#4 Devil's Bride manan ff part 42 in thread 5 link is on pg 1

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Sonalmanan

@Sonalmanan

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Posted: 9 years ago

#461

Amazing!!! Manik is behaving as a jerk... I just want to open his head n change wiring of his brain circuit... Nandini is right at her place... But why is she sacrificing her life... Noyonika is also right at her place... Pls continue soon... I just want devil to b on his knees... Thanks for the pm... 😊 😊

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aishubangia

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Posted: 9 years ago

#462

Ohh poor neyo.. never knew that she faced soo much...crying crying n crying. Nothing else... update ASAP

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Iqra

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Posted: 9 years ago

#463

Awesome update

Please pm. Me

Take care

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uzmaaqil

@uzmaaqil

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Posted: 9 years ago

#464

Well what to say .. I'm just lack of words man!!! The chapter was superb.. The way u portray each and every character that's amazing ..Hats off to you girl.. Seriously!!!! Today I'm accepting that writing the devil's story isn't an easy job.. Because its not like any other ff .. And I'm really thankful to you for giving us "THE DEVIL'S BRIDE" I don't want you to end this .. but I can't even force you to write further .. But i expect a new story from you after ending this please !!! You're an amazing writer trust me .. I really mean it .. Anyway please continue soon ! Take care !

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MahimaSankhla

@MahimaSankhla

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Posted: 9 years ago

#465

Brilliant piece of writing. U did a fab job...Hw these small little things creeps into ur relationship frm nowhr n ends up eating it, destroying everything..

Looking fwd to the next chapter.. Truth being revealed in front of Manik..

Jst a request, plsss try n update soon

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apy1608

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Posted: 9 years ago

#466

FINALLY A MUCH
AWAITED CHPTER ARE HERE.
SO PERFECT... THE LETTER IN
STARTING...was beautiful... loved it!!...
then nyonika past... ohhh yrr...;(
then ...lst prt... finally she got to knw...

eagerly waiting fw nxt...;)

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HTA111

@HTA111

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Posted: 9 years ago

#467

Omg heartfelt amazing superb fantastic update

Its so heart wrenching for Nandu after hearing what manik listened to and reacted accordingly without asking her anything

Nandu doesn't want to clarify anything with him now as his trust on her is very shallow and she wants him to keep on hating her and thinking she never loved him til she dies

How manik will cope up after knowing the truth he will be devastated with out her

Continue soon and thanks for pm

Eagerly waiting for next part

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Sm0405

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Posted: 9 years ago

#468

I'm totally in love with your writing nd this ff ... Trust me on this ... I jst can't get enough of ur this ff ... Nd thus part jst touched my heart ... Frm the very beginning to the end ... Everything jst touched my heart ... Frm where do U get the ideas for writing each nd every update ... Matlb aap kaise likh pati ho yaar ... It's soo difficult to write this kind of storyline with this perfect words ... I jst dnt know what to say nd how to describe ur writing in words ... U r jst tooo mind blowing ... U know my very first MaNan ff is this one ... Devil's Bride ... I started reading ff's of MaNan frm this one only ... Nd jst loved it a lottt ... Can't believe it will end soon ...

Nd abt this part ... It again brought tears in my eyes ... Tht letter of Nandini's to her baby ... It jst made me cry ... Tears were nt stopping again ... Nd then comes Nyonika Nandini's convo ... So Manik's father is alive nd he never looked back after tht accident ... Can't believe this ... He loved his children very much bt never looked back at them ???? Lyk seriously ... Nd Nyonika's each word has jst reached to my heart ... U have written tht part amazingly ... Trust me ... Nd then Nandini goes to get her all answers ... Nd finally when she comes to know abt the actual reason of his this rude nd heartless behavior, it jst shook her to Hell ... Her anger knew no bounds ... She was shocked, hurt, annoyed nd more than all is she was angry knowing tht Manik never trusted her any word ... He never trusted her enough to fight his insecurities ...

Seriously jst in the fire in his insecurities, he burned their whole happiness, feelings, love, trust, relationship ... Everything ...

This was another mind blowing update frm u ... Nd now I'm egarly waiting for the next part ... I'm waiting fr Manik to know tht .. The person he was doubting nd hurted is ready to give his life fr their baby ... She is nt selfish or any cheater ... What he thinks abt her is going to be proved wrong ...

Plz plz plz plz plz plz plz plz plz plz plz update the nxt part sooonnniishh ... I jst can't wait for it ...

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51083alishashah

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Posted: 9 years ago

#469

Nandini's letter made me cry...oh god it was so emotional...u beautifully penned down every emotion of a mother who is most probably not going to see her child not even for a once...well i m sorry i m not in a condition to write anything more coz i m crying while typing...u seriously made me so emotional