Manan FF : Will u be my Girlfriend /LINK TO THREAD 2 PAGE 1 - Page 88

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Part 18 A :

Next morning :

All the malhotras along with nandini were having breakfast when Dj said looking at Mukthi and Nandini

"bacchon kal tum logon ka freshers hai na.." and both excitedly nodded their heads in yes and she continued "toh tum ek kaam karo mukthi sarae ladkiyon ko yahan pae bula lo... saath mai tayyar hokae chalae jana... kyu ???" and mukthi said "yeah dj mai bhi yahi soch rahi thi... sab ek saath ready hongae toh kitna accha hoga... aur maza bhi aayaega...mai abhi un logon ko call karthi hun..." saying this mukthi picked up her cell to inform others while nandini was lost thinking something noticing which Nyonika who was sitting beside her asked lovingly stroking her hair " kya hua nandu beta... kuch kha kyu nahi rahi tu... accha nahi laga kya ???" nandini didn't look at her but nodded her head in a NO and now this caught everyone's attention. Raj and Dadu Dj and Nyonika looked at each other and then at nandini

"beta kuch bol na kya hua ???" dj again asked and nandini said getting up from her chair "mai bas abhi aayi.." and ran away to her room before anyone could stop her

"kya hua issae.. kal tak toh theek hi thi.." Nyonika said worriedly

"mujhae pata hai.." manik said breaking the silence and all looked at him in surprise and he continued " vo morning uski mom ka call aaya tha... tab sae she is upset... shayad unhae miss kar rahi ho..." he mumbled in a low tone and all sighed in relief as they thought she was upset staying here.

"mai Kishore sae baath karta hun... is weekend holi hai naa.. toh ill ask them to join us.. koi usae kuch bhi math batana... surprise karangae usko.. what say.." raj said and winked at mukthi and manik and they returned the favour back by showing thumbs up.

Nandini came down washing her face and plastering a smile on her face. Yes she was really missing her parents. She spoke to her mom this morning and she was missing them more now. All tried to cheer her up by cracking jokes and lightening the atmosphere and were quite successful in doing so.

Manik entered mukhni's room where they were packing their bags and getting ready for college and signalled mukthi to go out and she went without letting nandini notice the same. Nandini was standing near the window looking out and was stuffing her bag with all the books on the table. Manik slowly walked towards her and turned her to face him and hugged her tightly. she too responded the hug with equal force and he said in a low tone kissing her hair "missing mumma and papa..?" to which she nodded her head in a yes and he tightened his grip around her and nandini dug her face more into his shirt.

"don't feel sad naa... see hum sab hai na yahan tumharae paas... tumhae humharae saath rehna pasand nahi hai kya ???" and suddenly nandini broke the hug and looked at him in shock and said "manik tum aaisae keh bhi kaisae saktae ho... I really do love staying with u all... but aaj na mumma ki bahuth yaad aa rahi hai.. bas isiliyae..." and looked down with tears forming in her eyes. He pulled her more closer and embraced her tightly and kissed her hair to calm her down and after few minutes she said

"okay now chalo... we are getting late.." and wiped her tears. He smiled seeing her and said kissing her forehead "ok.. get ready.. im waiting in parking.."

In college :

Class after class and continuous labs had tired the gang to core. Mukthi Nandini Navya Soha settled in the canteen for lunch when navya said

"humhae apni amma ki baath sunni chahiyae thi... mana kiya tha unhonae MBBS kae liyae but hum apni zid pae thae ki banangae toh Doctor hi banangae.. aur yeh raha natija... yaar ek din mai itta sara kaam.. phir labs aur exam schedule bhi announce ho gaya hai.. hey mata rani... bacha lo humhae..."

