Manan ff : ishq soofiyana updated Page 47(15 A ) - Page 4

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Posted: 9 years ago
#31
Nice
Loved it.
Continue soon
Take care
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Posted: 9 years ago
#32
AWESOME UPDATE
now i think mulya wont do anythink to nandu
continu soon
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Posted: 9 years ago
#33
multi and alya..😃poor girls
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Posted: 9 years ago
#34
Its amazing,mesmerizing,awesome n m speechless...keep writing ,its a pleasure to read ur updates,wow! :-O :-)
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Posted: 9 years ago
#35
Wohoohoo...last mein nandini mehra...damn good...alya ke expressions...hehe...

Car day...seriously cabir...haha...

Loved the update ...

Enjoyed reading sooo much

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Posted: 9 years ago
#36
Amazing update
Mukti aliya shockd
Lovd it
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Posted: 9 years ago
#37

Hello i am back with my new part...
Enjoy..


Part 4

Manya were laughing seeing their shocking face...

Navya : hnmm... So hume is se ye sik milti hai ki...

Manik : we should not judge anyone with their physical appearance...

And they both hi - fi each other..

Mukti : he he he bht hasi aarei hai ha na...

Dhruv : ye tu kuch aur hi nikli..

Abhi : vaise man na padega she was such a sweetheart ... I mean itna sab hone je baad usne kuch bola bhi nhi... Otherwise rich brat are not so like her..

By this he hide behind dhruv..

Mukti chuckles... : vaise ye... Its true she even not for once show off her self... Even she travelled in rickshaw...

Alya : ya i tu can't imagine it...

Listening all praises unknowingly manik felt proud...

Alya : guys... Rishab mehra's sister nandini mehra... I mean man na padega she is so pretty... And you know it was the main reason i hated her more... As she will be diva you know which place i have...
But now knowing her indeed she is.. Itna suna hai uske baare mein...
And that Man Rishab Mehra...
Omg he is my crush...

( guys in my story karan teykar is playing role of Rishab...
And he is handsome... After parth he is my rockstar...)

Mukti : don't tell me tu nandini ke paas ab uska number mangegi haan...

She said chukling and alya too chuckles...

Manik : who knows...
By the way its late we gotta go..
And ya guys dadi is back mujge aaj hi mili school mein...

Listening this every ones face lit up and they drove away for malhotra mansion...

Meanwhile nandini reaches her mansion and changes for pooja in mandir...and kefts from their for temple...



After chitchatting... All gang goes leaving manik and his gf..

Dadi : acha manik ready ho jao hume jaana hai kahan...

She said ruffling hair of manik whose head was in her lap...

Manik : umm...kahan...jans hai

He said sleepingly...

Dadi : mandir...

Listening all neend uding of manik...

He sits and laughingly saya

Manik : he he... Mujhe pata hai aap majak kar rahe ho right...

Dadi gets up and starts moving towards her room...

Dadi : 5 minute be ready... Otherwise you know the consequence...

Manik sighs and leave for his room to get ready for going mandiir...

But little did he knew his mandiiir willl become his most beautiful place today..


After one hour

Pooja was done by both...

They were leaving when...

Dadi : ek... Minute... Gadi roko

Manik : kya hua dadii...

Dadi : are roko

He stops the car...

Dadi comes out of car she goes in direction where girl in red
anarkali was standing and talking to someone...

Manik also comes out... And walks behind her daadi...

And stands beside her...

Daadi puts her hand on girl's shoulder and as soon as girl turns her face manik was shocked to see her...

He was about to take her name when daadi hugs that girl and girl also happily hugs her back...

Manik was confused...

Daadi breaks the hug and

D : meri bachi...

N : daadii...

Nandini speaks with tearfull eyes smilingly...

And nandini hugs her again...

After 5 minutes they were sitting in nearby garden..
On grass...

Manik was sitting with his back on tree and nandini on dadi's lap and dadi was ruffling her hairs...

D : kaisa hai mera bachaa...

N : m fine... But your bacha missed you shhooo much..

She speak childishly and manik chuckles... Nandu look towarda him and glares while he makes pout...

M : acha now tu tell... How do you guya know each other...

Dadi then narrates him that half year back when she went as a client in rishab company... And than she went in their house..

And she statred loving them as her childrens and they also used to talk on phone...

M : aapne mujhe kabhi nhi bataya...

Dadi : haan kyunki itna time hi ni mila...

M : ohh... Tu aap mujhe akela chodke baar baar is angry bird se milne jaati thi... Haan...

He speaks making angry face...

Nandini with jerk get up and

N : you camel... How dare you to call me angry bird...

M : hmmm... By mouth...

Nandini makes irritayed face and turns het face and pout


Manik chuckles...

Dadi : acha bas... Nandu tumne mom dad ki barsi ki pooja karli...

Listening this nandini becomes sad and...

N : yess ...
I miss them...

And tears starts flowing from her eyes...

Dadi : ni bacha... Acha rishab kahan hai ab tu tum dono yahan rehne waale ho na

N : ni m all alone...

Dadi hugs her and she started crying badlym...

Manik was feeling sad...

N : y...y meee???
Muje sab akela kyu. Chod dete hai... Pehle mom dad... Than daadu... Yyy...????

Manik was also in tears...

After some time nandu stops crying and daadi also makes her smile...

Daadi : acha mujhe jaana hai... Manik nandini ko humare ghar leke aayi...

N : daadi but..

Daadi : ni nandu tum humare saath humare ghar rahigi...

Manan were shocked listening this...

N : daadi but...

Daadi : mujhe kuch ni sun naa hai... Aur rishab se mai poich loongi tum mere paas rahogi bas... Hmm...

Nandini smiles and nods... Seeing her smiling manik also smiles...

Daadi goes from their...

N : chale...

Manik nods nandini was about to walk when manik holds her hand pins her to tree...

He caresses her chicks and hairs..

While nandini was numb to react...

M : don't ever speak that you are alone... Now we all are their for you
Your bhai... Daadi... And... And mee...hmmm

Listening this nandini smiles and nods ...

Manik too smiles and kiss her forhead while she closes her eyes...

Both moves away feeling awkward while manik just curses himself for losting control...

Than they both leaves from their...

Nandini informs aman about her staying and he says that her all things have been send to malhotra mansion an rishab has informed them before only...




Yepp ho gya... I don't know kaisa lagega but suggest me agar you want...
Please...


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Posted: 9 years ago
#38
It was great. Now they will be in same house. Hihihi 😉 😃
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Posted: 9 years ago
#39
It was amazing...

Liked dadi and nandu...

Muklya...haha...nice lesson...hehe...

Manan in last...superrr se uperrr...

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Posted: 9 years ago
#40
Yaar its awesome and its beautiful story

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