#4 Devil's Bride manan ff part 42 in thread 5 link is on pg 1 - Page 82

wow
i really nice update
kya mast update diya boss apne

Waiting

MANIK sudhar gaya...He is a good BOY now...

OWWW...

👏👏

No nandini but its OK manik part was also important
I'm actually surprised that he understood neyonika and stood by her this time
Thanks t for this update
It was good
Waise I don't want nandini to forgive manik so easily
As she has suffered a lot in fact she can loose her life anytime
I just hope she survives it

Hey
Read dat persons comment on ur story...
And dat reminds me dat if she was dat much disgusted with ur writing then y she was reading and she was actually nt only reading it casually bt also an active user... Dats y she knws everything...
Anyways bashers r always there to improvise us... And ur and was good...

Nw come to d point ...
Thanks for responding to my comment and I m happy to make u smile with my comment...

And dis chappy was sooo much interesting and a reality check which I loved it. ...
But yr felt like sab kuch bht jaldi ho gaya...
Ya although I loved it cz it was happy realisation for manik...
Manik ki insecurity ne sab kuch karab kiya...
What abt nandu...????
Did she gonna forgive him dat easily...

Please update soon
Egarly waiting

Keep smiling
Stay blessed... :)

If u get some tym please have a look at my work too... :)

Originally posted by: cmamona

Hey
Read dat persons comment on ur story...
And dat reminds me dat if she was dat much disgusted with ur writing then y she was reading and she was actually nt only reading it casually bt also an active user... Dats y she knws everything...
Anyways bashers r always there to improvise us... And ur and was good...

Nw come to d point ...
Thanks for responding to my comment and I m happy to make u smile with my comment...

And dis chappy was sooo much interesting and a reality check which I loved it. ...
But yr felt like sab kuch bht jaldi ho gaya...
Ya although I loved it cz it was happy realisation for manik...
Manik ki insecurity ne sab kuch karab kiya...
What abt nandu...????
Did she gonna forgive him dat easily...

Please update soon
Egarly waiting

Keep smiling
Stay blessed... :)

If u get some tym please have a look at my work too... :)

Sure whenever i will get time jrur pdhungi but i have a bad habit criticize krne ki like i can tell you where u should improve only when if you dont mind because i just found forums writer aren't good with criticism it actually help us to improve still i am not satisfied with my writing so i have to improve more but here writers are not good with advises or good criticism so i hardly comment on something or actually i hardly read here something if u are ok with it do let me will try your work fr sure
And nandini is not going to forgive not that easily usey bhot papad belne honge

Originally posted by: Aashna_chawla

Sure whenever i will get time jrur pdhungi but i have a bad habit criticize krne ki like i can tell you where u should improve only when if you dont mind because i just found forums writer aren't good with criticism it actually help us to improve still i am not satisfied with my writing so i have to improve more but here writers are not good with advises or good criticism so i hardly comment on something or actually i hardly read here something if u are ok with it do let me will try your work fr sure
And nandini is not going to forgive not that easily usey bhot papad belne honge