MaNan FF A journey from hatred to love ( chapter 6- page 15) - Page 5

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Posted: 9 years ago
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chapter - 2

manik's pov

she slapped me no body dare to shout at me and she slapped me ...gosh now u r gone miss murthy welcum to hell u gonna regret lyk hell . be ready bt she was beautiful . no manik u cant what r u thinking she slapped u and think of your revenge nothing else

manik's thoughts were broken by cabir

cabir : manik ladki ka chaate kha k kaisa laga😉

manik : saale tu itni jaldi kyun marna chahta hai mere haathon

alya : so manik wht have u planned kya karna hai uss nandini murthy ka

manik : guys just wait and watch and he goes from there

on other side

navya : nandu tumne yeh kya kara vo pura rakshas hai tum ussse kanti nahi vo kisi ko nahi chodta vo school mai bhi aise hi hai sabko tang karta hai

nandini : toh mai kaunsa usse darti hu .

navya : nahi nandu tum samajhne ki koshis karo . ek baar school mai ek ladke ne manik ke complain kar de thi manik ne uska jo haal kiya hum bata nahi sakte ( she said in a horrified expression)

nandu : navya tum kaunse school m paidte hoo ??

navya : gd goenka

nandini : aiyooo ayipaa navya maine bhi vahi admission liya hai😲

(mean while nandu's mom call her )

Ritu : beta nyoninka aunty aur maan uncle tumhe unke bte se milwanga chahte hai ab tum dono ek sath ek hi school m padoge

And there came our rockstar manik malhotra

Manik: (sacrasticly ) heloo miss murthy

Nandu : heloo( in her mind aiyipaa yeh kaha fass gayi )

Manik - nice to meet u miss murthy

Nandini jst gave a forced smile and " yes same here "

Manik - slowly vaise tum rritu aunty ki beeti lagti nahi ho they are soo humble aur tum jhansi ki rani .

Nandini - toh tum kaunsa sweet and swami type k ho ekdum harami type k hoo

Manik - abhi meri sharafat dekhi kaha hai tumne

Nandini - oh plzz sharafta jaise shabd tumhare muh se niklana shobha nahi dete. Tum ek no. k awara hoo

Manik - ohh jaise tum toh bholi bhali gaun ki chori hoo.. itna patar patar karti ho ki seer mai dard ho jata hai

Nandini - maine toh nahi kaha tumhe meri battein sunne ko.

Manik - mai yaha khada hoon aur agar tum bolugi ko toh mujhe sunayi de ga naa

Nandini - kaan mai cotton dal do

Manik - tum apne muh pe tape lagao

Here both of their parents were happy that their kids gell up together little did they knew world war ki tyaari chal rahi hai

Nyonika - manik nandu ko tum apne baki frnds se bhi milwa doo😉

Manik - yeh sure mom

Manik - chalo nandu

Nandu - mujhe nandu mat bulao . mera naam nandini murthy hai

Manik - whatever ( they both started going bt manik was little behind nandini )

( but manik malhotra k dimag mai toh aur kuch hi khicdhi pak rahi thi . he was already feeling lyk a king who has won a battle without any efforts . if his mom would have not aksed then he might have to do so much of planning to take nandu to the spot)

Manik has already set up a plan ... a bucket full of water fall on nandu from no where she was angry , shocked )😕😡😲

😡She stomped her feet while manik was smirking he leans closer to nandu she could feel his hot breath near her ear " welcome to my world miss murthy"

Nandini was embrassed as all youngsters were laughing seeing her condition she was on verge of crying bt somewhere manik felt bad

She just ran away from there

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Cabir - 👏wahh mere sher kya badla liya hai yeh hui na mere badle ki aag wali baat ( manik just smiled )😊

Dhruv - manik tujhe aisa nahi karna chahiye tha ..usse sabke samne kitni embarrassment hui

Mukti - bt dhruv usne bhi toh manik ko sabke samne thappad mara tha

Alya - yr lekin uss wakt yaha humari sivay koi aur nahi tha

Manik - lets chuck it guys lets enjoy our party bt somewhere in his heart he wanted to look for her

Nandu ran into washroom and navya behind her

Nandu's pov

No nandu u cant cry😭 u aren't weak u can manage all this things .nobody can scare u. u have to deal with manik . u have to be strong u have to be dadu's storng girl

She decided and after drying up herself she came out

NAVYA : nandu tum theek ho naa she asked being concerned

Nandu : navya tum tension mat loo. I will handle him aur nandini murthy kisi se nahi darti

Navya : nandu yeh sab chodo chalo kuch khate hai.

( from there they went to chat stall . manik who was shocked to the core seeing nandini laughing and chat chaating but how can he leave her so easily he foolowed her)

Manik : ohhh soo miss. Murthy want to eat pani puri bt u have to wait first let me eat

Nandu : oh hello get lost mai yaha phele aayi😡

Manik : tum jao

( nandu thought of a evil plan and smiled wickedly )😉

Suspense ...haha😛

Do tell me what u think nandu kya karne wali hai😆

a very big wala thankew for ur responses

do tell me kaisa laga

critisim always welcomed😊 with sade hue ande tamatar joote chappal

#okthanxbye

Edited by fireflies10 - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago
#42
Amazinggg
Superbb update
Thnx for pm me
Enjoyed a lot...world war 3 hahahaha
Lovd it
continue soon
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Posted: 9 years ago
#43
Awesome update. Manan convo was fab. Waiting for nandini's evil plan and next update. Thanks for pm.
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Posted: 9 years ago
#44
nice one. .
both r too much...
both fight and argyu..
manik feel bad for doing this...to manik me dill k kone me pyar vala emotion..
now what nadu did...
eagerly waiting..
lovely..
thank u for pm...
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Posted: 9 years ago
#45
nice one. .
both r too much...
both fight and argue..
manik feel bad for doing this...to manik me dill k kone me pyar vala emotion..
now what nadu did...
eagerly waiting..
lovely..
thank u for pm...
Marvis thumbnail
Posted: 9 years ago
#46
nice one. .
both r too much...
both fight and argue..
manik feel bad for doing this...to manik ke dill k kone me pyar vala emotion hai kahi pe
now what nadu did...
eagerly waiting..
lovely..
thank u for pm...
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Posted: 9 years ago
#47
Nice update
continue soon
thanks for pm
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Posted: 9 years ago
#48
Nice update shayad nandu bahut sari mirchi dal degi accha hi hai manik KO sabak sikhana hi chahiye.
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Posted: 9 years ago
#49
Too gud
Loving the fights
Can't wait for more
Pls update soon
Tysm for the pm!!
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Posted: 9 years ago
#50
Love will be in the air soon

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