Manan ff : ishq soofiyana updated Page 47(15 A )

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Posted: 9 years ago
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Hello guys here its saya...starssaya...
Or you can say divya...

Its my second ff on manan...

I wanna show manan in school how thay will...meet
Their fights and theit love...


In this manan will of 17 and 15

And my first story is tu mera iahan hai...

Ok byee...and i ll post CS in some time...

Character sketch : page 1

Part 1 : page 2

Part 2 : page 4

Part 3 : page 6

Part 4 : page 8

Part 5 : A and B page 11

Part 6 : page 13

Part 7 A and B : page 15

Part 8 A : page 18

Part 8 B : page 19

Part 8 C : pg 22

Part 9 : pg 24

Part 10 A pg 26

Part 10 B pg 28


Part 11 A & B 30

Part 11 C pg 31

Part 12 pg 32

Part 12 B 35

Part 13 pg 38
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Hello...m here with character scatch...

Manik Malhotra : handsome , hot , sexy , hearthrob of his school...
Every girls dream...he is of 17...reads in class 12th...
Headboy of school...
Famous for Bad boy...never fallen for any...
Every time confidence guy...nervous ness is not his cup of tea...

Mukti vardhan : same as show love her friends...she is of 17...
In 12th...in relationship with abhimanu...

Dhruv vedant : same as show... Of 17 in manik's class...love alya...and in relationship with her...

Cabir dhawan : same as show...17 year old...12th class...
In relationship with navya..


Alya saxena : same as show...in relationship with dhruv...16 year old...in 11th class...bff of navya

Abhimanu khanna : sweet handsome guy of 17...in manik's class...in relationship with mukti

Navya kapoor : sweet beautiful girl of 16...reads in class 11th...bff of alya...and cabir's gf

Harshad saxena : same as show...in manik's class...

Nandini Mehra : beautiful , cute girl...of 16...full of life but take time in new place...in 11th class...new student...


Radha malhotra : principle of school...and trustee of space...
Loves his family in which only her grandson is their...


So guys here are the charactersketch...
If you want to give any suggestions you are most welcome




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Posted: 9 years ago
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It's awesome
Do update soon
Interesting and different
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Nice waiting to see how manik will fall for her
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Part 1

A part...

In big mansion 6 people were lying on each other and one was sitting and gazing at stars [and may i need to tell who is that person...ofcourse not so stupid of for asking this]

He was thinking that from last 15 years how badly he have craved for love...his parents died when he was of 2 years
It was not like he was alone...he was having friends who loved him very much...he was having grandmother who loved him but still it hearts...he dated many girls...and he really meant that but he never got that feeling...so he always dump girls which made his bad boy image...

His trance was broken by...mukbir fights...

Mukti : ye meri bear hai...tu dur reh...sakjha

Cabir : oh madam andhi hai dhyan se padh kingfisher likha hai uspe...Mukti fisher nhi...

Muti : haan tu...cabitfisher...bhi ni likha...

C : madam king tu likha hai...na...aur king ladka hota hai aur yahan koi bhi ladka ye peena ni chahta tu mujhe de...

He snatches bottle and runs...mukti also runs behind him and holds him and sits on his back...and pulls his hair...

C : oh abhi bacha apni jangli billi ko...

All were giggling seeing them like this...

Abhi : bro tumhara matter tum hi sambhalo...

Manik : oh k ok guys...cabir who said no boy want it haan...i want it so give me...

He takes bottle and keep it on table than he holds mukti from her waist and keeps her on sofa...than he make cabir stand and...

Manik : so ye meri ho gayi...and as it's last one so...we all gonna share it...

All : yeee...yipeee

They all drink...dance like crazy as from tomorrow they have to go to school...their new session with new fun..


On other side...beauty was sleeping on her king sized bed after praying to her ayippa to give happiness to all...and be with her tomorrow on ber first day in her school...

They all were happy...but still...new was their to come in their life who will become thair everything their ANGEL...


I know its small...but kaam chalao...and next part in some time...

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Posted: 9 years ago
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hey divya,
awesome cs...
loved the school concept...

chotu part bt cute...manik is so alone...

waiting for manan meet...

continue jaldi jaldi


LOVE
SANJANA
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Posted: 9 years ago
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wow nice CS

your school concept is nice

mukbir fight was cute

update next part soon.
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Hi I'm u r new reader


Please accept my buddy



Awesome




Mind blowing



Nice


Please my nandu modern ,diva type Please
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Posted: 9 years ago
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AWESOME UPDATE
i impatient to see manan 1st meeting
update soon plz
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Part 1

B part...

It was bright morning...they all were sleeping cuddling each other alya and dhruv... Mukti and abhimanu... Navya and cabir... But manik was sleeping alone hugging his pillow...

