MaNan FF A journey from hatred to love ( chapter 6- page 15) - Page 10

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Posted: 9 years ago
#91
welcome back...
lovely update...
tysm fr the pm...
continue soon...
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Posted: 9 years ago
#92
awesome update ...loved their cute fight ...
manik n his excuses
ty for pm
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Posted: 9 years ago
#93
Wowww Amazing part after sooo long yr sooo enjoyed it

Hellarious part tha yr

Manan cute fights r always my favorite scenes

I guess accidental kiss ho gaya hoga

Hope sooo

Do pm me next part pretty pretty please

Vidhi
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Posted: 9 years ago
#94

surprise !!

didint expect me this early na

enjoy 😊

Chapter -6

Both of them were lost in each other's eyes . manik's one hand was holding her by waist and her both hands were on his shoulder.by chance cabir was passing from there he started laughing😃

Cabir - yeh tum dono YJHD ki poster ki tarah kyun pose diya hua hai ??

Nandu - ( blushing )😳 excuse me guys ( she went away)

Cabir - kahi tum dono ka koi scene toh nahi chal raha😉

Manik - cabir waise mujhe pata hai tu akal band hai bt plzz kabhi toh apni akal ko khola kar😡

Cabir - nahi nahi u knw phele nazar ki jagah phele thapadd ka pyaar🤢

Manik - hogayi teri bakwass !! ab chale🥱

Cabir - bakwass??? manik baba yeh ek din sach hoga👍🏼

Manik - aur yeh kisne kaha. Baba cabir das ne ??

Cabir ( nodded ) - haaan . he is a great saint..😃

Manik - kamine tu nahi sudhrega mere peeche kyun pada hai😕

Cabir - ab chal varna lady bheem chillayegi

( they both went to the music room where rest of the members of fab 5 were waiting as it was their music period so as usual they jam together )

Mukti - kaha reh gaye the tum dono( detective ka kaam shuru)

Cabir - pakdum pakdai khel rahi the ( smirking)😛

Mukti - tum dono ka screw dheela ho gaya kya?? Screw driver lao kya😕

Cabir - nahi nahi mukti hum dono nahi khel rahe the vo toh manik aurrr nandini khel rahe the

Alya , mukti , dhruv ( shockingly ) - kya ???😲

Alya - manik yeh kaise hua?? Tum dono frnds ban gaye

Mukti - kya mai koi sapna dekh rahi hu . manik malhotra who hate girls was playing with nandini that too who slapped him.

Dhruv - buddy its nice ki u r trying to b frnds😊

Manik - guys shant ho jaye let me explain first of all I m not trying to b frnds with her and he explained the whole fiasco as they were punishment and took a break from world war 3

Cabir - yaar tum dono itna kaise lad lete ho . kahi tumhari energy ka raaz BOOST toh nahi😉

Manik - chup kar joker chalo guys practice karte hai ...

( they all started jamming )

On the other side nandu and navya were roaming around the school as nandu was new

Navya - nandu kahi uss rakshas ne tumhe zyada tang toh nahi kiya

Nandu - nahi navya tum meri tension mat lo.. mai use handle kar lungi

Navya - haan vo toh hume pata hai tum humari sherni hoo😆

Nandu just smiled😊

Navya - lekin ek baat badi ajeeb hai humne manik ko kabhi kisi aur ladki se baat larte nahi dekha alya mukti ki alawa🤔

Nandu - kyun ??😲

Navya - vo kya haina ladkiyan uss pe marti hai aur use yeh sab accha nahi lagta😵

Nandu - yeh hi toh reason hai ki usme itna aatitude hai ...huhuh?? Yeh ladkiyan na pagal hoti hai

Navya - chalo yeh sab chodo yeh batao tumhara phele din kaisa tha

Nandu - worst then ever🤢 mujhe uss monster ki vajah se 2 teachers se daamt padi ... tum batao ??

Navya - humara din accha tha . lekin aaj humari pure din cabir de baat nahi hui👎🏼

Nandu - vo manik ka frnd cabir

Navya - haan

Nandu ( shocked) - tum usse baat karti hoo😲

Navya - haan vo uske jaise nahi hai vo bht sweet hai ( she said blushing)😳

Nandu - oh my god navya u r blushing. Do u like him

Navya - yes

( nandu hugged her )🤗

Nandu - did u tell him

Navya - nahi we are just frnds mai apni frndship risk mai nahi dalna chahati❤️

( after a bit more chatting they both headed towards their classrooms)

It was physics class and when nandu was looking for seat manik was sitting with dhruv . cabir noted her)

Cabir - hey nandini mere sath baith jao mai tumhe jha nahi jaunga

Nandini - hey arre aisa kuch nahi hai😊

Cabir( extending for a handshake) soo frnds ??