"itna stress math lo navya.. warna Doctor sae pehalae patient ban jaogi..." soha said and rest all giggled

"yaar but uff... mai toh thak gayi hun... upar sae yeh summers... uff.. its getting dam hot now-a-days..." mukti said in an annoyed tone

"haan yaar... itni garmi hai ki... man kartha hai thandae pani ka bath tub arrange karae management instead of the chairs we sit.." nandini said and winked at them and all laughed at her comment. Soon the second year students ( Manik Cabir Dhruv Aliya Abhi Aaryaman Harshad ) also joined them ( remember guys.. mukthi nandini soha and navya are the first year students and rest all are second year one's )

"hey whats up.." Abhi said in a joyous tone and mukthi smiled weakly to which he said "kya hua.. yeh tum sab kae cherae pae 12 kyu bajae hai...?" and mukthi narrated everything. Abhi took her in a side hug and she snuggled more in him and kissed her forehead and said "so my baby is tired...?" and she nodded her head in a yes and Abhi continued "its okay.. don't stress yourself... im there na.." and all awed looking at them when cabir said settling beside navya with a tray of juices in his hand

"ab yeh aww aww section ko break do aur yeh fresh chilled juice ko enjoy karo..." and all jumped on the glasses as thirsty cows and emptied it in few seconds and Dhruv said

"u r a saviour cabir... maza aa gaya..." and hugged him to which cabir made a face and said "mai Aliya nahi hun.. chi chi... ab kiss bhi karaega kya.." and pushed him making all laugh when again cabir felt someone hugging him and he said "dhruv yaar mujhae pata hai kit u mujhsae pyaar kartha hai but PDA ki zaroorath nahi hai.. chod mujhae.." and when the person didn't leave him he opened his eyes and turned to look at the person and said " Ridhimma tum... tum kab aayi..?" and looked at navya who was crushing the poor tissue in her hand and others giggled looking at his condition. Manik winked at nandini and she was back with a revenge plan "navya don't u think yeh dono kuch zyada hi close hai... matlab jab dekho hug kae bina hello hota hi nahi hai in dono ka.." nandini whispered in navya's ears adding fuel to the already blazing fire and navya stood up with a jerk and walked away. Cabir seeing all this turned to Ridhimma and said "yaar Ridhu.. tu humesha hug kyu karthi hai... meri wali rudthkae chali gayi.." and he mumbled the last line which wasn't clearly audible to ridhima and she said "kya bol rahae ho cabir... hum do saal sae dost hai.. ab bhi tum waisae hi college starting days ki tarah hai hello bologae kya.." cabir sighed and said "yeah yeah... but aagae sae hug math karo... atleast canteen mae nahi.." and leaned towards her ear to whisper the last line "sab dekh kae jalangae naa..." and moved back and winked at her and left from there to find navya. Ridhima joined the rest of gang and all were talking about the freshers party but manan were busy in a phone convo

N : record kiya sab kuch ???

M : jii MADAM kiya mainae.. aur kuch..?

N (smirking ) : so ek toh ho gaya.. whoz next ..??

M : tum bolo.. my plan is ready...

N : next Dhruv Abhi and Aaryaman together... ONE SHOT THREE BIRDS

M (smirks) : okay but for that.. you need to wait... aaj kae liyae itna kafi hai.. baki ka plan kal party kae baad ...

N : yes.. is baar freshers sab ko yaad rehna chahiyae...

M : it will indeed be memorable...

All girls decided to meet at malhotras mansion except soha as she decided to come with Aaryaman directly and they dispersed for the day after attending the remaining lectures.

Night at malhotras mansion :

After dinner Nyonika came to mukthi and nandini's room and said " nandu beta ek baar marae saath neechae chalaegi.." to which nandini nodded a yes confusingly and left with Nyonika and mukthi was also confused as to what the matter could be.

In Raj and Nyonika's room :

Raj and Nyonika were sitting on the bed with nandini in front of them and she looked at them with questioning expression

" beta u are happy na in this house ?? manik tujhae pareshan toh nahi kar raha naa" raj asked looking at her and she nodded her head in a yes for the first question and No for the second one.

" toh subah itni upset kyun thi..?" Nyonika asked her now

"vo mai.. mumma aur papa ko mis kar rahi thi.." nandini said looking down and Nyonika cupped her cheeks and said " nandu.. u are equal to us just like manik and mukthi... beta if u are uncomfortable even with a single thing u are free to express... hum tumhae kuch bhi nahi bolangae... balki if u hide we will feel bad that we couldn't love you enough that tum ab bhi humhae paraya maan rahi ho..." to which nandini immediately nodded a NO and said " nahi nahi aunty aaisi baath nahi hai... im really happy here..." and hugged Nyonika and she too hugged her back. After breaking the hug Nyonika cupped her cheek and asked "ek baath bolungi manaegi..??" and nandini nodded her head in a yes and Nyonika said leaving a deep breath

