Manan FF : Will u be my Girlfriend /LINK TO THREAD 2 PAGE 1

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Hello friends.. this is my first ever OS.. if u find it interesting do let me know..ill continue.. here goes the prologue..


There was chaos all around the canteen in the of The SPACE Academy of Medical Sciences. All the students gathered in the canteen and saw the never seen thing ever in the history of SPACE. Four boys were kneeling down and two girls were standing beside them. A girl was sitting on the table in front of them with her legs crossed. All the boys heads were hung down and the girls with them were biting their nails in anxiety. Suddenly the girl sitting in front of them on the table spoke

"so lets start from you.. tell me whats your name ?" she asked pointing towards the first guy in front of her. He was cute wearing a hat and the boy replied

"i..i..im Dhruv..Dhruv vedanth..second year MBBS.."

"ok..chalo next u..tell me whats ur name..?" she asked the next boy..he was cool and quite funky

"hey pretty lady..im Cabir Dhawan..second year MBBS" he replied cheerfully Although they were kneeling down he managed to say those words as polite as possible

"aww..thanks for the compliment..next u tell me your name..?" she asked the boy next to cabir. He was the most handsome one of all. His eyes were spitting fire as if he would set the whole world on fire. He directly looked into the girls eyes, they were big round and doe eyes. For a moment he lost himself in those eyes

"oh..hello..mr.daydreamer I don't have the whole day for u.. stop staring me and tell me your name.." she asked finding him lost..

He composed himself and mentally slapped himself for getting caught in front of everyone and said

"im Manik Malhotra..second year MBBS"

"that's nice..and u" she said pointing towards the last member of the line "do I need to give u a special invitation..common stop wasting my time tell me your name..?"

"hi..im Abhimanyu Thakkar..second year BDS" he replied looking at the girl beside him who was giving deadly glares to the girl sitting if front of them.

As all the people were gathered in the canteen seeing the sight in front of them some froze at their places..some pinched themselves for confirming that they were not dreaming..some ran away from the place in fear..some were enjoying the seen in front of them. One of such people gathered there spoke to the person beside him "yaar kaun hai yae ladki.. collage kae pehalae hi din..Fab5 aur uskae doston ko sabkae samnae keeldown karwaya aur unkae hi style mai unhiko ragging kar rahi hai..manna padaega ..kuch tho hai iss ladki mai.. Manik Malhotra ko bhi iskae samnae jhuka diya..dekhthae hai aaj aur kya kya dekhnae ko milaega.."


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So any gusses who was the girl..

funny na fab5 in a medical collage..

more fun to come...

part 1 pg 4 & 5
part 2 pg 10
part 3 pg 16
Character Sketch pg 21
part 4 pg 24
part 5 pg 29
part 6 pg 38
part 7 pg 43
part 8 pg 51
part 9 pg 56
part 10 pg 60
part 11 pg 67
part 12A & B pg 74
part 13 pg 85
part 14 pg 91
part 15A pg 100
part 15B pg 108
part 16 A B & C pg 118
Part 17 pg 131
Part 18 pg 138


thread two
https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/kaisi-yeh-yaariaan/4629067/2manan-ff-will-u-be-my-girlfriend-part-27-pg-39-and-spl-update-pg

if u like it..plz hit likes and comment.. so that ill decide to continue or not..

take care..

keep smiling..

loads of love..

neeraja...😊

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Posted: 9 years ago
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I just loved it ...plz continue ...ofcourse the girl is nandini only she has the power to mend manik ...super exciting ...haha nandini is ragging fab-5 hahahah ...plz do continue ...love u itnaaa saraaa ... Thanks for the pm ...with lots of love and hugs
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Posted: 9 years ago
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awesome concept...

loved it so much...

cant wait to see what happens next...

keep up the good work and continue soon...

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Posted: 9 years ago
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awesome prologue dear.
it's seems so interesting.
cont soon and plz pm when you update.
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Please update soon can't wait for it

Obviously it's nandu murty



Egerly waiting for knowing the reason



Please if possible pm me
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Posted: 9 years ago
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FRANKLY SPEAKING, I AM REALLY EXCITED... UPDATE SOON...
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Hey interesting prologue...do continue soon... ⭐️ 👏
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I just loved it. Please update sooon.
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Very interesting
Continue soon
N pm me
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super update soon...
i have a request.plz mention members of fab5 name,,iam confused

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