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Posted: 9 years ago
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Part II
Everyone except cabir, Navya, Mnk, and I left. We all sat on the couch, it was silent.
"Wanna do something?" Cabr decides breaking the silence.
"Um, there's a newly built park not too far from where we live," I say,
I check the time on mnk's watch, "It's around lunch time, you guys want to go to a picnic there or something?"
"Sure," Navu says, I was hoping that we went to the park, I want to get out of that house already.
"Okay," Cabir & mnk say, surprisingly in unison.
I realize I'm still in an oversized sweater, "I'll be right down, I'm going to change"
(I change into some worn out jeans, a striped, thin, sweater and my old vans).
I walk down the stairs, as I am three quarters down the steps Mnk stops me,
"Well someone's wearing their favorite shoes, ever!" he says, pointing at my shoes. He knew I liked converse better, way better. "Shut up," I say jokingly.
"Anyways," he said, "we're just buying Taco bell,and going to the park,"
"Okay," I run to the divider and grab my lanyard and my phone and run out the door. Mnk was unlocked his car and I jumped in shotgun.
Mnk was driving which meant cabir and Navya sat in the back. We drove to the park first, Mnik dropped Navya and I off to find a place to sit, while cabir and he goes to Taco Bell.
We went in search of some shade. We eventually found one underneath a bigtree. I laid the blanket down when I hear my phone vibrate.

Fr: Mnik- What do you guys want?To: Mnik -A fiery Doritos locos taco and instead of the beef, can I have chicken?
Fr:Manik -Okay, see you in 5.
"Navya? What doyou want from Taco Bell?" as bad as it sounds,(I had forgotten that she was there).
"I texted cabir already," she says. (Relieved, I lay against the tree trunk, ever since this morning I can't help but to think of Senior Year). "Remember Senior Year?" I say
"Yeah!" she says,
"weren't you pro-" she cut herself off.

"I can't get that off of my mind,
I just can't," I say, "Its the past, I got over it, I let Manik even move in with me!
Why can't I just forget about that?"

"Maybe you just like to relive memories, even when they were painful," she says just as cabir and Manik arrive with the food...

Sooo my updates are fr those who cmmntd or shw dere intrst in my stry...
Keeep lvng nd cmmnts frnzzz...lv u all
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Posted: 9 years ago
#32
Thank for continuing with the story.
Loved it.
I wonder what happened in the past.
Eager to read more.
Post the next update soon.
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Posted: 9 years ago
#33
Just read ur story Its amazing
Plz pm me
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Posted: 9 years ago
#34
Ty fr the pm

Seems nandini has a painful past

The senior yr wich she cant get off

N she really wants to share it wid manik in alone

It was awesmm

Will b waiting

Lots of love
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Waaaooo what happend in Nandni's past.
Mystery.
Dear u continue ur story it's awesome and different concept,
When story will move further people will come for this story I'm sure.
God bless u.
Next part soon plz.
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Posted: 9 years ago
#36
Wow...mystery wat hpnd in senior yr...update soon...
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Posted: 9 years ago
#37
I am really liking this story!
Thanks for continuing it!
What happened in her past?
I love the concept!
Reveal the mystery soon!
Thanks for the update
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Posted: 9 years ago
#38
i love ur story
pls try to give index
its a request..
asangel thumbnail
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Posted: 9 years ago
#39
Thnkuu frnz...fr ur precious cmmnts...
Edited by asangel - 9 years ago
asangel thumbnail
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Originally posted by: Crazy8000

Just read ur story Its amazing
Plz pm me






Buddy me for pm..
Edited by asangel - 9 years ago

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