Manan ff- 'Just a ROOM MATE' Chaptr 9A/B updtd.. - Page 3

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Posted: 9 years ago
#21
This is an amazing story!
The concept is totally new!
I love reading it!
So pm me!
Keep writing!
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Posted: 9 years ago
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What a new idea. Roommates.
There will be fun when both will fall for each other.
At the moment manik is very caring and Nandu is pure innocent soul.
Next update soon plz.
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Chapter 3
Part I :-
*Manik's POV*
I wake up around 7, which was awfully early for me. I wake up, go to my bathroom and brush my teeth, and shower, I go change into dark grey jeans, and a pullover.
Nandu gifted me when I reached one year on vine. I get out of my room to the sweet smell of bacon.
I ran downstairs, to see Nandu setting the sizzling bacon on the plates with eggs and potato hash. "Don't worry I made you some too," Nandu smiled.
I smiled, not saying anything. I don't think I fell in love...but Dhruv was right, I was lucky to have her.
She passed me a plate.
"Thanks," I said.
"Welcome," she was really happy today,
"Coffee, or orange juice?"
"Coffee," I liked black coffee, plus the boys were picking me up to go around Cali.
"Wanna come," I ask " with me and the boys to go around Cali?"
"It's fine," she replied.
"Ok," I was upset, well some what upset, because Nandu usually would'nt reject trips like that..

"Say why are you so happy?"
"My cousin is coming today, she fan girls hardcore about you, I am happy you r leaving, because that girl would've watched you in your sleep," she said,
(so thats why she rejected my plans).
"I hope you know I'm coming back," I say,
(her smile falls from her face)

"I dont mind having your cousin around!" I was scared, but I wasnt going to try and hide from her family.
"Well now that you say that its about her and 4 other girls, I thought you would stay with the boys.."she said. eating her eggs.
"Umm we could have like a party, there is four of us and five of you guys," I say.
"Oh, uh okay!" she says.--

*Nandu POV*

I picked up my cousin and our friends after Maddy picked up mank.
[Honestly my cousin, "SOHA" was very close to me, she was my closest friend].

I borrowed Mnk's beat-up van. It had 8 seats, so it fit us. Navya, Soha and I in the front Aliya , mukti at back...
We went to Apple Bee's and caught up...
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Part II :-

We went straight to my house and changed into our pajamas, which was basically our tank tops and shorts. We all had popcorn and watched a movie.
We heard the door knob start to wiggle. Manik had some trouble with his key.
"I'm coming," I yell as violently as I can. I rush to open the door, there I see Manik, Cabir, Maddy, Dhruv nd Aryaman...
"Hey guys!" I hug them all as they come in.
When I hug Cabir, he whispers in my ear "I'm Sorry." I felt bad "
"I forgave you," I said.
We all sat down and talked for a while, we laughed.
"Haha lets play truth or dare" Abhi randomly says.
"I'm in!" All of us say.

We formed a boy-girl circle that went:
Me, Manik, Soha, Navya, Maddy, Dhruv,Aliya, Mukti, Cabir, Abhi settled..
I got to spin the bottle and it landed on Mukti. "Mukti", truth or dare?
" I say, I cant help but to think of the perfect dare.
"Truth" she replies and the devious smirk on my face wipes off. I thought, then figured this would've been the perfect truth.
"Who would you think would be the best kisser out of the guys?"
I knew she'd probably pick Abhi, she hada HUGE crush on him.
She examined the boys lips very carefully...
"Abhi," she said. I knew it.
"Wanna test that theory?" Abhi asked, I feel like he liked her too, although he was pretty devious.

"Okay!" Abhi locked his lips on hers and they were going at it for a good 2 minutes.
"Get a room! ;)" Dhruv says,
Mukti breaks the kiss, she was red hot, I couldnt help but laugh.

