MaNan FF A journey from hatred to love ( chapter 6- page 15)

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hii guys my name is Anaita Arora naam toh suna hoga bt agar nahi bhi suna hoga toh ab sun liya hoga...hehe I am in class 10 and a craxy fan of MaNan as well as a PaNi shipper soo i m addicted to reading superb fictions over here and that inspired me to write a one of my own . its jst a mere thought i m giving over a prologue and a character sketch do tell me whether i should continue with it or not i will be posting most probably twice a week from 22nd december as having exams from 8 th...enough of my bak bak lets me tell u guys m one hell of a talkitive person.Please bear with this crap . Here u goo...
CHARACTER SKETCH

.MANIK MALHOTR :A rich spoiled child. he is smoking hot , killer looks every girl of his class wants him as hi BF . He is 16 years of age and studies in G D GOENKA SCHOOL which is a place where almost wealthy kids are studying. he is very arrogant wants everything to happen according to him. he does not takes a no for an answer bt never dated anyone . He belives in friendship his live is his family and his love are his friends can do anything for them.. he lyk to bully people bt very kind to his loved ones and can't see them suffering . wht will happen when he decides to take revenge from a girl who is no less than him...

NANDINI MURTHY : A talkitive girl full of life. she is also 16 and soon going to join G D goenka schook she is damm cute bubbly very sweet She respect people . she is rich too but is not aarogant but when she came on her style none can beat her in anything . She is full of attitude when comes to take revenge . A pattka girl not scared of any one . she is very pampered only sistet and have 9 brothers . loves her family a lot especially her Papa And Dadu who are her hero. she is very stubborn . she gets her every wish fulfilled . hates cooking loves shopping and can chit chat for hours wants to become a doctor

MAAN MALHOTRA : Dad of mankik. loves his son a lot fulfilles his every wish he is an ideal father even scolds him for his wrong doings loves nandini a lot as her own daughter..

.NYONIKA MALHOTRA : A kind lady mother of manik . she is a social woman. love his son a lot and even tries to cover him up in front of maan . manik is totally pampered by her...

AKHIL MURTHY : Father of nandu love his princess a lot . he is rich but yet simple man . never proud of his riches.loves his family more than anything. an ideal father . an open minded person gives free space to her daughter .trust her to max

RITU MURTHY : Mother of nandini .. loves her children a lot but even scolds nandu coz of her care free attitude and laziness . she wants her daughter to learn cooking . a family woman family is her first priority ..

MAAN AND AKHIL ARE GOOD FRIENDS EVEN NYONIKA AND RITU GEL UP QUITE WELL WITH EACH OTHER BUT MANIK AND NANDU NEVER MET EACH OTHER YET ...

FAB 4 IS same as in show jst few diffrences Cabir is not gayalya and dhruv lyk each other ...bt never confessed mukti is same bt not depressd

NAVYA NAVELI : Will become nandu's frnd she is also a fahionista .lives in delhi don't want to mess with people escpecially fab 5 . she talks a little bit with cabir

VIJAY MURTHY : nandu's grandpaa loves her lyk anything . cant even see a drop of tear in her eyes she can turn world upside down for her . she is star of his eye

soo this was the character sketch will try to come up with prologue soon if any other character sketch u need do tell mee ...new character will be introduced as story would proceed bt need ur support and for pm's buddy me do tell me wether i should proceed or not

A BIG WALA THANKS TO MYRAH DI FOR HELPING ME...
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INDEX
chapter 1 - page 1
chapter 2 - page 6
chapter 3 - page 9
chapter 4 - page 11
chapter 5 - page 13
chapter 6 - page 15

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Posted: 9 years ago
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So i guess m the first one to comment.. Yipeee...!!
The cs is super amazing... Both manan r rich n pampered by their parentd..
Manik is spoil brat n arrogant bt nandu is jst opposite.. Hmmm..!!
Their parents r frnd.. Interesting...
N ofcourse do proceed dear..
no need of thnk me yaar.. Yeh toh mera farx thaa toh help...n m glad i could help my frnd n my lil sis on forum.. It really makes me feel happy...
Update the prologue soon...
Will be waiting eagerly...

Stay blessed
Keep smiling
Loads of love

Myrah..
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Awesome
Fab


Interesting too

Update soon

N pm me
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Posted: 9 years ago
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interesting nd awesome
manan family r friend but manan don't know each other
waiting for the chap
plz continu soon
take care
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Originally posted by: _Myrah_

So i guess m the first one to comment.. Yipeee...!!