"tu na.. yeh aunty uncle chod dae.. jaisae tu dj aur dadu bolthi hai na waisae hi hum dono ko bhi mom and dad bula... kyu ki tu koi bahar wali nahi balki humhari ghar ki beti hai ab... okay.." and nandini looked at her with a blank expression and whispered "mom... dad..." in a dazed tone and raj said "haan mom and dad... theek hai.. chal ab ja.. so ja.. kal party hai na.." and kissed her forehead lovingly and she too got up and came out of the room wishing them good night and walked straight to her room only to find a panicked bro-sis. As soon as she entered they charged her with questions

"kya hau.. kyu bulaya..??" mukthi asked looking her lost and nandini mumbled " mom dad.." and manik said "haan mom dad... kya kaha un dono nae.." and she looked at both of them and said " they asked me to call them mom dad" and smiled finally after repeating the word for about 100 times in the last 15 minutes and the bro-sis duo sighed in relief and hugged the little one making her suffocate and broke the hug after 10 long minutes. Manik kissed both mukthi and nandini's forehead and again hugged them tightly and they too reciprocated the hug. a hug symbolising their love assurance and the feeling of togetherness a hug that gives them strength mentally and says no matter what im there with you...

And after sometime manan were lying on manik's bed hugging each other. Nandini was completely lying on him and manik was playing with her hair when nandini suddenly asked looking at him " manik tumhae itna gussa kyu aata hai..?" to which he shrugged his shoulders and said " bas aa jata hai.." and looked away. She slapped him hard on his arm and said "tumnae bae wajah mujhpae chillaya kal college mai.. u know tumnae ittae zor sae pakada mujhae ki marae shoulders pae marks padh gayae.. see.." and pointed at her shoulder which was visible because of her sleeveless top. He looked at them guiltily and said " sorry.." in a low tone and she said "u better be.. and don't u dare repeat this impulsive behaviour.. warna punch zaroor milaega..." and moved from his top and laid on the bed beside him, now manik was facing her back. Manik's eyes for once didn't move from those marks. He was really guilty for acting so impulsive. He slowly leaned towards her and gently brushed his lips on those marks making nandini gasp with his act and she clutched the bed sheet tight in her fists. He placed feather kisses along with sorry with each kiss and nandini was just lost in his touch. He moved to the other shoulder and continued his sweet torture and all nandini could do was moan his name slowly. After kissing all her marks he eyed her lips and again mumbled a sorry over them before placing his on hers and for a sec nandini was too shocked to react and finally responded equally and both slept cuddling each other after breaking the kiss.

Same night - other side :

Navya's room door was being knocked continuously and she got up sleepily rubbing her eyes as she wondered who could come at that time of night. She opened the door and before she could scream cabir palmed her mouth and entered the room locking the door. And said " navya relax its me.." and navya calmed down and pushed his hand from her mouth and said in a loud whisper " cabir jii.. aap kya kar rahae ho yahan.. warden dekhaegi toh maar dalaegi... jayiyae..." and cabir sat on her bed carelessly and said " toh kya.. mai thodi na dartha hun un logon sae.." navya moved towards him and tried hard pushing him off the bed but failed doing so and said "kyu aayae hai aap yahan..?" and cabir pulled her to sit beside him and said " tumsae baath karnae.." and navya turned her face away and said " humhae koi baath nai karni aapsae..."

" Navya look at me yaar... tumhae kyu gussa aata hai jab Ridhima mujhae hug karthi hai... and this is not the first time u are angry about this.. bolo tumhae kyu gussa aata hai.." cabir was straight to the point and navya started looking here and there and got up and said "humhae koi baath nahi karni.. aap jayaiyae yahan sae.." but cabir was adamant this time. He pulled her back and said " not this time navya.." and navya sighed and said "nahi pata.." and cabir said "what..?" and navya got annoyed and said in a loud tone " what kya what.. nahi pata humhae ki kyu gussa aata hai humhae... bas aata hai.. mil gaya jawab ab jayiyae..."

