Manan ff- 'Just a ROOM MATE' Chaptr 9A/B updtd.. - Page 5

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Posted: 9 years ago
#41
Interesting title..

gonna read ur story now! 😃

feedback later..
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Posted: 9 years ago
#42
Awww manik already being possessive n all... Loving it... N all te pairs r jus awesome good tat u kept them intact like the show... Loving the story... Keep writing dear

Love you
Pravallika aka PraNi
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Chaptr 5:

We dropped off Cabir and Navya to their houses.The car ride was silent.

"So, umm, about this morning, what happened?" Mnk askd, (I wish he had forgotten).
"Its just, well-" by this time we reachd the house, I became overwhelmed, this day made me think of everything.
I ran toward the door, opening it, running into the house, up the stairs, into my room closing my door shut.

Manik rushed after me by the time he entered my room I was on my bed, sobbing into my high school year book.
"Is that our high school year book?!" he says gleaming with joy,
( he closes the door and sits on my bed, not realizing I was crying),

"Lets take a trip down memory lane, shall we?"He looks at me confused then looked at the year of my year book.
"You didn't forgive me did you?"
"No, I did, I just... cant seem to forget, I remember all of it," I say
"at the start if Senior Year you had liked me, and I liked you back.
You always did the nose thing with me, like the thing you did at breakfast?

2 months later, you had finally gotten enough courage to ask me out, as you know, I said yes.
I could've honestly said I fell in love with you in the seven months we were together.
Hell, we went to prom and both won king and queen,
"I point to the page in the book,
"but then, senior day at the park, you told me that you had something for me.
(I searched all around the park, I didn't care what you got me, I cared that you were there).
You didn't eat lunch with me, then there I saw you, laying against that tree, kissing that girl.
I ran off crying, you broke my heart manik , I loved you so much, and I still do, not the same way of course-" (I was cut off)..

"Senior day, was honestly the most regretful day of my life, I lost you, I felt horrible, I loved you too,

"I'm sorry," he said as he pulled my face to meet my eyes..
"I loved you even after we broke up, I don't know if I still do, but.."

(he puts his arms around me and gave me a hug)
"I forgave you, manik," I choke out the words, gasping for breath
"I just can't forget."
"Neither can I," he says.
Letting go of his grip, he leaves my room.
*Manik's POV*
I walk out the room. Why was I so stupid to kiss that girl, backstabbing the love of my life? I was literally an idiot.
I walk back to my room, closing and locking the door behind me. I sit on my bed and sigh. I reach over to the "junk" drawer on my beside table, I dig through all that trash, its still there.
There it is, the necklace I was supposed to give Nandu, along with a picture of us. Maybe I'm just over thinking all of this, I'm not in love with her.
I stare at the necklace, I turn the pendant around to see the words
"I love you Nandu<3" written on the back. I sigh and look back in disappoint at my Senior self.
I know she forgave me, she let me live with her, but she didn't forget about our past. I stare at the picture in my other hand.I don't blame her for not forgetting, because, honestly, I can't either...

Sooo Past is here!!!!!! Haawww!! Manik & Nandu were Couple!!!Whn??Why??Howw???
Hehehe!!! I knw u guys wnt too ask dis type of questns..
Abhiii or b ese bht Twists hn soo keep readng ..keep lvng nd cmmntng too.. ;)
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Posted: 9 years ago
#44

Originally posted by: suraiya77

Awesome
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Amazin'
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Mindblowing
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Superb update
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Loved it


Thnkuuu dear.. :)
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Posted: 9 years ago
#45
Waaasooo shocking update.
Manan is already a couple.
But poor nandni left him after watching him kissing any other girl.
She thought he loved that girl.
But manik still love her.
Then why he kissed that girl.
Will wait for next.
Edited by Sofiafarooq - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago
#46
Wow!!
Read all parts in a go ...must say COMMENDABLE WORK!!...u deserve a virtual hug for writing such a unique concepts on forms ..amazing..continue soon. Dont get upset if some people dont comment...i m here to compensate...😆😆😆 remember u rock it !! While u write..luv ya..keep smiling..n entertaining😃😃😃


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Posted: 9 years ago
#47
Its simply amazing
Plz continue soon
Eagerly waiting for next part
Interesting story
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Posted: 9 years ago
#48
Shit this is a huge secret.
But loved the update.
Post the next update soon please.
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Posted: 9 years ago
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THANKS FOR THE MUCH NEEDED REVEALATION UPDATE... THE TRUTH IS OUT NOW... HOW COULD MANIK DO THAT TO NANDINI??!!! TRY TO UPDATE SOON... LOVE YOU...
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Originally posted by: shivanichauhan1

Wow!!

Read all parts in a go ...must say COMMENDABLE WORK!!...u deserve a virtual hug for writing such a unique concepts on forms ..amazing..continue soon. Dont get upset if some people dont comment...i m here to compensate...😆😆😆remember u rock it !! While u write..luv ya..keep smiling..n entertaining😃😃😃



Thnkuuu soo mch dear...ur cmmnts means a lot to me...

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