#4 Devil's Bride manan ff part 42 in thread 5 link is on pg 1 - Page 80

Too good awesome i think now we are slowly slowly coming to an happy ending hai na ???
But I'm not complaining one thing but i want some conversation of Nandini's preggy and MaNan conversation too can u give me plz it's okay if u don't want to give but i hope u understand...
Loved ur update aur haa aise hi aap hamare liye jaldi jaldi update karte rehna aur haa ek bada wala ThanksThanks to banta hai to give us a special treat by updating early we will wait for an early update okay
Bohut sara buk buk ho gaya sorry but haa u r FAB seriously u write superb Thanks aur bye

Awsmm update...

Finally like finally manik knw d truth😊 he was r8 absolutely he dont deserve her at all😡 really glad dt mothern children got reunited😃 plzz update soon will b eagerly w8ting for nxt one indeed😊

superb update. ...
but again manan face off miss. ...
at least manik realised his mistake. ...
but is it goona be so easy for nandini to forgot everything nd forgive him? ???
how is he going to seek forgiveness from her. ...
After which he had done it's going to be very tough. ...
but he deserve this kind of punishment. ...
about dhruv thing, nothing to say. ...
continue soon. ...
stay blessed nd take care. ...

i love ur story😊-silent reader (please update soon)

Ohh god di this girl really needs a brain...
I cant understand from which era she belong...

Ek side to kehti he ki talking about sex is not bad..
Or dusri side aapke hi blame karti he on talking about sex..
Plus u have never write anytihing which is pathetic..
Infact u make us feel aware about the real mentallity of an indiviual mind...
Ab aisa to ha ni ki vo to sati-savitri ho...jisse ye sab ni pata ho...
Ofcourse everyone knows and infact aware about it..
But when someone share it...peoplr startd bashing saying that they r harming the youth...
As if they r a 2 yr old kid...knowing nothing..

This thinking of yours us pathetic..
And girl samaj_savika...u really need a treatment...
U said u r an open minded person..
And agr open minded person tum jaise hote he na to i m happy to be called as introvert...

ABOUT AN UPDATE..
Fabulous.
Finally manik got to know the truth...
Whatever he has done is not a mistake but a sin...
Amazing update...
Cont soon..

PS- u r doing a great work..
U r my hero...the way u r ignoring everything and continuing ur work is commendable..
As in such cases people's mind is usually stuck on the person's works..but u decided to ignore it and write such a superb update in that situation...this show what really a person u r...
HATSOFF GIRL.

hey there sorry for being late lekin mene update upoad hotay hi parh li the. sorry was at the office so couldn't comment earlier and after that was very busy...

Originally posted by: mishghan

hey there sorry for being late lekin mene update upoad hotay hi parh li the. sorry was at the office so couldn't comment earlier and after that was very busy...

coming to update it was good and well- written...

ok i have some question i don't know if this hurts u no offence just clearing up my confusion ... and on a serious note i does not at all means that i am insulting your writing or there is any flaw in your writing... NO Hell no ! i can never ever imagine to do that! you are damn good and beyond words !!!

i asked you a question too in my previous comment may be it got skipped by mistake its ok... or may be the question was too silly so sorry about that! #nooffence

i wanted to know does manik knows about nandini pregnancy complication? no right? not yet? (sorry if its a silly one or too early to ask this)

and why the hell nandini is now asking to live? i mean she knew this that her chances are 33 percent so now why whats the reason behind her choosing life before death? i mean what is she planning to do! (again sorry if that's a silly question and too early to ask)

i am too eager to know what gonna happen next may be that is why... sorry to hurt u but this does not strictly i repeat IT DOES NOT MEAN THAT THERE IS ANY KIND OF MISTAKE IN YOUR WRITING ! its just that may be i am too stupid to read between the lines and understand them...

sorry in advance to hurt ya!

and don;t worry i have already decided my punishment if you feel anything bad with this!😳

looking forward to the next one soon

and i won't mind if you wouldn't reply #pakkapromise

and about that basher... dear the best thing i have learnt in my entire life is to ignore... that is the best weapon you could use against anybody! so just ignore don't get offended coz whatever they say whatever they do is certainly not the truth just an illusion!

ok now this was damn long lol

anyways thank u again and sorry about anything! nothing personal please!!!

haha damn stupid grl itni bar koi sorry bolta h i am not your teacher who will scold u this comment cracked me big time the way you said sorry aww such a cute comment ok so now the answer she wants to do it for herself bcz nyonica told her you should fight for your life also she is no where at fault than why sacrificing her life our life matters the most for us she want to fight for herself khud ke liye jeena h usey that's the motive your life is damn imp for you or yeah about the bashing i give a shit about that they can't make me quit when i have such a loving readers like u all who cares about two three bashing yar such a cute comment it was

Originally posted by: mini_manan

Ohh god di this girl really needs a brain...
I cant understand from which era she belong...

Ek side to kehti he ki talking about sex is not bad..
Or dusri side aapke hi blame karti he on talking about sex..
Plus u have never write anytihing which is pathetic..
Infact u make us feel aware about the real mentallity of an indiviual mind...
Ab aisa to ha ni ki vo to sati-savitri ho...jisse ye sab ni pata ho...
Ofcourse everyone knows and infact aware about it..
But when someone share it...peoplr startd bashing saying that they r harming the youth...
As if they r a 2 yr old kid...knowing nothing..

This thinking of yours us pathetic..
And girl samaj_savika...u really need a treatment...
U said u r an open minded person..
And agr open minded person tum jaise hote he na to i m happy to be called as introvert...

ABOUT AN UPDATE..
Fabulous.
Finally manik got to know the truth...
Whatever he has done is not a mistake but a sin...
Amazing update...
Cont soon..

PS- u r doing a great work..
U r my hero...the way u r ignoring everything and continuing ur work is commendable..
As in such cases people's mind is usually stuck on the person's works..but u decided to ignore it and write such a superb update in that situation...this show what really a person u r...
HATSOFF GIRL.

yeah Darling i know well i gave a shit about this bashing or her thoughts i bloody don't care this bashers can't make me quit i am going to write like a manic person will write more make out usko jo ukhadna ukhadne de i don't care i gave damn about this writing or criticism go hand in hand i know how to deal with this kinda person so chill i have so many loving readers who cares about bashing let her be in hell

Awesome amazing update