MaNan FF A journey from hatred to love ( chapter 6- page 15) - Page 9

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Posted: 9 years ago
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Awesome update...
Just luved it...
Plz continue asap...
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pls post next part soon
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Posted: 9 years ago
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phele toh a big wala sorry for not updating😭

actually having exams in one month that too boards isiliye i hardly get time and whatever i get ijust starting reading fictions being a lazy lad

chalo bht hui baka bak finally m updating

CHAPTER - 5

While heading towards their classroom in corridor miss. Ruhama spoted manik and called him

Miss ruhama - manik come here .

Manik - good morning mam.😊

Ruhama - manik why were u troubling nandini in class . this was not expected of u

Manik - ( innocently ) no mam I wasn't doing anything .( pakde gaye )😛 there was a mosquito

Ruhama - manik u very well know u cant fool me😎

Manik - sorry mam vo actually she wasn't listening to me

Ruhama - so u want to talk when class in going on😡

Manik - no mam , I was asking for a pencil so that I could underline important stuf(miss ruhama seems to be conveinced .

Ruhama - ohk , now go u will be late for ur class.

( manik hurriedly rushed to the class as maths teacher is a hard rock to break . but today luck was on his side maths teacher was late he hurriedly went in the class and wanted to take seat beside nandini but to his badluck she was sitting with some else and manik became sad😭. So he took a seat in diagonal to hers 😉. teacher aarived and all wished him good morning and started their class. His name is mr.rakesh gupta)

Mr. gupta - students today we will study circles. All of u take out ur geometry boxes.

( here manik was least interested in mathematics and was busy making paper balls . soon he started to throw them at nandini while nandini was fuming 😡. she finally whispered to him

Nandini - tumahri problem kya hai ?? . tumhe panda nahi hai kya ??

Manik - meri problem tum ho ( by saying this he threw one more paper ball on her and now our jungle billi was back she also started throwing paper balls . there was fight going on a full swing suddenly mr. gupta turned after completing the question and witness this tom - jerry fight and his anger rose to its peak

Mr. gupta -( shouted) manikkk . wht are u guys doing . yeh kutte billi ki tarah kyun lad rahe ho. Yaha ka koi fighting competition chal raha hai

Manik - no sir actually she started

Nandini - no sir he is lying actually he started ( both kept and arguing and finally mr.gupta spoke)

Mr . gupta - shut up u both get out of my class ...right now

Nandu in an apologetic tone said - soorrry sir I will not repeat it again😭

Mr. gupta - get out . I thought u r a good student but no( tears welled up in nandu's eyes. Now manik couldn't take it more he held nandu's hand and walked out of the class with full attitude . there was a pin drop silence of 5 minutes while nandu was crying . manik ave her his handercheif to wipe her tears . nandu pushed his hand away he again tried and nandu finally took it .)

Manik - wipe ur tears tum rote hue acche nhi lagti😕 .

Nandini - phele baar in my life m standing out in a punishment .

Manik - ( shocked ) what !!!! toh tumhe toh khush hona chahiye

Nandini - aur vo kis liye

Manik - aare I made u experience this also😃

Now nandu was in her fighting mode

Nandu - yeh sab tumhari wajah se hua

Manik - ( In his mind and JUNGLI BILLI is back) wht meri galti yeh sab tumhari galti hai maine bola tha paper balls marne ko ...nahi na ??

Nandini - ooo look who is talking phele tumne marna start kiya😲

Manik - toh tumne response kyun diya . you should have concentrated on ur studies naa

Nandini - u r right I should ignore u . now don't even try to come close to me . stay 100 m away

Manik - feelings are mutual miss. Murthy

( they both stood at opposite side of door leaning to the wall but both were getting bored as it was still 30 minutes to go for the class to get over. Both wanted to talk to each other but EGO came in between . finally manik broke the silence )

Manik - nandu I m getting bored . plzz speak up

Nandu - mai kya tumhe chatter box lagti hu

Manik - lagti nahi hoo mujhe yaakin hai ki u r a chatterbox

After few minutes they both laughed .

