Manan ff- 'Just a ROOM MATE' Chaptr 9A/B updtd..

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Posted: 9 years ago
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PROLOGUE:

NANDINI is a 20 year old girl that is a sophomore in college studying film and photography.
She moved in with her childhood friend "MANIK MALHOTRA".
She promised herself not to get attracted to him, :p ;)
will she find herself falling into Manik's arms or will she remain just a roomate???? ;)

Soo u guys wng to knw answrs of above questns??
Dn jst wait fr 1 chappy...
Let me knw if u guyzz are intrstd or not..??


INDEX :

Chaptr 1- Page 1
Chaptr 2- Page 3
Chaptr 3- Page 4
Chaptr 4- Page 5

Chptr 5- Page 7
Chaptr 6- Page 9
Chaptr 7- Page 10
Chaptr 8- Page 12
Chptr 9A/B- Page 14
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krazzy_parthian thumbnail
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Sounds interesting...

Waitjng for roommates journey...

Continue soon

Congrats for new story

LOVE
SANJANA
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Interesting
Wow room mate journey
Nice concept
Continue soon
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Posted: 9 years ago
#4
sounds interesting..
Manan are room mates..
Would love to read
Update soon
Pm me
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Posted: 9 years ago
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chapter 1
*Nandu POV*
I wake up in an actual bed today. I was happy, because we finished moving in, minus the few empty boxes I had to take outside.I put on my glasses, and checked my phone. I got a text from my mom ten minutes ago.
Fr: Ma- I am coming over to meet you and your roomate.
My first reaction was:" Well, shit!!".I got up from my bed, put on dark skinny jeans and a muscle tee, and put my hair up into a messy bun.
I frantically started taking the boxes downstairs. AsI throw them outside, I hear a car pull up in the driveway.
I ran to get the door, only to see Manik, who is shirtless, opening the door.
I see my mom, I blush, and awkwardly wave my hand for her to come in.
"Is this your mom Nandu?" Manik asks, "She's Beautiful"
"Put on a shirt before you cmplimnt my mom," I laughed..Manik ran upstairs, while I took my mom to the loft to talk.We talked for a while until my mom raised a ques.."Why is your boyfriend taking forever?" she said, she wasnt joking.
"Mom he isn-," I was intterupted by Manik.."We aren't dating," he said with a smile onhis face.
He walks down the stairs and sits right next to me, "we are just roomates,my name is Manik by the way."We laughed, and talked when we heard the doorbell ring.
"I'll get it this time!" I said,
I open the door,"Mrs.Malhotra?"
"Yup, thats me." she said (she has the same smile as Manik).She sat down near my mom.
I said,"Mom this is Mrs. Malhotra Please, call me Nyonika!!" (she held her hand out for my mom to shake).
We ended up just chatting, we laughed, it was fun.
"Well I should go," my mom said.
"I'll leave too," Mnk's mom said.
After they left I slumped on the couch with a huge sigh.
"Mom's are a handful sometimes," Manik said sitting next to me.
"I know," My phone goes off, it was the group chat with Cabir,Dhruv,Maddy and I..
Fr:Group- Mank, nandu we're coming over, be ready to give up a bed.
To:Group -I am not going to leave my bed.
Fr:Group -I guess you and mnk are sharing a bed then, ooohhh get it mnk ;)!
To:Group-Shut up.I look at mnk, he's smiling like an idiot.
"We have to if they are coming, I sleep shirtless, you dont mind do you?" mnk says.
"I don't care, I sleep pantless,but I'm sleeping with shorts on." I say.
"Ok" he replies.
I had dinner with mnk & othrs, then went upstairs to film a youtube video, and finish some homework.
Around 2:30 I hear mnk switch on the lights, I wake up and put on my glasses.
"I didn't wake you up did I?"
"You did," I say,
"I dont mind though."
"I check my phone and go back to sleep".
Mnk swtiches the lights off and come in the bed, our backs facing each other. Not very later I feel something hard touch my back I wake upto see mnk's arm around my stomach, my back was touching his abs.
I think: Ayiappaaa!!!, why, why,why, why. I ended up just falling
asleep... :)

Soo hws it..dere u go with 1 chppy..share ur views nd tll me whethr i'll cntinue or not??
Edited by asangel - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Wow
Interesting story.. With cool mothers..
Lol..
Can u pls nt use short forms fr manik's name.. I get lil confused..
Continue soon
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Posted: 9 years ago
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It's interesting.. Loved this concept of room mates.. Could you give a character sketch if possible. Please continue soon.. 😊
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Thnks ...
der u'll gt cs within stry...
kash321 thumbnail
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Posted: 9 years ago
#9
Hey Nicely written
Got some jist of d story
Keep up the good work
All the very best
Update soon
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Nice chp ...
I lik it a lt...
Plz snd me pm whn u updt nxt...

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