MaNan FF A journey from hatred to love ( chapter 6- page 15) - Page 8

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Posted: 9 years ago
#71
Hmm dekho dekho kiskaa comment aayaa.. Aapki di kaa...
Itne dino tak comment naa karne k liye badaa walaa sorry.. I hope aapne humey maaf kiyaa..
Coming to updates they were damn amaZing.. I jst loved all the 3 chps..

Frm starting it was damn interesting.. So suruwaat mey hi nandu ney moster se pangaa leliyaa...
Ab jab pangaa le hi liyaa hain toh consequence toh bear karnaa padegaa hi naa...
Loved thier nok-jhok...
Bechaari nandu k upar a full bucket of water daal diyaa.. Monster kahikaa.. Huh..!!
Bt thanx for showing strong nandu jo haar maaney waalo mey se nahi thi...
Yeh lo pani puri competition.. Pani puri kaa naam lete hi muh mey PaNi aagaya..!!
Nandu is really sweet.. Dilwaale types...*_* ( Haha dilwaale kaa voot ab tak meri shar se nahi utraa hain..)
Fir juice waala fight was superb... Haha our cabiraa is jst superb.. I really miss him in the show... Aur ab toh sabko miss karungi as kal last episode hain.. Soch kar hi m feeling so upset...!!
So now both will be studying in same school.. It will be fun too see...
Update soonish...

Love myrah...!!!!

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Posted: 9 years ago
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HAPPY NEW YEAR😉

a big wala thankx to my guys for leaving down ur precious comments😳.. a bada wala sorry for the dealy but tab se pata chala kyy end ho raha hai kuch man nhi kara likhne ka

soooyyy mafaaf ka r doo na😃

Chapter - 4

A new morning with new hopes and new plannings . here manik and nandu both were getting ready for school

Nandu s pov

Ayipaa u knw na I hate fighting bt wht to do I have to met him daily in school ...plzz be on my side

Manik s pov

She is different . I think I should talk to her and lets be frnd vo auro k jaise chipko nahi hai . in school today I ll ask her for being frnds rather than ememies

In school

Everyone was sitting in class and chit chatting as soon as teacher arrived there was a pin drop silence in the class. ( her name is ruhama rajan she is a very nice and soft hearted teacher.she teaches English. She is more lyk a sibling to her students and that's the main reason all students repect her and MANIK MALHOTRA is her favourite student . she treat him lyk his brother. She is not too old .)

Ruhama - good morning class!! So there is a new admission in our school soo welcome NANDINI MURTHY . manik was quite happy seeing her while nandu was cursing her fate ki section bhi same hona zaruri tha kya . )

Nandini - thank you mam

Ruhama - take ur seat girl

( only one seat was empty and u guys must have guessed with whom obvio our hunk manik malhotra . so nandu have to seat with him finding no other option )

INFO :

MANIK , CABIR,DHRUV AND NANDINI ARE SCIENCE STUDENTS . NAVYA IS IN COMMERCE SECTION. ALYA ,MUKTI IN ARTS.

( nandu making an irritating face sat beside manik and miss ruhama began her class . manik was was continuously poking her but she was ignoring . he irritately started pinching her . she shouted ouchhh.. all all eyes turned turned towards her and manik gave an I don't know anything look )

Ruhama - what happen nandini do u have any problem . ( she asked softly)

Nandu - (finding an excuse ) nothing mam actually mosquito bit me ( everybody find it to be lame but miss ruhama know manik very well . she understood manik must have done something soo to cover up and ask manik later she said

Ruhama - ohk are u fine now ( to which nandu nodded and once again she started explaining the chapter. Nandu sat giving a deathly glare to manik while manik was trying hard to control his laughter )

Soon the class got over and nandu shouted on manik

Nandu - manik malhotra tumhari vajah se pheli baar mujhe kisi teacher ne point out kiya hai . I hate u monster manik

Manik - as If I love u ...( sarcasticly )

Nandini - better u dont

Manik - listen I was doing it jst for fun

Nandini - right auro ko tang karke tumhe khushi hi milti hai

Manik - bull shit . I jst wanted to talk

Nandini - bt I don't want to talk

Manik - toh mai kaunsa tumse baat karne k liye mara jaa raha hoon

Nandini - better jst stay away

Manik ( self talk ) - here I was trying to be nice to her. To be frnds with her now lets take it her way .