Manik was the first to open his eyes...he smiles looking at all and tears well up in his eyes...he sees pillow and sighs...

Manik's pov...

No one is their to whome i can cuddle...he takes deep breathe...no manik you are strong no one is their so whay...you have to be strong...

His trance was broken by sudden hug from all...

Manik : ok...it was surprise..

Mukti : yaar decided hum log aise ek dusre ke saath ni skyenge...hum manik ko cuddle karke soyenge ...

Alya :yes...

And they hugs him again...

Manik smiles and..

Manik : ok now get ready...m going you be ready fast...otherwise we will be late...

And he goes from their...

Mukti : yaar i can't see him like this...vo humesha se akela tha...hum hai uske lekin phir bhi he need someone on his as we girls need...and we have but he do not...

Alya : hmmm...manik just shows but he is too delicate just like us...

Navya : ya...vo bht akela hai...

Dhruv : don't worry jaise we have our better halfs he will also get...lekin abhi time hai hume tu school mein hi mil gayi lekin kya pata iski wali ki flight choot gayi ho...

He winks at all and they smile faintly...

Mukti : but kaise vo kisi ko bhi apne paas ni aane deta...he is scared of breaking trusts isliye vo kisi ko apne paas ni aane deta...

Cabir yawningly comes and put his hands around mukti shoulder...

Cabir : tu chinta mat kar iski walk is se bhi do kadam aage hogi...is se bhi jiddi...

And they all laugh...

They all goes to their rooms as they all have their seperates room in malhotra mansion...

And than leaves for school after breakfast in their oen cars...

On the other side also girl gets up and get ready for her school ...her hair in pony tail...kohl in her eyes...skirt which was reaching upto her thigh and half shirt...

She comes down...and sit on dinning table and start eating her breakfast sitting their alone and eating...was painful...

She still remembers when she was of 4 her whole family died in bomb blast but she and her brother who were leaving their holidays with their dadu...stayed alive...but after sometime thair dadu also get expired...they went to US..
Where their whole property...but when she turned 15 she asked her eldor brother who is of 20 to send her india for further studies...
But her bhai stayed their for wors...they were so rich that tueir grand children's can also live without working...but rishab wanted to work so he send nandini with all security...

Nandini eats her breakfast and cones out and sits in her...

N : kya hua...kaka car start ni ho ri...m.

K : pata nhi bitiya...kya hua mai dekhta hoo...

N : are...mei tu pehle hi late hoo

She gets down from her car...and leaves...

KK : are beti aap kahan jaa rahe...

N : kaka mujhe late ho rha hai...

K : are beti 8 cars ke hote hue bhi aap...

NN : kaaka late ho rha bye..

She shouts and leaves...

All gang come out of their and come together...

M : ufff...back to school.. Chale...

All smiles and were abou to move when riksha stops in front of them...

Mukti : haiii...ye rikse mein kaun aaya hai i mean koi bhi ni aaya...hume chodkar sab..byke ya normal cars mein tu aate hi the.mm.m

Cabir : are koi staff member hoga...

They start moving burt suddenly someone bump on mujti...
Mu : what the...???andhi ho can't you see and walk...

Alya : are ye tu wo..riksha waali hai...

Mukti : you bloody commoner mera bag gira diya...

Abhi , cabir , dhruv , navya were quiet they were not liking but they can not even stop mukti alya as they know they will...become angry...

But mr manik malhotra was spell bounded with this beauty...her bid doe eyes...her hairs...her pink pouty lips to whome he want to kiss hars...

( did i need to tell who is it...)

N : m..m.sry...vo...i was late...

Mukti : bag uthayo...

Nandini quickly picks up the bag and

N : mm...really sorry...i am late na...so i was running...

Alya : aww...mukti miss commoner ko english bhi aati haim...
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Mukti : ya i see kahan se sikhi...

Alya : hmm...malik ki beti se right...

Nandini was confused...

N : hmmm...mal...mali..what ???

Alya : oh hello don't pretend ok...we know you commoner's cones and show off in front of every one...

Manik : alya mukti...yaar it's ok...its not a big deal right...let her go she is late ..

Mukti : manik tu...

Manik : muku...

Mukti gets sides annoyingly..

Nandini starts moving and turns her sideway and mumbles a Thankyou to manik.
And smile appears on his face..

As soon as she leaves

Muku : what the hell manik tu uski side le ra tha????

Cabir who was noticing..manik understand that manik liked nandini...so he...handles..

Cabir : aahh...mukti kya yaar vaise hi time waste karva diya chal ab.

An thay starts walking and manik mumbles a thankyku to cabir and cabir smirks...

Cabir in his mind : beta tu tu chal tujhe ache se welcome karunga...



Guys ho gya...tell me how it is...
Please comment...please...





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