Mukti spinned the bottle, she was still red hot, it landed on Maddy, he dare was to body slam Cabir ;)...
It was the funniest thing.
In the end: I had to eat a mix of cheese,corn and coconut water.

Dhruv confessed he would date either Aliya or me, which was pretty awkward.
Manik had to grind on the floor.. (dared by my cousn, of course.).

"Ok, well there is 3 bedrooms, a loft upstairs with a bed and 2 long couches.
There is two pull up beds and a recliner here. That makes nine. Who's sharing my bedroom?"
Mnk hugged my arm before I finished my sentence.
"Well, okay then, I guess its me and Mnk in my room then," I say while everyone laughed, Mnk was still hugging onto my arm for dear life.

Mukti and Abhi shared a room, which was obvious to me after the kiss.
Dhruv and Aliya got the last room. Cabir, Maddy, Soha nd Navya decidd just to take the loft ups...
"So its basically couples get the rooms?" Cabir says.
"None of us are together," I say. We all walked to our respective rooms.
I lay on the bed, look at Manik and say
"Let's hope no one takes pictures." he laughs.
I turn off the lights and fall to sleep... :) :p
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Part III:-

I wake up to Manik moaning the words "Babe" and "Baby" in his sleep. I put on my glasses to check the time. It was 3:38.
I tap Manik's Back, he is unwilling to wake up. He is a really heavy sleeper. I scooch up to his ear and start to shake him.
"Wake up Manik!" I say.
He snorts in fear,and I laugh.

"What?" he seems annoyed.
"You kept saying Babe-"( I hear someone say babe again),

"Did you hear that?"I turn on the lights, and listen carefully.
Its coming from downstairs.

I run downstairs to see Cabir there, red hot and sweaty, with Navya...

They werent kissing, she was trying to calm him down.
NAVYA, which I called Navu, was sweet, and caring. She had a happy sense of humor...
She was closer to me than Aliya, but I hung out with Aliya alot more, because Navya was always busy...

"Navuu!" I yell, she looks over to me with a concerned look,
"Is everything alright?"
"I've been trying to calm him down since like 1:30 am, its not working," Navya said,"I've been trying to wake him up,
"I knew just what would wake him up, although it wasnt the nicest way, it would wake him up and cool him off. I run through the hallway leading into the kitchen to grab a tall glass of ice cold water and run back into the living room, spilling the water as I run.
"I'm sorry Cabir," I say as I pour the icy water onto his face.
He immediately wakes up, like he's been shocked.
"Are you okay?" Navya says, concerened, but relieved,
"I was trying to wake-"
"I'm fine Navya, I really am" he says, water dripping onto his basket ball shorts, "I just don't think I will go back to sleep."
"I dont think any of us can," I say "Lets all just go up to my room and watch a movie or something?" I"I'll go get the icecream!" Navya runs to the kitchen.
Cabir wipes his shirt on his face and runs up the stairs.
I help Navya with what looked like 8 tubs of icecream.We went upstairs and sat on on my bed...
Manik woke up from all the commotion, so he joined our little group. I closed the doors and closed the lights so no one hears us.
We went on Netflix with my laptop hooked up to the TV. We used up a good three minutes debating whether to watch a horror movie or Pokemon, when it started to thunder and rain. When the first lightning strike shined through the window of our room, Navya hugged onto Cabir's chest.
It was a cute moment, they looked into each others eyes, the second lightning strike glimmered in both of their eyes.
"Sorry," she said, pushing herself away slightly then brushing herself off, "I'm sort a scared of that stuff, and horror movies.
" I knew she was lying about the horror movies,she loves them,she was just startled by the thunder.

We ended up finishing the 4 quarts of ice-cream, while watching the Simpsons, something we all really didnt mind watching. cabir ended up snuggling toward Navya, like a teddy bear...
I couldnt help but stare at them. They were really meant together, they made a cute couple, and their personalities matched each other perfectly. They were..., well..., perfect.
If I had the chance to be in a relationship like that, I would take it.

