...lol...
Hmmm...so pehle hi
Part main
Wedding night
Niceee yaar
Continue sooonnn
Love you
Diya😛

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Originally posted by: archu_asok

Interesting concept.seems to be an different story. Continue soon.thanks for pm.

Keep writing.
Stay blessed😊


Thanks
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Originally posted by: diyaNarwal

...hehe ...

Very interesting concept
Yaar
Tedha ha par mera ha ...😉
...lol...
Hmmm...so pehle hi
Part main
Wedding night
Niceee yaar
Continue sooonnn
Love you
Diya😛


Thanks
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Posted: 9 years ago
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PART-1A
A 22 years young girl step down from her black Mazda RX8 with full attitude. she was wearing a white casual shirt n red knee length skirt with black high heel n a black framed glass too. her hair was tied up with high pony . she was just a natural beauty with perfect figure but there is no emotion on her face. she got down from her car n step in to a big building...THE MURTY INDUSTRY ...yes she is NANDINI MURTY ...Murty empire ki one n only heir, successful business women with no heart no emotion. the sonly word which exist on her dictionary is WORK. she never yelled on her staff but they scared of her as like as DEATH, her one ice cold look was enough for every one.

Dev (is her PA): Good morning mam
Nandini: How many times I have to remind u that don't waste time with this unnessesary things. We r hare for work only not for this bloody greetings n all. Keep this on your mind. I wont repeat myself this was your last warning
D: Sorry mam. I wont repeat this mistake
N: Better for you. Where is Arora's file
D: Here it is Mam.
N: Now lets go to the conference room
In conference room:
So here is the all Mr. Arora. Now what do u wanna say about this deal?
Mr. A: This deal is all yours Miss: Murthy
N: Okay then the meeting is over now.
Dev: Mam aap ki lawyer Mr. Samthaan ka call he. (saiying this he handed over the phn to nandini)
N: Yes Mr. Samthaan boliye
S: Miss. Murty I have a news for you...So u got it na what u need to do now?
N: Yes I got it

it's a reception ceremony.
the hall is nicely decorated with white n blue orchid. There is a sweet lovely couple r standing in the stage.
A handsome tall man who doesn't need to say anything from his mouth coz his chocolate dark brown eyes say all his words behalf of his mouth. His eyes full of life n happiness. he is caring a pure heart melting smile on her lips all the time. N a sweet pretty tiny lady standing next to him. She is a pure bliss no doubt but her eyes...there is a mistry on her eyes. So many famous people r coming on this ceremony. Why not after all this is the reception of NANDINI MURTHY opps not MURTHY anymore now its MALHOTRA. Yes NANDINI MANIK MALHOTRA. Such a lovely couple. Everyone go to them n congrats them..

Manik whispering to nandini
M: Kya baat he billo rani aj to koi Qyamat dha rahi he
N: Stop this jaan we r in public place..
M: Uff aise mat dekho dil me qeher barsati ho...
N: Jaan see so many people r here na so control jaan control till night
M: Wo to tumhe pehle sochna chahiye than a billo rani aise taiyar hone se pehle apni iss masum sa pati dev par thoda to rehem dikhati...chalo koi ni sabar ka phal metha hota he or tum to puri ki puri phalon ki bagicha ho
N: Haan jaan aj raat ko tumhe mein puri ki piri bagicha dikhaungi don't need to worry..
M: Ok meri billo rani tum kehti ho to control kar leti hu raat tak ;)
So ladys n gentle man as u all know very well that this is the reception of our very popular business women of india Miss. Nandini Murthy who is now converted to Mrs. Nandini Manik Malhotra. We all r here to wish them a happy n blessed married life. So three chears for our newly wedded couple..
M: Ye kis chusa hua mungush ko mice pakda dia billo rani
N: What? What did u just said?
M: Are dekho na wo tumhara nam galat bol rahi thi abhi tum MISS; MURTHY thodi na ho ab to tum iss badshah ki rani MRS. MANIK MALHOTRA ho.
N: Jaan phir se shuru ho gaye tum I told u na baby not to crack any jokes n u promised me na
M: Yes meri billo rani ok ab nehi karuga happy?
N: More then happy jaan
So guys start tapping your feet n do rock on the dance floor. Our lovely couple of the evening r also joining them. Play the song
So my billo rani shall we saying this manik offered his hand to nandini n nandini grab it

Har pal meriyaan yadaan
Yadaan vich ae tun

(Manik placed his one hand to nandini's waist n caressing her neck with another one)

Dil di gal main dassa
Te dassa fir kinnu(x2)

(Manik pulled her towards him n caressing her bare back with pleasure)

Teri mei,meri teri ik jindi
Ik jind;di what to do
jhoomu main nachu main gaaun ke likhu
Tere liye main kya karun

(Manik make naughty smirks n nandini lowed her gaze)

Dheere dheere se meri zindagi mein aana
Dheere dheere se meri dil ko churana

(Nandini looked toward his eyes n he naughtily pull her in a passionate hug nandini rest her head to his chest n manik rest his chin to her solder )

Tumse pyaar hume hai kitna jaane jaana
Tumse mil kar tumko hain batana

(They felt each other's hot breath on their bodies n an electric spark just flow down through their spine)

everybody start clapping and they both broke their hug
Suddenly Dev went to nandini with Mr. Samthaan
S: Congrats Mrs.Malhotra. Here is your wadding gift accept it (Saying this he handed over a file to Nandini)
N: Thanks Mr. Samthan. I m pretty sure this would be the best gift of this evening.
S: My pleasure Mrs. Malhotra. I have to leave now. Congratulation once again to u both (Saying this he left)
After finishing the party smoothly they drove off to their house...