The cs is super amazing... Both manan r rich n pampered by their parentd..
Manik is spoil brat n arrogant bt nandu is jst opposite.. Hmmm..!!
Their parents r frnd.. Interesting...
N ofcourse do proceed dear..
no need of thnk me yaar.. Yeh toh mera farx thaa toh help...n m glad i could help my frnd n my lil sis on forum.. It really makes me feel happy...
Update the prologue soon...
Will be waiting eagerly...

Stay blessed
Keep smiling
Loads of love

Myrah..


thanx a lot di
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Chapter 1

( I forget to mention nandu have a small brother rishab and she lobes her a lot and vice versa)

Murthy Mansion:

A girl is sitting all surrounded with clothes and accessories. Her room looks more like a shooping centre. She is continuously caaling her mumma

RITU : (while climbing stairs ) hey bhagwaan kya ho gaya ab isee kabse chillye jaa rahi hai

( on seeing room's condition angrily ) nandu tune yeh kya haal bane ke rakha hai yeh tune apne kamre ka

NANDU : (innocently ) vo mumma mujhe samajh hi nahi aa raha ki kya pehnu

RITU : chal chal abhi shooping chalet hai tere liye naye kapde lane

(mean while AKHIL reaches there)

AKHIL : kya hua mere gudiya rani ko itni uddas kyun hai ??

NANDU : papa mujhse samjh hi nahi aa raha mai kya phenu aur mumma mujhe daant rahi hai (sadly)

AKHIL : yeh kya baat hui mrs. Murthy aap aise meri princess ko mat danta ki jiye

RITU : haan haan mai toh chup hi rahungi aap dono karo jo karna hai bigad lo apni beetiya ko

(after a lot of discussion on her dress nandu gets ready in a black short dress luking stunning with jst lip gloss and little kajal

She wore wedges and was ready)

Soon the family reached venue it was a party was an NGO ROTARTY CLUB which was joined by mr.akhil recently . they entered in a grand hotel as nandu visited that meeting fot the first tym she was with her mum. Guys let me tell u rotary is a ngo which is

World wide famous and it has 2 meetings in a month and quite exciting programmes are held)

A girl aaproched her nearly of her age

Girl: hey! I m navya naveli

NANDU : hii ! I m nandini murthy

NAVYA : soo u came here for the first tym ?

NANDU : yeah and u

Navya : well my dad joined it two months ago bt have no frnds coz of that rakshas MANIK MALHOTRA sabko apne issharo pai nachaat hai

NANDU : WHAT ?? aise kaise koi sabko bulley kar sakta hai . koi ni mai aa gayi ho na mai usse sabak sikha dungi

(they became quite good frnds and kept chatting with each other suddenly nandu noticed something and her blood boiled in anger. She saw a by asking a boy to clean his shoes and almst on verge of slapping him bt before he could slap him nandu hold his hand and thuddd... she slapped him hard leaving navya as well as fab 4 in shock )

Navya : nandu tumne yeh kya kiya ab yeh rakshas humare peeche pad jayega

BOY : hold nandu by her arms and angrily " how dare u haan how dare u slap me do u even know who I m . I m THE MANIK MALHOTRA "

(Nandu was still looking him with furious expression )

Nandu : jab answer dena that oh question hi kyun pucha

Manik : listen u miss. Whatever u will regret ki tumne kisse panga liya

Nandu : NANDINI MURTHY NAAM HAI MERA aur haan zara tammez se baat karo...tum nahi jante tumne kisse panga liya hai tumhare jaise mainebht dekhe hai

Tumhari nani yaad na dila di toh mera naam bhi nandini murthy nahi

To navya : navya chalo yaha se hum kamine logo k muh lagna pasand nahi karte

When she left fab 3 started laughing except dhruv while manik was having angry hunk wala expression

Dhruv : buddy tu theek hai naa zyada zor se toh nahi laga

Cabir : wohh yeh tha kya mtlab life m pheli baar kisine manik malhotra ko thappad mara..

Mukti : lyk seriously manik tune usse bina kuch kahe hi jane diye

Cabir : manik kahi tera dil toh nahi aa gaya us pe ( manik was jst sitting silently spole khel toh abhi shuru hua hai kabir aage aage dekh hota hai kya )😊

do tell kaisa laga ??

Edited by fireflies10 - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago
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awesome
nandu slap manik
i think manik was going to take revenge
continu soon
thanks for pm
take care
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Awesome update but don't make it nasty bad fun loving type me hi fight ho.
Update soon
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Wow...
Nice start
Bold nandini treat to watch
Continue soon...
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Amazing
Interstng concpt
Nandu ne manik ko slap kiya...ab kya hoga rama re...
Lovd it
Continue soon

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