"accha tab toh mai bilkul bhi nahi hilnae wala yahan sae.." cabir said crossing his arms on his chest and navya sighed again looking at him adjusting himself on her bed lying down

"kya chahiyae cabir...?" she asked in a defeated tone and cabir smirked an getting a positive step and said " you.." looking into her eyes and an unknown blush crept her cheeks and she looked away. He moved deadly close to her and said "maaf kiya..." to which she nodded a yes and in excitement he kissed her both cheeks making her go all red and said " thank you.. now u sleep.. mai chaltha hun.. tomorrow afternoon ill come to pick u up and ill drop u at nandini's house.. be ready by 4..." and left her room.

part 18 B :

Next day :

Everyone was happy with Raj Nyonika and Nandini's decision of calling them mom and dad. The rest of the day passed in casual chit chatting and all other routine stuffs.

It was a holiday as there was party in the evening and all girls gathered in malhotras mansion for getting ready and were in Mukthi and Nandini's room.

"yaar ill be the last getting ready tum sab pehalae tayyar ho jao... im least interested in these stuff..." nandini said lying on the bed and closed her eyes.

"nandu agar humhari wajah sae late ho gaya na.. toh bhai nahi chodangae... im telling you.." mukthi warned her but nandini didn't move an inch

Aliya mukthi and navya started getting ready first they changed into the clothes and aliya and mukthi were helping navya with the makeup and hair and the first one to get ready was navya

"kaisae lag rahae hai hum..?" she asked turning towards nandini and that's when they noticed her... she was fast asleep. Navya slapped her forehead and moved to her bed to wake her

" nandu utho.. tayyar hona hai..."

"5 more minutes navya.. please.." and turned to the other side

"tum rehnae do navya... I know how to wake her up..." and winked at aliya and navya and they got her intentions. Aliya suddenly said in a loud tone " hey manik..." and that was it for nandini... she got up and sat with a jerk and said "im ready.. just 5 minutes.." and got down the bed hurriedly. And when all the 3 girls laughed she understood that she got tricked again. Nandini tapped her foot and moved to the washroom taking her clothes and the trio were doing the touch up's. after 15 minutes nandini came out wearing her lehanga and all smiled seeing her looking cute in that baby pink dress. In the next 20 minutes aliya on one side and mukthi on the other hurried in getting her decked up as the deadline which manik gave them was coming close.

Down in the lounge :

"yaar mai shayad yahi pae so bhi jaunga lekin yeh madam's ready nahi hongae.." cabir said looking at his watch for the nth time and all nodded in agreement.

"pata nahi itna time kyu lagtha hai inhae... humhae dekh.. yuh gayae dress pehan li aur ready ho gayae..." dhruv said adjusting the collar of his kurtha

"haan yaar... ruk mai ek baar mukthi ko call kartha hun.." Abhi said pulling his cell from the pocket when manik said

"ill drag them out of the room if it takes more than 10 minutes.. inka deadline khatam hokae 30 minutes ho gayae hai.. aura b tak naamu nishan bhi nahi in madam's ka.."

And was about to get up when he heard their laughs and giggles and all boys turned to look at their partners and the moment their eyes fell on the girls their jaw dropped to the floor

"beautiful..." escaped from their mouths in unision.

Soon the girls reached them and stood infront of their partners.

"lets go.. aaisae ghur kyu rahae ho..???" mukthi asked looking at abhi who was looking at her without blinking his eyes and her voice brought them from their respective La-La lands.

"yeah... chalo.. we are getting late..." manik said looking here and there as nandini caught him staring her.

"kinnae sonae lag rahae hai marae sab bacchae... inhae kisi ki nazar na lagae.." dj said walking towards them and all hugged her together and dropped kisses on her cheeks making her laugh heartily .

" seedhae ghar aana party kae baad.. theek hai.." dadu said walking towards them and all nodded obediently like school kids

"take care bacchon..." Nyonika said waving them bye and all of them returned the favour by " okay..." and left for the party.

Attires :

Manik:

Nandini:

Mukthi:

Abhi:

Cabir:

Navya:

Aliya:

Dhruv:

Aaryaman (left) & Harshad ( right) :

Soha:

College arrangements :

Every student of space was present there and the party was on full swing. The DJ of that night asked everyone to join the dance floor and fab5 navni and abhi along with Aaryaman soha and harshad reached the dance floor.

