#4 Devil's Bride manan ff part 42 in thread 5 link is on pg 1 - Page 83

Originally posted by: apps33

Please feel free to criticise my work🤣🤣

I dont know why but I suddenly felt like giving a visit to ur thread only to be met with this reply of yours...

Haha...

Tu bhi bilkul mere jaisi hain... Ditto...

I don't know why but whenever I read something... I expect it to be written and presented well...

Warna my brain automatically starts coming up with so many suggestions... How can things go better and what is lacking

But I end up refraining my self from commenting at all

Because I never know how the other person will take it...

And now am so glad I found out am not the only one like this

Hi-fy sissy...🤣

sure no problem at all Darling good criticism can help you to improve your writing but i have seen so many writers on the forums who took it in a wrong way like bashing and all politics bna ke rkha h yar no offences but i just feel like jiske jitne threads wo utna acha jiske jyda page comment wo best i want genuine readers i am not a greedy on 15 to 20 pages are more than enough than what is the need of more concentrated on your work we are not a pro or something but some writers are like this they can't take criticism in a good manner or i refrained myself me bhot kam chize pdhti hu forums only few writers other wise i am more than ok with wattpad fictions not manan stories but yeah others are so good chal if u are ok with will tell u for sure what is u r weak points
hy fy darling

Originally posted by: Aashna_chawla

sure no problem at all Darling good criticism can help you to improve your writing but i have seen so many writers on the forums who took it in a wrong way like bashing and all politics bna ke rkha h yar no offences but i just feel like jiske jitne threads wo utna acha jiske jyda page comment wo best i want genuine readers i am not a greedy on 15 to 20 pages are more than enough than what is the need of more concentrated on your work we are not a pro or something but some writers are like this they can't take criticism in a good manner or i refrained myself me bhot kam chize pdhti hu forums only few writers other wise i am more than ok with wattpad fictions not manan stories but yeah others are so good chal if u are ok with will tell u for sure what is u r weak points
hy fy darling

Originally posted by: apps33

Yeah I know...

I have read so many stories that get a whole lot of votes and comments

But when I go to read it

It makes Complete no sense to my little brain...

Very few writers take criticism positively

And i can assure you am one of those :-P

Cause I know to differentiate between criticism and bashing...

And i also know well how to deal with both...

I guess you know😛

yeah for sure in next one will tell u how to improve or your lack points it will help you yeah so many stories really doesn't make sense i tried to tell them what is lack in their writing but the they me wrong or land up bashing me badly so i thought forums writers can't criticism but if u can surely i will do

Nice update...

thanks for the pm di

Originally posted by: Aashna_chawla

yeah for sure in next one will tell u how to improve or your lack points it will help you yeah so many stories really doesn't make sense i tried to tell them what is lack in their writing but the they me wrong or land up bashing me badly so i thought forums writers can't criticism but if u can surely i will do

Please do tell me too if u can... How
to improvise the things in writing...
I will be more than glad ...
I m so glad to meet so open minded people here... Those who r happy to know there mistakes... Improvise in them ...

Thanks

Keep smiling
Stay blessed

Originally posted by: cmamona

Please do tell me too if u can... How
to improvise the things in writing...
I will be more than glad ...
I m so glad to meet so open minded people here... Those who r happy to know there mistakes... Improvise in them ...

Thanks

Keep smiling
Stay blessed

sure dear now i will try u r work or will tell u where u should improve

hey... whn r u thinking to update nxt?

Hy why aren't u uploading next part... plz upload its been so long 😭