#4 Devil's Bride manan ff part 42 in thread 5 link is on pg 1 - Page 44

oh god..just go n publish this story as a book ...its worth reading...u are such a crazy writter...my heart is burning wit emmotions...i just cant wait until all the complications got over..or atleast that donky manik realize how stupid was his brain..shit..he is such a idiot..giv him some brain..he realy needs it..
fab update..
girl u are creating an amazing story..
thanks for the pm..
cont sooon...

Awesome update dear

Woaaahhh...!!! U knw wht... I didnt cry while reading previous update of urs...although it used to pain... Bt trust me today whn nandini was writing tht letter for her child...i couldnt stop myself crying...it was soo heart wrenching yaar...the fact tht she wont see her child..gave me jitters...u tottally stole my heart...! Manik talks everyday with his daughter whn nandini sleeps...thts a very awww part of the story... He loves her daughtr to the infinity...!

But this was the one thing tht i wanted to happens frm very starting whn the musunderstanding happend... & tht clarification happened today...! Its too late yaa... I feel bad for both of thm... N they both stand correct at their places... Both were not sensble enough to talk over this matter..clear everything... Nandini would hv tried fighting fr this relation... Bt i think she was exausted this tym..coz this was the thing tht she been doing frm the starting of their relation... But ab kya... Now toh everything is over...!

I dont knw if in ur story nandini will b alive or not... She would die giving birth or not... Or if some miracle happens... I so want the miracle to happen...finally manik ko sab pata chalega..i knw he would regret his deciosion..feel angry on himself...will b too numb to react may b ...tht he was the one who riuned everything...! It makes me very sad... After predicting the ending tht it might not b a happy family in tge end...! But m pisitive...

I never got a tought of leaving the story...was coz i knew one day stars would shine... Manik will understand everything... They willl b a happy couple... Tht Hope kept me going...n reading ur update always...Anyways now toh u r ending the FF with 10 more epi... But let me tell u it was the best Dark FF i hv ever read on forum..! If u end this one do come up with another new FF... Love ur writing like anything... U made me addicted ya... Ur way of expressing the feelings... Make me go gaga over ur writing..hahaha...!!
UPDATE SOON.../GIVE US A PRECAP...!!!!!!
God Bless U

Awesome update

Wowwwew

Amazing chappi dear
dear

Kabse i was waiting yr

Koi nahi
Wait was worth it
Eagerly waiting to know exact truth yr

Asap post it

Nice update...more Dan d stryyy ur point of view is right...

Finally the misunderstanding is gonna get cleared...and coming to the update...it's really fab...I really liked the convo between nyonika and nandini...and finally manik tld nandini all the thing...it's vry interesting...eagerly waiting for the nxt update...thanks for entertaining us...

Awesome update I loved it Mnik such a idiot

Finally nandu asked manik n he told her

Beautiful chapter I am in love with your story lovely update it was thank you so much devils bride is a beautiful story and you are doing justice to it