Dance floor :

Soft music was being played and all the couples for the couple dance. All boys suddenly left the dance floor leaving baffled girls and winked at each other before leaving and whispered something in the DJ's ears and he showed thumbs up to cabir and he joined back navya and suddenly the music stopped for few seconds and again started and all heard manik's voice

[ its a request.. please play the song... its mai kya karu from Barfi...! ]

Manik sang looking into nandini's eyes : Dil yeh mera
Bas mein nahin
cabir sang and winked looking at navya and she blushingly looked away

Pehele kahbi Aisa hota tha nahin..

Abhi sang holding mukthi close Hun..dil yeh mera
Bas mein nahin
Dhruv sang nodding his head as if meaning the same

Pehele kahbi
Aisa hota tha nahin
Manik continued Tuhi bata
Iss dil ka main
Ab kya karoon..

Cabir joined Umn.. kehene pe
Chalta nahin
dhruv sang Kuch dinon se
Meri bhi sunta nahi
Tu hi bata
abhi continued Iss dil.. ka main
Uff ab main kya karoon

Manik(looking at nandini) :Main kya karoon

Cabir(looking at navya): Main kya karoon

Abhi(looking at mukthi) :Main kya karoon

Dhruv(looking at aliya): Main kya karoon

Harshad(looking at soha): Main kya karoon

Aaryaman (sadly) :Main kya karoon
Iss dil ka kya karoon

Manik(looking at nandini) :Main kya karoon

Cabir(looking at navya): Main kya karoon

Abhi(looking at mukthi) :Main kya karoon

Dhruv(looking at aliya): Main kya karoon

Harshad(looking at soha): Main kya karoon

Aaryaman (sadly) :Main kya karoon

(music) the couples danced according to music and all others left the floor to watch them

Manik again sang pulling nandini close by waist

Karta hai, awaargi
Iss pe toh dhun chadhi
Hai pyaar ki
Aaryaman sang sadly looking around jaane Gum hai kahan
Baaton mein hai pada
Bekaar ki

Harshad sang looking at soha

Karta hai, awaargi
Iss pe toh dhun chadhi
Hai pyaar ki

Abhi sang nodding his head sadly making mukthi giggle

naa jaane Gum hai kahan
Baaton mein hai pada
Bekaar ki

Dhruv sang winking at aliya naughtily as if he really meant that

Ulti yeh baat hai
Aise halaat hai
Ghalti kare yeh
Main bharu
manik sang and all joined him with their partners

Uff dil ka main kya karoon

Main kya karoon

Main kya karoon

Main kya karoon

Main kya karoon

Main kya karoon

Main kya karoon

(all boys sang together dancing with their partners )

Iss dil ka kya karoon

Main kya karoon

Main kya karoon

Main kya karoon

Main kya karoon

Main kya karoon

The song ended and all clapped for the boy's performance and the principal announced for the dinner. They had a peaceful dinner with loads of praising teasing and leg pulling session. In the whole party cabir was all time alert whenever ridhimma was around. He used to either run away or hide somewhere if she used to come and ask his friends about him. Finally after the party was called off manik nandini and mukthi returned their home. Aliya went with dhruv and cabir dropped navya.

In manik's room :

Both were lying on the bed. Manik was back hugging nandini and she was just humming the song which manik sang and suddenly

"manik tum kitna accha gatae ho.." nandini said turning towards him and he smiled at her compliment

"thank you.." he said in a low tone and she again smiled. The smile never left her lips from the moment she heard his voice in college.

Nandini moved a little more close to his face and kissed his forehead and manik closed his eyes feeling her lips on his skin. Nandini traced his cheek with her finger when manik said pulling her more close by waist

"kya baath hai.. aaj kuch zyada hi pyaar aa raha hai...?" and she blushed red on hearing "pyaar" and lowered her gaze.

"arae bolo naa..." he said lifting her face with his fingers making her look at him and nandini didn't speak a word but was just looking into his eyes searching for something in them and manik was lost in her big doe eyes.

Manik leaned more and closed the distance between their lips and both were kissing with so much passion that no one was ready to leave the other. The kiss grew deeper and passionate with passing second and manik came over her pinning nandini's hands to the bed. After what seemed like forever they broke the kiss panting hard and manik rested his forehead on her's . both had their eyes closed and a smile playing on lips. Manik opened his eyes and cupped her cheeks and thought " I LOVE YOU NANDINI..." as if heard the same nandini too opened her eyes and cupped his face and kissed his forehead and thought " I LOVE YOU TOO MANIK..."

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