#4 Devil's Bride manan ff part 42 in thread 5 link is on pg 1

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littlesnow

@littlesnow

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Posted: 9 years ago

#441

Yeah this was awaited chappy,but next will be most awaited...I mean maniks reaction ..
Little misunderstanding n insecurity made a huge rift between them...both had suffered a lot...
Neo also sacrifice a lot...I feel bad for her..
Wel neo nd nandu part was nice,...
N dairy section was too emotional ...
Waiting for next...

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Vidushi

@chocopie26

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Posted: 9 years ago

#442

That was really awesome!!!!

U r a beautifully talented writer...

Ur writing skills are mashallah!!!!

I have always said that romantic writing utni tough ni hoti

BT sad n painful stuff...u really need to feel and Penn it down well

And u do that!!!! U r terraffic!!!!

Update soon!!!! A much awaited chapter gonna come!

I wanna knw how Mr.MALHOTRA gonna react!!!

Stay blessed...

Keep writing

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Mushkat

@jerryporter

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Posted: 9 years ago

#443

chalo... at list nandini ko to pata chala ki why manik hate her now itz manik's turn to know about nandini's secreat

bt plz give a happy ending

waiting...

continue soon

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Khan Shumaila

@7_Sasha

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Posted: 9 years ago

#444

plzzz update next part ASAP emotional update... nandini k letter ne toh sach me rula diya...

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kajalgupta4

@kajalgupta4

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Posted: 9 years ago

#445

Yeaaahhh nice chptr...feelng relaxd tht aftr so mny tym nandini confronts manikkk...nw its d turn fr manikkk. Watng lyk helll ...fr heavn sake update furthr chptr as soon as possible...dnt tk too much tym...!!!!!plzzz

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SrishtiThakur

@SrishtiThakur

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Posted: 9 years ago

#446

Please try to make next chap soon..today i cried again but it's okay in love with this ff ..I cried when she was writing letter ..

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keerthana

@keerthu27

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Posted: 9 years ago

#447

1st part nandhus letter to her unborn child was heartwarming. ...nd slowly all the truth r coming out..
finally manik will come to knw abt the biggest truth..
update soon plzzz

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archu_asok

@archu_asok

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Posted: 9 years ago

#448

Awesome update. Loved it to core. The way u penned this update was commendable. Hats off.the letter was so emotional and mindblowing.Nyonika and nandini's convo was amazing. Finally manik splitted everything to nandini. Eagerly waiting for next update. Thanks for pm.keep writing. Stay blessed.

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aroy90

@aroy90

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Posted: 9 years ago

#449

Beautiful

Though it was a bit emotional

But, it had to be done

This chapter was much needed

I must tell u that I thoroughly enjoyed reading it

Lovely

N thanks for the PM dear

😊

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tanyasrivastava

@tanyasrivastava

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Posted: 9 years ago

#450

I have always waited for the next part and now that u have said that the next part will be the last part ... I am at cross roads now since i dont want this story to get over... ever then again I want to know what will Manik do once he get to know the truth about both Nandini and Nyonika ... 😭

It was it is and always be one of the best dark ff i have read 👏

nd I'll be waiting for your next story too 😃

My longest comment ever☺️