Baby Just Say Yes-A Manan FF

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Baby Just Say Yes!

"You were supposed to say NO, Nand then O, NO you bloody moron" she fumed from the other side of the phone.

She never talked to anyone like that, but boy she was angry.

"I was, wasn't i?" he smiled, jokingly.

"Why the hell did you agree, these people are here making arrangements for the engagement, you good for nothing greek god" she said, and then bit her lip to what she just called him. It was supposed to be a secret what she thought about how he looked.

"greek god, huh? Not bad!" he smirked.

"look dude, I really don't want to get married. And last I checked you agreed that you'll say no, then why on earth would say yes?" she asked fumed.

"um.." he started but was cut short by her.

"oh, no wait. I know, to make my life harder right? You ruthless bigshot, business tycoon" she said with a mad rage.

"Give me one good reason why you don't want to get married?" he asked, anger boiling up.

"um, I just want to complete my studies" she said.

She was never going to tell him the real reasons. There were many, but she couldn't tell him all that could she?

"so, then fine, complete your studies after our marriage. No problem." He said, as a matter of factly.

"but, no" she started.

"just meet me once, we'll talk it out. Okay?" he asked.

"okay" she said finally.

***

So guys, here I am back. With another FF.i got a 2 day break before my last paper and this is what I came up with. Please tell me how do you like my prologue?

I know, I know many question are going up in you mind that why she does not want to get married, why is she like this. Why is manik so adamant to marry her. So all these questions will be answered in the FF.

Character sketch

Nandini Murthy: A 20 year old girl. She is doing her last year in graduation. A girl with a golden heart. Shy, and an introvert. Outspoken to only her best friends and her father. She is scared of relationships, because of the things she saw and went through in the past. Daughter of one of the most big and successful business tycoons in the country. She is a little low on confidence. She believes that she does not deserve anything, owing to her past.

Manik Malhotra: the biggest business tycoon in the country. He is 25 years old. He is now running the company his dad started and now due to his hardwork is at great heights. He is famous for his Anger, short temper and his ruthlessness. But deep inside he is a good man. Caring towads only the ones he loves and cares about. Only for the outer people he is this angry young man.

Rishi Murthy: Nandini's father. The only family nandini has.. loving and caring, nandini is his princess.

Nyonika malhotra: manik's mother, loving and caring. She is a homemaker. Loves manik and all his friends like her own children.

Raj malhotra: manik's father. Fun loving and super cool. Loves manik nyonika and all manik's friends a lot.

Cabir Dhawan: manik's best friend. He works with manik in his company.

Dhruv: Manik's best friend. He owns a music and dance academy. And is engaged to Aliya.

Aliya saxena: manik's friend. She is a fasion designer. Engaged to dhruv.

Mukti Vardhaan: manik's friend. More like a little sister. Married to abhi.

Abhimanyu(abhi): manik's friend and mikti's husband. He owns a chain of restaurants all over india.

Navya naveli: nandini's best friend. She is also with her in college. Nandini's confidante.

Aryamann: Nandini's best friend. Always looking out for her.

***

I know, bahot kuch nahi bola in the CS but i kept it that way only. I want to unfld the charecters in the story as it goes further. So did you like it? Please leave your comments. That's what encourage me.

Thank you.

And yes, regarding the update of My first and Last Love (MFALL) I will update that first on 16th or 17th then I will be update this.


PS: could not send pm's will do once i start my FF.

for Pm's please buddy "Manan_Pm_ID" to your buddy list. Thank you!

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Posted: 9 years ago
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For my Angles😳😳Mish,Nats,Archana and Ekta🤗>I love you guys, you know that right--


My Kiddo(Archna)

Main tekh hun dii aap kaise ho

exams kaise chal rahe hain?
kyun ki main to holidays mein masti kar rahi hun😆

Now coming to Baby just say yes...it's superb and very interesting
would love to know the past of Nandu n reason of Manik being rude in front of others.
Over all loved it and looking forward to more updates...also like the fact that both are equal financially😊

My Babyy(Ekta)
Kya di apne toh mujhe full on confuse kar ke chor diya ...waise koi nahi aage padhe par sab pata chalega right ...so will wait ... Firstly ki ye manik inta koun nandu ko kah raha hai sadhi liye ...nandu kyu na kah rahi hai ...phir bhi usse kyu haan kahna par raha hai...aur phir ussne aisa kyu kaha ki woh phale padhna chati hai woh toh sadhi ke baad bhi padh sakti hai...sabse important what is her past jiske wajah se she is not ready for marriage. ...khair koi nahi sab ke liye wait karungi . ...and cs it was toh just wonderful ...toh nandu ke pas sirf papa hai... aur nyonika bhi positive hai. ...ye toh Bahut acha hai. .. let see aage kya hota hai... Thanks for ressing it for me...All the best for your exams ...Continue soon...

Love you a lot
Ekkuu

Natasha Darling(Natashaaa)

Misha Darling(mishashergill)
Edited by --MiNi-- - 9 years ago
manan58 thumbnail
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Wohoo..
I love it..
Amazing..
Pls update ur ff
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Posted: 9 years ago
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res
unres

awww...this was awesome

i loved the title...

the greek god thingy...superb...hehe...

y is she so scared to be in relationships...

cs...i liked it...

hope ur exams are going well...
will wait for all ur updates...

continue soon


LOVE
SANJANA


Edited by krazzy_parthian - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Thank You! 😃
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Originally posted by: manan58

Wohoo..

I love it..
Amazing..
Pls update ur ff


Thank You! 😃
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Nice one..
Although I am looking forward for ur other story. 😛
Can't help it I love that one.. 😆
I am sure ye bhi acha lagega 😃
All the best ⭐️
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Originally posted by: krazzy_parthian

res

unres

awww...this was awesome

i loved the title...

the greek god thingy...superb...hehe...

y is she so scared to be in relationships...

cs...i liked it...

hope ur exams are going well...
will wait for all ur updates...

continue soon


LOVE
SANJANA







Thank you sanjana :D
you will get to know about all her problems and insecurities as the stories start! :D
Thank you so much, they are going well.
love,MiNi 😳
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Originally posted by: Dhingli44

Nice one..
Although I am looking forward for ur other story. 😛
Can't help it I love that one.. 😆
I am sure ye bhi acha lagega 😃
All the best ⭐️



haha, Thank you!
i will ipdate it soon.
jaldi karish, worry not.
hope you like this one as well! 😃
love,Mini
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Hi dear
interesting
love it
continu soon
take care

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