Nandu went to met navya as it was there free period

Cabir who was silently watching the tom and jeery fight came to manik

Cabir - manik tujhe phele baar teri taakkar ki koi mili hai matlab tha manik malhotra ko chup karva diya

Manik - kuch toh baat hai usme cabir

Cabir - wht kya kaha.. soo manik tere dimag mai kya chal raha hai

Manik - cabir tu aam (mango) kha ne guthliya kyun gin raha hai ...( and went smiling followed bt both cabir and dhruv )

In Canteen

Nandini an navya were gossiping and the fab 5 arrived and wht they saw was nandu and navya were sitting on their table. A table which eas reserved for fab 5 . nobody dare to seat there )

Manik - wht the hell tum utho yaha se mujhe yaha baithna hai

Nandini - mai kyun uthu kahi aur ja k baitho

Manik - yeh fab 5 ki table hai

Nandu - kyun tumhara naam likha hai kya is table pe ...( sarcasticly)

Manik - ( coming close to her ) haan likha hai par tum andhi ho na tumhe nahi dikhega

Nandini - accha ... mujhe nahi pata tha tum bina kare hi kaam imagine kar lete ho ( she took one step forward)

( they were soo close that nandu was lost in his eyes . bt manik being a wicked one took a oen and wrote his name on the table and then moving aside he showed it to her and nandu's mouth open in perfect ooo shape)

Manik - yeh toh likha hai
nandu - (thinking ) bt phele toh nahi tha

Nandu - jhoot mat bolo tumne abhi likha hai

Manik -aare tum toh mere samne khadi ho toh mai abhi kaise likh sakta hoon

Nandu - aare jab...( she realized wht she was abt to say)

Manik - ( smirking ) jab...bola nandu

Nandu - vooo...wooo...when

Manik - kya woo... woo nandu saaf saaf bolo naa

( to avoid further embarrassment nandu ran from there accompanied by navya )

Manik ( self talk ) gosh jitna maza usse pareshan karne mai aata hai utna aaj tak kisi ko pareshan karne mai nahi aaya ...JUNGLI BILLI )

MUKTI - wooo manik kudos to u yr tune toh uski bolti band kara di

Alya - seriously manik hatts off to u kitni smartly tumne apna naam likha

Dhruv - buddy tu kyun usse pareshan karta rehta hai. She is soo sweet and innocent ( alya fumed on dhruv's sentence and mummeres to herself isse mere alawa sab sweet lagte hai )

Alya - oo really dhruv ( cabir ko shak toh bht phele se hai dhrulya pe soo to lighten the situation he interrupted)

Cabir - aare sahi toh keh raha hai dhruv she is very sweet but tu kyun J ho rahi hai ( teasingly ) dhruv ki kishmish toh tu hi rahegi

Both alya and dhruv blushed

Soon the bell rang and now its was tym for their mathematics period ...

Precap:

Nandini - yeh sab tumhari galti hai

Manik - ohh shut up yeh sab tumhari vajah se hua ...

Keep guessing kya hua

do tell kaisa laga

critisism is welcomed with aande and chappal😛

take care

keep smiling

keep loving❤️

stay blessed

Edited by fireflies10 - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago
#73
Haha really enjoyed their tom and Jerry fight...
Really excited for next
Do update soon
Waiting eagerly
Happy New year 😊
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Posted: 9 years ago
#74
Awesome update. Wow u r back with the update. Manik's teasing section was mindblowing but he wanted to be friend with nandini at morning but changed his mind now😆. Hmm interesting. Precap was amazing. Eagerly waiting for next update. Thanks for pm.continue soon.
Keep writing.
Stay blessed😊
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Posted: 9 years ago
#75
awesome n lovely update...
manan's moments r cute n nice...
eagerly waiting fr the next update...
tysm fr the pm...continue soon...
n also wish u a very happy new year...
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Posted: 9 years ago
#76
I am really disappointed never got pm for the last update being regularly reader also
Coming to the update it was awesome let how will Mnik n nandini will become friends n soul mates n
Happy New Year
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Posted: 9 years ago
#77
plz ya hate wala scene jaldi sa khatam karo..aur love wala scene suru karo...
plz...
next part plz jaldi post karo..plz asap.
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Posted: 9 years ago
#78
MANIK LIKES TO TEASE BABY DOLL ...HE SMARTLY WRITES HIS NAME ON TABLE ...HE IS FALLING FOR HER ...FOR WHAT THEY FOUGHT😃😃GUESSING
TY FOR PM
HAPPY NEW YEAR
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Posted: 9 years ago
#79
The update is awesome ...amazing...marvelous
Manik teasing Nandu is amazing

Awesome

Thanks for the pm
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Posted: 9 years ago
#80
Amazinggg
Fab update
Thnx for pm me
Manik ko lgta mzaa aata hai nandu ko pareshan krne mein...lovd it
Continue soon

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