Manik - chalo lets take a break . we are frnds but only for 30 minutes

Nandini - ok vaise bhi u don deserve my frndship. Remember I HATE U💔

MANIK - I hate u too ( he poked his nose) .soo lets play a game ki hum sirf jhoot bolenge aur uske siwa kuch nhi bolenge

Nandini - vaise nice idea . I ver knew tumhari dimag mai acche ideas bhi aate hai

Manik - very funny miss murthy ... For few minuted lets forget that we knew each other name and start with intro

Nandini - my name is mona lisa

Manik - ( in full ranbir kappor style ) tumhe mona kyun ya lisa. U know lisa 1920 wali jab usme aatma aati thi vo ekdum tumhari jaise lagti thi CHUDAIL.

Nandini lightly punched in his stomach while he was laughing loud nandini thought yeh hasta hua itna accha lagta hai pata nahi saddu banke kyun ghumta rehta hai yeh itna bhi bua nahi hai

Nandini - manik stop na ...

Manik - manik kaun manik . mera name manik nahi hai ... Mera naam ranbir kapoor hai ...

Nandini - accha lagte toh Bandar jaise ho ... u know ranbir is soo hot so goodluking aur tum toh ekdum chaprasi lagte hooo

Manik - chaprasi what chaprasi...

Nandini - aiyooo tumhe itna nahi pata it means watchman

Manik - ab toh mujhe yakin ho gaya ki tumhari aankhe gharab hai... School ki sari ladkiyan marti hai mujh pe...

Nandini - ohh plzzz . okay do u have a girlfriend

Manik - yes ( remember unhe jhoot bolna hai )

Nandu was shocked ki jis jaise bande ki gf kaise nahi hai

Manik - u have a bf

Nandini - yes

( pata nahi kyun bt manik was not happy )

Manik - pata nahi tumhara bf tumhe kaise jhelta hoga... I pity that poor fellow😆

Nandu - manikkk... Mai tumhe chodungi nahi and she started running behind him ( they were running in the whole corridor up and down the stairs laughing out loud suddenly nandu lost her balance on stairs and manik caught him on time and and and ...

To be continued...


Accha lage toh plzz like aur comment karna

bure laga ho toh joote chappal bhi chalenege

bbieee

stay blessed

enjoy 😛

loads of love

Anaita❤️

Edited by fireflies10 - 9 years ago
Tiara115 thumbnail
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Posted: 9 years ago
#84
Nyc..
The game was nyc..
Do update soon
Waiting eagerly
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Posted: 9 years ago
#85
finally like finally u back...

kitna wait karvaya.,...

itni der baad post kiya aur vo bhi itna chotu sa update not fair yaar...

i want lamba wala update,.,,,,,,,next time pls long update...

and the update was totallly a fun...

loved their cute fights...

manik and his excuses ,,,,but aj to bach gya...

so manik ko nandu k sath bethna tha but bad luck...

ye ladka na khud shanti se beth ta hai na nandu ko bethne deta hai...

and that kutte billi ki tarah kyun lad rahe ho...that was really funny...😆😆

ab mil gayi dono ko punishment

nice game...

chaprasi???...like seriously...🤣

it was fun watching them...

ab last mein kya hua...

pls update soon this time...


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Posted: 9 years ago
#86
Hey dear...
I read ur story in a go...
Awesome it is...
Especially MaNan ..
Awww... Jangli Billi n Monster awesome!!!
Everything from the starting till now u have nailed it///
Let it be ManBir toks MaNan fi8s everything!!!
Canteen was my fav!!! Loved it!!!!
U knw in have read Married MaNan
Parent MaNan College MaNan
Office Employ MaNan
BT school MaNan awww. Its too cute..
Its my first time for the School MaNan
Everything z pretty cute!!!!
I loved it!!!!
Thanks for the PM dear///
Update soonish next///
All the best for ur board xams
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Posted: 9 years ago
#87
Awesome update. Manik and ruhama's convo was well penned.Manan's paper ball fight was mindblowing. Manan's break was beautifully penned. Their convo was amazing. Manan's reaction to boyfriend and girlfriend was well written. Totally an blissful update. Continue soon.thanks for pm
Keep writing
Stay blessed😊
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Posted: 9 years ago
#88
Welcome back
Missed ur story
Superb update
Tom & Jerry avtar of manik & Nandu
They gt punishment
Continue soon
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Posted: 9 years ago
#89
Amazinggg update
Thnx for pm me
Lovd tom n jerry fight
Continue soon
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Posted: 9 years ago
#90
it was great
the fight was cute
but too short
hope u get more time for a longer one
ty for pm!

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