#4 Devil's Bride manan ff part 42 in thread 5 link is on pg 1 - Page 46

I recently read all the chapters infact almost all in one go n I must say u have written one of d bestest stories on manan. U r a very matured writer having vry strong views. The way you describe the scenes feels like it's all happening live right in front of my eyes...

superb update yaar...nandinis letter to her baby was heart touching...and nandini ntonica talk was soo TRUE and much needed for nandini...rach and every U expressed through nyonica is so TRUE and so matured...and finally nandini came to know the reason behind maniks hatered towards her...now its time for manik to know the truth...cant wait to see realized and guilty manik...plz update soon yaar

Emotional Update..! 🤔

oh my god such an amazing chp I can't believe that someone can write to such an extend u know I literally felt each n every emotion n word of it itss do awesome hattssoff how u do it any inspiration? ? pls let us know well this is a story which ki really i dnt wanted it to end pls take it a lil n a lil more pls dont end it soon its one of the bestests story I have come across cant believe the way u write it yarr its grttt really grt I m feeling each n every letter n word that u have written I can imagine the whole situation trust me on that pls dont end it I have lots to say but it just that I m too tired now I will for sure for now u r amazing n the bestests person writer I have come across pls keep it up u r just amazing! ! hatssofff n tq for the pm pls update soon u keep us waiting allott ps ur biggest fan! !

l am crying and crying.
nandu and nyonica both sacrificed their life for their love and children. nandu she is in so much pain.Aashna seriously yaar u are an amazing writer.l am getting so much connected to u story day by day and it is no easy to get out from this feeling and takes long time after reading ur each update.and ha seriously if l am in nandus place l will never ever forgive him.

Yeah u r write

so finally the update is here...the misunderstangis about to clear..but so many months passed,, Manan so unhappy..hope the next update clears everything...pls pls update soon

Biginning was really sweet and touchy..
The way nandini tried to talk to baby through a letter was beautiful...
But little bit confued after tht as hospital part was of present seeing manik's father plus nyonika's convo...but all of sudden how come manan confrontation comes..
Still the update was fab..
Update as soon as possible cant wait..

l am crying and crying.
nandu and nyonica both sacrificed their life for their love and children. nandu she is in so much pain.Aashna seriously yaar u are an amazing writer.l am getting so much connected to u story day by day and it is no easy to get out from this feeling and takes long time after reading ur each update.and ha seriously if l am in nandus place l will never ever forgive him. thnx for pm and eagerly looking forward to get next update as soon as possible. stay blessed and continue soon..