Done!!!! Fnlly khtm...I thkn its long ...h na??? Now i also want ur long long cmmnts...Thnkuu...
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Thank you so much for such a long update.
Loved it so much.
Post the next update soon .
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Its amazing...
Waiting for the next. ?
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Posted: 9 years ago
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NOTE:-

Hi Frnzz... Sorry to say dat ..But M not Happiee wid d response of urs ...I askd u whethr should i cntinue my stry or not..still u guys did'nt respnd...If u r nt intrstd soo plz let me knw cz i'll nt be able to cntiue y stry if u guz dnt respnd or cmmnts...So plz tell me whethr u ent me to cntinue or not????
Edited by asangel - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Please continue.
We are loving this ff.
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Chapter 4
Part I
*Nandu's POV*
After we watched all the season of The Simpsons, I check the time to find its 9:00. I really didn't have the energy to cook, with waking up 3 in the morning and all.
I wearily get up out the bed.
"What are you doing?" Mnk asked, he was always the one to question everything.
"Hopefully try and cook breakfast," I yawned. I put oversized sweater that went over my shorts. As I walkdown the steps, trying not to disturb any of the girls upstairs, when I feel a slight tug on my shoulder.
I turn around and slap the person behind me. It was Navya.
"Oh my god I am soo sorry! It's become a force of habit. Are you okay?" I whisper loudly.
"I'm fine, don't worry about it," she says,
"I wanted to help you make breakfast."
"Oh, uh okay," I like cooking alone, but there was 9 teens in the house, I needed some of the help.
"What are we cooking?" Navya says, she was a curious one.
"French Toast," I say, French toast was the first real food I learned to cook.
I learned from my mom, her cooking made the house smell so good.I crack the eggs and whisk them while Navu cut the baguette.

I put the cooking spray and dipped the baguette in the egg mix then put them on the stove.
We finished in 50 minutes. That was fast and we made a lot, 2 for each person. Wealso made bacon and eggs,because who doesn't want to wake up to the smell of bacon and eggs?
"Perfect" Navu holds her hand up for a high five when Cabir and Manik run down the stairs.

They wake up the boys, all of them slowly get up, one by one. I go to wake the girls up to see that they were already awake.
"Lets go to eat!" I say, as joyfully as I can at 10:00, "We have french toast!" They get up wearily, I went to the rooms to wake up Maddy, Abhi, Mukti, Aliya nd Soha.

I open my cousin's door, walk toward's Dhrv ,and give him a push.

"Wake up guys" I say, when Mukti walks toward the door.
"I smell French toast, so I woke up," she was jokingly devoted to food. I smile.
"It's downstairs,"I say.
I assume Mukti woke Abhi up, so I walk out the room and continue downstairs to help Navya pass out breakfast.
I came downstairs to see almost everyone helping themselves to the food on the table. I sit on the head of the table, when mnk takes the seat to the right of me.
I quietly ate my food, it was actually really good.
"Hey," Mnk says, stuffing his mouth full of bacon.
"You got a little something right there," pointing to my neck.
I look down, attempting to see what was there in the first place.
Mnk hit my nose, which made me smile.
"Good, you look better smiling," he gave a cheesy smile.
He always did that to me when we were in high school. I actually liked my high school years, well until the end of senior year.
Senior Year, filled with regret,sorrow, and a bittersweet happiness. My smile quickly faded, and my thoughts filled with Senior year.

"Did I hurt you?!! Mnk, looked concerned, a little more than he should've been,

"What's wrong?""I'll tell you when nobody's here,
" I was reminded about my darkest days
"Please, just leave me alone, just for right now."
( I didn't want him near me at this point).
Mnk lookedat me confused, I wantd to tell him, but not in front of evrybdy.

He got up and walked away. Navya sat in that seat, she was the one that really only knew everything about me, I was really close to her during high school.

"You okay?" she says.
"I'm fine," I say, dejavu.

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