Nandu - u surre u want to be frnds with me . koi tumhe kacha chabba jayega agar pata chala toh😉

Cabir - ( chuckled) toh mai kaunsa kisi se darta hoon😛

Nandu ( shaking hands) ohk frnds...( she smiled )😊

A student came and informed them ki their physics teacher was absent so they can do anything they want bt they have to sit in class only )

Cabir - so lets play something

Nandu - bt we are only 2

Cabir - ohk that's not a problem .let me call manik and dhruv...

Cabir - oee manik aur dhruv apna bromance khatam karo aur yaha aa jao

(they both came as beechare bromance karte karte bore ho gaye the)

Manik - Saale tujhe humare bromance se itni jalan( jealousy ) kyun hai ??

Cabir - Ram !! mai ram bhakt aise cheezo k bare m sochta bhi nhi. Mai sirf prem bhakt hu ( he said full dramatically)😆

Manik- abe nautanki band kar aur yeh bata kya kaam hai??

Cabir - guys free period hai chalo kuch khelte hai

Dhruv - nice idea chal bingo khelte hai

Nandini - nah

Nandini - dhamsharats

Manik - aankhe test karwane ki bht zarurat hai tumhe hum sirf 4 hai aur maza nahi aayega😃

Cabir - yr plzz tum dono cat fight start mat karo. I ll suggest lets play red hands ..wht say ??

All nodded and placed their hands in sequeal first cabir then dhruv then nandu and then manik..manik deliberately placed his hand above nandu. Game started and everytym manik used to pat really hard in nandu's hand bt nandu cant defeat soo she asked to change the sequeal now her hand was on top of manik. She took her full revenge and now all of their hands were red . they decided to stop the game especially manik and nandu's hand were dark red . both had a glance of each others hand and were guilty )

Nandu - sorry manik. Maine tumhe shayad zyada tez mar diya

Manik - chalo atleast u realized

Nandu - aare tum bhi sorry bolo tumne bhi toh itni teez mara😭

Manik - get it straight manik malhotra kabhi sorry nahi bolta

Nandini - as u wish ( nandini didn't argue as her hand was really paining badly so she came out of the class and went to the stairs behind science section and was sitting there. Manik was feeling guilty so he took and ointment from sick bay and was searching for her in the school . finally he spotted her sitting on the stairs. He sat beside her and gave her the ointment

Manik - hmm... take this it will ease ur pain

Nandini - no need

Manik- tum le rahi ho yaa mai apne tareeke se do😡

Nandini - fine ( she took it and started applying bt winced in pain...ouch . he immedialtely took it from her hands and started applying on her hands carefully making sure she didn't fell pain whereas nandini just kept on looking him with wide eyes.

Manik - its done !! noticing her " aise kya dekh rahi hoo"

Nandini - nothing

Manik - sorry for this and he went away but there was sum1 who was noticing this all

Soo guess kaun hoga cupid ya villan ??😉

Batana zarur !!😛

Will be waiting for ur reviews😆

Till then

Bbyee🤪

Stay blessed

Be healthy

Keep smiling😊

loads of love

ANAITA❤️

Edited by fireflies10 - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago
#95
Wow.. so manik malhotra is changing. .
I think that person will be cabir only..
Do update soon
Waiting eagerly
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Posted: 9 years ago
#96
Wow regular updates.thats amazing.Awesome update. Cabir rocked. Manbir's convo was mindblowing with cabir's teasing session. Navni's convo was amazing. Game was fab.manan's sorry session was mindblowing. Loved it. Totally an blissful update. Eagerly waiting for next update. Continue soon.thanks for pm
May be cabir
Keep writing
Stay blessed😊
Edited by archu_asok - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago
#97
Manan ke story ka cupid baba cabir loved the update
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Posted: 9 years ago
#98
Awesome update
Cabir & Nandu become friends
Manik cares for nandini
Continue soon
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Posted: 9 years ago
#99
Amazinggg update
Thnx for pm me
Manik ne nandu ko sorry bola...cupid cabir hi hoga...thoda sa manik ko jealous krwayo...lovd it...continue soon
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Posted: 9 years ago
awesome n nice update...
manan moments r so lovely...
ty fr the pm...continue soon with the next part...

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