#4 Devil's Bride manan ff part 42 in thread 5 link is on pg 1

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Rita_gurung43

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Posted: 10 years ago

#101

I'm waiting desperately for Manan together n forever but it looks like Manan never be together 😭

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Shrabasty Habil

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Posted: 10 years ago

#102

Update soon. I can't wait anymore. This was the amazinggg.

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dhillon90

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Posted: 10 years ago

#103

Awesome
Amazing
Too emotional
Painful update
Manik aur nandu donno pain mein hai bss frk itna hai manik apni pain ko dikhata nhi hai...lovd it
Congratulations for new thread
Continue soon

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megha94kumari

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Posted: 10 years ago

#104

nyc update dear... plz don't mind... I know its not easy to write lyk dis... BT u HV to write more dialogues rather then POV. . hope u understand

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lovePANI

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Posted: 10 years ago

#105

Speechless...
Beautiful ..beAutiful update
i loved it how u show nandu vulnerable state...
u mentioned it so beautiful..
how she was feeling...
when she said..
But Some day you'll cry for me
Like I cried for you
Some day you'll miss me
Like I miss you
Some day you'll need me
Like I needed you
Some day you'll Love me...
But I won't Love you back...
I won't be there for you..
it broke my heart... :(
Till now don't know about manik pov.. but for sure he must also be very broken ..my poor babies ..
oWhen that girl told the truth to nandu ..i thought..she will go n talk to him..but aaa..she didn't ..
she is correct in her place..this devil manik..
when he'll get his akal..
n also how can i forget afterall it's a Devil's Bride...
looking forward for manik pov..
i hope mystery will be clear...
Thanx for pm
Keep smiling n take care..

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Chinmayi

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Posted: 10 years ago

#106

thank you so much for the pm

i loved it totally

and the update yes this shows how broken nandu is

she is going to die and he just dont care about anything and he wants her to leave

he will cry for her and shout for her one day he will realize but it will be too late

and he will understand that day of what pain he nhad made her through

i toatally love your ff because you show us the reality of the world

not alike as other ffs all are lovely and caring outside yes v girls want those type of persons in our life but not every girl will b lucky enough and this story may b relates to one of her who may b suffering like this

im not hurting anyone im just talking about the devils outside the world

sorry if i hurt anyone

so very excited for the next update

mystery reveals

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Vandyandy

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Posted: 10 years ago

#107

Res

Hey. Aashna hi

Congrats Honey for the new thread👏

Thks for the PM

Such a lovely update, just Muhaaa😊

Nandu just marvellous, so courageous

Her behaviour was out of the way, BRAVO👏

Finally she came me to know he was not cheating her.

She was happy but at the same time sad too, broken also

Why just why, what went wrong, what wrong did she do , for him to behave this way with her, this all sort of things going on her mind, she just couldn't figure it out

Wow what a performance Nandu gave Minblowing👏

But it can be dangerous for their child, drinking alcohol

Ooo Manik was speechless seeing nandu's this Avtar😆

Good she had to take a stand for herself, she need to get answers from him

She felt so lonely, she just needed him to be close n hold her tight.

Just worried when the truth will be out , what will happen to Manik

She won't be there with him, when he will need her .

And also when he comes to know about the danger of her life if she continues the pregnancy.

Hmmm !!! Have to wait

Wow mystery of hate red is going to come out in the nx

Can't wait

Update soon

Edited by Vandyandy - 10 years ago

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25prachijadhav

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Posted: 10 years ago

#108

Nice update👏, hope things will clear between them. Nandini was completely broked down.

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Megha Agarwal

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Posted: 10 years ago

#109

Nandu so vulnerable...!!

Manik has seriously lost brains..!!😭

Make him understand n know the truth!!

...before its late..!!

Continue soon..!!!

Edited by megha6agrwl - 10 years ago

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Honey123pooh

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Posted: 10 years ago

#110

How can someone do this to a person he loved..!!! Omg..! Had tears while reading...hope manik realises his mistake soon before he has to regret..!and lastly you are an awesome writer..keep writing..! Waiting for the next part..!

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