Now MaNan in their bedroom

Room was decorated simply but yet it looks exotic but lil bit odd bcz of the flowers...the room was decorated with black roses only...Wired na...pretty wired...
"Why these black roses billo rani?" Manik asked with a confused look
"Coz these r very RARE n RARE belongs to ME" Nandini replied with her all time ice cold voice
"That means I m also RARE na billo rani that's why now I m also belongs to you" Manik saying this with his all time creepy expression..
Will u just shut ur mouth" Nandini replied with frown
M: Ok ji ok ab aour tang nehi karunga...vaise abhi to party khatam ho gaya na...tumhe nehi lagta tum kuch vul rahi ho meri billo rani
N: Oh really is that so? Sorry but mujhe kuch yaad nehi aa rahi he..so just leave n let me sleep
M: Hain? aisa kya? thik he vaise bhi tumhara ye pati dev ki yaadash bohot acchi he,bachpan me pahari wale baba ka ashirvad lia tha...iss ashirvad k rehte tum apni dimag ki jwalamukhi pe pressure dalo ge to kya fayda pahari wale baba ka ashirwad ka. Tou main he yaad dila deta hu zara karib to ao...
N: Last time bol rahi hu dur raho mujhse...warna pachtane ka mouka bhi nehi milega..
M: Pehle to mujhe bagicha dikhaw wo bhi hari bhari pher chahe baad me pachtana bhi pade to koi gaam nehi billo rani
N: Okay Mr. Malhotra aap ko bagicha dekhna he na zara idhar ayiye dikhatu hu
M: (Maan me laddo fhuta) ye lo ji aa gaya
N: Zara apni aankh bandh ki jiye
M: Mujhse kya sharmana accha jaw ye lo kar li...

Writer Pov:
Then manik forwards his lips for kiss like Muuu...such an innocent idiot. He didn't know whats gonna happen next...Aww poor baby
Nandini grab a blanket n covered manik with it na start beating him like hell
M: oyeee...ayeee...billooo...ye kya kar rahi ho...aaaee...choodo mujhe...ooop... mar kiu rahi ho...maine brush to kia tha...hayyy...ueee amma mar dalo gi kya...nehiii choodo...tum bidhwa ho jaogi...maaf kar do...plzzz...
N: Kiu bohot shokh than a bagicha dekhne ka abhi to bas shuru hui he...raatein rangin nehi karna kya?
M: Raat ka to pata nehi ...aeee...main zarur rangin ho jaunga tumhari ye dhulai se...choodo...hayyy... nehi dekhna mujhe hari bhari bagicha...kaan pakad ta hu age se ye chichora harkat nehi karunga...pahari wale baba k baba k unke bhi baba ki kasam. galti ho gaya...
N: Next time aisi galti nehi hone chahiye...cabir ne samjhaya than a tumhe...
M: Haan samjhaya tha...mera ye do kaan ne suna tha par jo mua ye hath or mu he na inn dono ko sunai nehi deta kiu k in k pass kaan nehi he na iss liye ye dono apni harkato se baaj nehi ata...:p
N: Youuu...just get lost...
M: where billo rani? Agar aap GET ho jao mujhe toh pher dekho kaise LOST hota hu... ;) :p
Saying this manik quickly step out from the room

Nandini Pov:
Ahhh irritating...jald se jald iss ka kuch ilaj karna padega...cabir ko bolna padega ye koun sa alien dhund k laya he isse accha to mera PA he meri samne mu nehi khol ta or ye sare din koun si ajeeb ajeeb language me bolta rehta he or meri dimag kha tar rehta he...ohhh dad aap ne ye accha nehi kia aap ki ek na samjhi k liye mujhe kitna suffer kar na padh raha he...

Flashback:
Dev: Mam aap ki lawyer Mr. Samthaan ka call he. (saiying this he handed over the phn to nandini)
N: yes Mr. Samthaan boliyen
S: Miss Murty I have a news for u
N: What is it?
S: Aap ki dad Mr. Harshad Murty ( :p ) apni death k pehle ek vasiat nama banaya tha. uss k mutabek aap ko apni sari property ki power of attorney tabhi milegi jab aap shadi shuda ho jayenge. or agar aap shadi nehi karenge to ye puri property BEING HUMAN ( :P ) naam ki ek charity trust k naam ho jayega...
N: Aap hamare family lawyer they but abhi aap meri personal lawyer ho...or as n loyal lawyer u have to put me out from this mess. So whats the plan? (Evil smirk)
S: Vasiyat nama pe ye to likha he ki apko shadi karni pade gi par kis se kar na padegi ye nehi bola...Aap ki dad ne jo ladka chuna he uss ko reject kar di jiye mera assistant cabir aap k liye ek ladka le aye ga. aap usi se contract marriage kar le na. fake marriage nehi chalega kiu ki court pe aap ki marriage certificate dikhana pade ga jo ki asli hona padega. Aap ap ki sari rules uss contract paper me dal dena to pher or koe problem bhi nehi hoga. or 6 months bad divorce le lena...
N: WHAT?? 6 months!!! why?
S: Sorry Miss. Murty isse pehle aap divorce nehi le sakte ye law he iss me main bhi help nehi kar paunga...itna to karna parega mam..
N: Hmm okay
S: So Miss. Murty u got it na what u need to do now...

Kasi lagi 1st part...
Maza aaya...
Chalo e kaya hoga 1st n8 toh PaNi p chala gaya...
E marriage toh fake nikli
Abhi kaisi kaise hogi inka pyaar
Toh Jane k liye bane rahiye shirf yeh or
Kaha...
Hope u all like Mayra 's writing.
Waiting for ur views.
Smiling Purna
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Ye manik ko kya hua hai kya bol raha hai
aur black roses at first night. .
Nandu ne contract mrg krke acha nai kiya very bad. .
Anyways update was awesome continue. .

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