MaNan FF A journey from hatred to love ( chapter 6- page 15) - Page 6

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Posted: 9 years ago
#51
interesting n lovely story...
continue soon...
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Posted: 9 years ago
#52
Amazing update
Monster manik is back
Wts gng in mind of Nandu...can't wait
Update soon.
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Posted: 9 years ago
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foghting like tom n jerry ...lovely update
i guess she will add extra spices in gol gappa
ty for pm
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Posted: 9 years ago
#54
It's awesome ..amazing
Loving MaNan bachon wali fights ...

Aur Mujhay lagta hai Nandu pani puri ko teekha kar fay gi

Thanks for the pm
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Posted: 9 years ago
#55
Hey babes 😊 jst read ur story.. it was hilarious. ..😉😃 dvstory has really nice nok jhok n tashan😳 plsss update sooonish.. Waitingg for nandu's mischievous plan😛... wich r d days of d week u post ur story? N plsss do PM me..
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Posted: 9 years ago
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thankew guys for ur precious comments. it means a lot . soo here goes with a new chappy and yaa some of you guessed it right abt her wicked plan

ENJOY😊

Precap : nandu thought of a evil plan😈

Nandu : tch...tch...manik malhotra ko ek ladki ke sath khade hoke pani puri khane mai daar lag raha hai kahi vo haar na jaye . I bet u lets see kaun zyada theeke gol gappe khata hai...(smirked)😛

Manik : aise kuch nahi hai nandini mai kisi se nahi darta

Nandini : toh kya cricket khelne k liye roke ho lets start the competition

Manik : mai yeh baccho wale competition nahi karta

Nandini : mr.looser saaf saaf bolo tumne haar man le

Manik : mummered teer ek dum nishane pe lagaya hai mujhse 4 se zyada gol gappe nahi khaye jate chudail ki bhi nandi hai yeh bt ab haan toh karna padega . his trance was broken by nandu she clicked her fingers in front of him )

Finally he muttered a yes making up his mind and saying to himself beta ab tih tujhe yeh karna hi padega izzat ka sawal hai . dikhade beta

Nandu : soo lets start

She instructed the waiter to give them theeke pani puri

They started eating🤣 manik ki toh 6 mai hi halat kharab ho gayi while nandu was continuously eating and enjoying ..nandu was enjoying manik's condition . she was watching his every expression from corner of her eyes nut she never even in her night mare did not want anyone to suffer coz of him. She knew both of them will not stop soo she being a matured one asked him to stop)

Nandu - ( worriedly) manik tum aur mat khao tumhari tabiyat kharab ho jayegi

Manik - miss murthy maan loo ki tum har gayi

Nandu - manik lets stop it here we will continue afterwards

Manik - (arrogantly ) no. I never loose ( bt mirchi ki ansoo aa rahe the uski aanko se )😭

Nandu - (sweetly ) ok I accept my defeat😊

Manik was shocked to the core seeing this caring side of nandu he didn't expected this from her while she went away from there and brought a glass of juice for him😊 . he was almost abt to drink bt he is too arogant to take favours so something clicked in his mind and he was abt to pour it on nandu's head while she shouted and hold his hand )

Nandu - manik don't u dare😡

Manik - I can miss murthy

(while a waiter was crossing by she took a glass of juice and was ready to pour on him. Both were standing standing head to head ready to pour and they didn't notice how close they were )

Nandu - go ahead mr. malhotra

Manik - sooch loo mai daal dunga😃

Nandu - toh tum kaunsa bach jaoge

(both knew its of no use coz they themselves will also suffer soo manik smartly said )

Manik - tum kya yaad rakhoge tumhe chod diya maine. Aaj mood nahi hai

Nandu - ( sacrasticly ) thankew soo much manik that's soo sweet of u ton spare me by saying this she poured the whole glass of juice on his head and ran away )

Manik - what the f**k . I wont leave u ( he started chasing her while nandu went between aunties to escape from manik.she was laughing wholeheartedly and manik started admiring her

Manik ( self talk) - I must say she is cute 😳. aare yeh kya soch raha hoon mai !!! his trance was broken by cabir

Cabir - yeh kya haal banaya hai tune apna . juice apne baalo se pee raha tha kya😆

Manik - saale mai tujhe batata ho juice kaise peete hai

Cabir - ( laughing ) bt on a serious note tera yeh haal kisne kiya ..

Manik was jst watching nandu and cabir noticed it

Cabir - kahi iske peeche lady dabbang ka toh hath nahi hai

Manik - hmmm..

Cabir - ( dramaticly ) kya mai koi sapna dekh raha hoon manik malhotra just hmmed on his insult

Manik - ( angrily ) shut up cabir😡

Cabir - kahi tujhe nandini pasand toh nahi aa gayi I mean u r still single soo😉

( he received a punch in his stomach)

Manik - isse phele mai tera muh tod doon chup ho jaa😡

( on other side )

Navya and nandu are laughing lyk mad

Nandu - maan na padega tumhe nandu kya maa chakhaya uss rakshas ko .

Nandu just smiled .

Host - good evenings ladies and gentleman . soo lets start today discussion and abt the future meetings and functions that are going to held . rest of the meeting went in peace the important announcement was that there is going to be a teej party next month and all district clubs will participate in that and there is a competition for kids . soo all have to participate and they have to begin practice from day after tomorrow

After the meeting gets over it was dinner tym and both malhotra and murthy families were sitting together and chit chatting . they called manik and nandini

Nyonika - manik from tomorrow she is going to join your school . u can be frnds with her and take care of her

Manik became happy listening this in mind tym for some fun tomorrow is surely gonna be a unforgettable day for u miss murthy

Nandini - hey monster kya dhyaan rakhega mera. Mujhe usse hi toh bachke rehna hai

Soon they finished their dinner and it was tym for the party to get over . all bade good bye to each other

Manik - bye uncle by aunty ( they both hugged him ) and to rishab - bye champ ( to nandu - bbiee dumbo meet u in school)

Nandu - how dare u call me dumbo u.. monster

Manik - hey do I look like a monster

Nandu - yes

They were interrupted by aakhil - kya hua baacho

Manik and nandini in unision - kuch nahi

He smiled and all went to their respective houses

Manik was lying on his bed on his stomach and was thinking about nandu "kya ladki hai vo phele baar kisi ladki ne mujhse aise baat karne ki himmat ki sari ladkiyan marti hai mujh pe lekin vo alag hai. Kuch toh baat hai usme .he rememberes nandu's concern while eating pani puri maine uske sath itna bura kiya still she cared for me ... kuch toh baat hai usme . thinking this a smile crept on his lips and he driftes into sleep

Nandu s pov

Saala kamina ullu ka paatha vo samjh tha kya hai apne aap ko mai usse sabak sikha k rahungi . she also soon drifter to sleep

Now see what a new morning brings for both of them...

guys do tell kaisa laga critisim more than welcomed . joote chappal sab kuch😊

take care

keep smiling

keep loving❤️

stay blessed

Edited by fireflies10 - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago
#57
Amazing story...nice concept...loved it...continued soon.
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Posted: 9 years ago
#58
wow...kya store hai yaar ...its amazing...oh their cute fights...can't wait for the next update..pls update soon
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Posted: 9 years ago
#59
Awesomee
Amazinggh
Superbbb update
Thnx for pm me
Nandu aur kitni gaali nikalogi manik ko...gol gappe competition...lovd it...continue soon
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Posted: 9 years ago
#60
Awesome update.gol gappe competition was fab. waiting for next update. Thanks for pm.

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